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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#471

a fab update Shay...

so anjali is alive and knows about khushi too...but the one who got admitted was it their mother with same name???

the way they showed care to each other and the way they are letting themselves be them...the arnav and khushi they are not infront of world but deep down in their heart its just amazingly written...

loved the update...lol khushi's instant reaction always leave arnav in mind boggling states :D

and the flow thingy...i dint understand it actually but what i love is the FF and the updates and definitely the way u present it...and no doubt i enjoy them a lot...so Shay big hugs for giving YLME and HAM...

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#472

Broken nose? I couldn't help but laugh. 😆

So Anjali and Arnav seem to have gotten over a really depressing past.

It's intriguing.

Anyways, i love how Khushi is not the chirpy and bubbly girl like the normal stories.

She also has her issues. And Arnav is helping her discover the "woman" in her.

This pair is caring towards each other. But quite domestic, like cooking and tucking in.

Precap seems interesting. Do continue soon.

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mylifedesi

@mylifedesi

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#473

oh man, i just found this and may i say it's fabulous!! i love this blend of khushi and arnav. The shy and demure woman khushi mixed with the confident and gutsy doctor khushi. And this Arnav is just as amazing. I kind of enjoy his confidence and arrogance mixed with his on occasion vulnerability and sweetness with khushi. The duo as a whole are amazing and kind of different in comparison to how they are normally portrayed. They are both effortlessly one of the best in the field and share a similar history, yet drastically different in other areas. Love the story and I can't wait to read more. Keep up the amazingness and I look forward to the remainder of the story unwinding. 👏

P.S.

Love Khushi's house!! Where did u find it?

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#474

Finished all the latest updates of Heart is a Mess! Thoroughly enjoyed it! Now this story in add to YLME is also my favorite. Thanks for pms and keep it up.

I have not followed skyfall. I think long back I read 1st chap. Then you made Khushi shoot Arnav and I couldn't bear to read further. That was the only chapter you had written. But maybe I will also catch up with that! You are amazing writer. Love reading your stuff. Keep it up!!

on ylme thread I asked for update there, now I request update here as well!!

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aeyshaalim

@aeyshaalim

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#475

Awesome update
Love the way anji was warning arnav

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pm2rose

@pm2rose

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#476

you know i am such a fool i have been reading the updates backwards ..i mean i started of with ch 9 and felt did i miss anything ..maybe but still went on and today i read the whole of ch 8 ..enjoyed it to bits especially khushi's beautiful house ...their cooking together and his thanking her by kissing her ..it was all lovely ..then i scrolled down the blog and came across ch 7 then it hit me that i had messed up all the chapters ..never the less enjoying the story 😆

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Hina malik

@HinaMalik91

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#477

Just read last 2 chapters.they r fabulous.their relationship is building very well.amazingly written.thanks 4 pm

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-Shalu-

@-Shalu-

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#478

Hello, I just came across your story yesterday and I'm so glad I did! I finished reading this SS in one go and what a delightfully lovely story! I had so much fun reading this, I love this alternate universe setting and your version of Khushi.

You write very well and I can't wait to check out the FF that you mentioned. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter, btw may I request for a pm for the updates? I certainly don't want to miss out on your stories, thanks in advance. :)

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Drkk

@Drkk

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#479

dis is amazing. Luvd anji arnav convrsatn. Waitng 4 more

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pm2rose

@pm2rose

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#480

ch 7

sorry dear ..i don't know in which order i am reading this SS but i am loving whatever i am reading 😆..glad shagun made her realize and accept that she likes him ..ohh he waited for her so long with the flowers ..it's really very sweet of him 🤗..my heart warmed up at his gesture ..now what is wrong with anjali ..hope nothing serious ..sorry again for reading and commenting randomly

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