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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 6(a)

next day

In Sanjeevni

(all gang in Kirti's cabin except rdx and nicole)

Kirti:Good morning...doctors...

All:good morning Dr. kirti...

Kirti:aap log soch rhe hoge ki maine aap sab ko achanak yahan kyo bulaya well jaise ki aap jaante hai christmas aane wala hai aur aap sab k bohot se plans bhi hoge...toh aap apne saare plans cancel kar dijiye...

(All in shock are yaar apne saare plans cancel kar diye shock toh lagega hi na )

neha:but why...Dr.Kirti...us din toh humara off hai...humne aapko pehle se leave bhi di thi...

Kirti:yes Dr.neha...aap sab ka off hota hai lekin aap bhul rhi hai aap doctor hai aur doctor ko kabhi bhi emergency aa sakti hai but don't worry ye koi emergency nhi hai ...har saal ki tarah is saal bhi doctors ki team lonavla Sanjeevni orphanage jayegi lekin is saal aap sab ko waha jaane k liye choose kiya hai hum sab ka maanna hai aap sab young doctors hai aur aap sab k saath humare interns aur specially orphanage k bache ache se mix up ho jayenge aur aap shayad unhe wo khusiyan de paaye jo aaj tak wo miss kar rhe hai...main jaanti hu aap sabko bohot dukh hoga apne plans cancel karne main lekin christmas ka matlab sirf parties karna ya church jaakar candles jalana toh nhi hota na christmas ka matlab toh khusiyan batna hota hai aur hum jaante hai wo khushi aap sab ache se un bacho ko denge...and believe me isse sirf un bacho ko hi nhi aap sab ko bhi bohot khushi milegi...jaane k liye hum aapko force nhi karenge final decision aapka hi hoga ki aapko party karni hai ya un bacho k saath christmas celebrate kar k unhe thodi si khushi deni...

rey:Dr.Kirti hum sab jaroor jaayenge...

All:yes dr.kirti...

Kirti:thats great Doctors aap sab se yahi umeed thi...aap 24th dec evening main jaayenge aur 26th ko waapas...is that clear..

All:yes mam...

Kirti:ok Doctors back to ur duties...

and all lef for their respective duties...

On 24 Dec. Evening...

saare doctors aur interns bus main baith chuke hai aur wo puri journey sote rehte hai

24 Dec. Night...

At night bus reaches the lonavla sanjeevni orphanage...caretaker of the orphanage welcome them...and after dinner they all goes to their room...(reyamicky in 1 room)(kriya neha & sharon in 1 room)(3 girls interns in 1 room)&(3 boys interns in 1 room)

(rdx & nicole is not there they are on leave are shaddi ane wali hai unki shopping bhi toh karni hogi na)

25 Dec. Morning, 8 am

Merry Christmas

Jingle bells..Jingle bells tune is played in orphanage and with this tune all kids awake and get ready for the breakfast not only kids all the doctors also awakes and get ready...

On breakfast table...

all the kids aeting breakfast without making any noise and when all the doctors reach on table...doctors wish them merry Christmas and they wish them too...and after breakfast all the kids go to their room...and kria felt strange with the kids behaviour...& she asked

K:Mrs. mehta(caretaker) aaj ye bache itna strange behave kyo kar rhe hai ...na koi shaitani...na koi masti...na koi shor aisa toh kabhi nhi hua...itne chup chap bache aaj tak nhi the...kya baat hai Mrs. mehta bataiye

Mrs.Mehta:kria sirf aaj hi nhi bache toh har tyohar par aisa behave karte hai...sirf apne kamre mainbaithe rehte hai...chup chap...agar bolo chalo bahar khelne chalte hai toh nhi maante rone lag jaate hai aur puchte hai humare mummy papa kyo nhi hai bhagwanji ne unhe hum se kyo chin liya...wo hote toh hum bhi unke saath enjoy karte sab bacho ki tarah ...ab batao kya jawab du inke sawalo ka mere pass toh inke sawalo ka jawab nhi hai...(she's crying while saying all this)(and she leaves )

all getting sad onlisten all this but rey thinks

rey:kuch toh karna hoga...(and he go towards the kids room and look inside the room from the window of the room where all kids quietly sits on their beds no one talk with each other...not a single kid have a little smile on face...there are many toys and musical instrument in the room but no one plays with it...he go towards the door and step inside the room but no one notice him...to want the ateention he take the flute and plays a very beautiful tune...and all looks at him...surprisingly...

Rey:Chaka raka chi chai cho chaka lo rum

Gando vando laka raka tum

Akko takko iddi giddi giddi go

Iddi pai vidi pai chiki chaka cho

Gili gili mal sulu sulu mal

Maka naka huku buku re

Tuku buku re chaka laka

Bikko chikko sili sili sili go

Bagad dum chagad dum chiki chaka cho

(he said some non-meaning words in one breathe to make the kids laugh and he did all the kids laugh and he laughs too)

rey:shhh

(and he again plays a tune on flute)(and with actions he told the kids to stand and go towardsthe garden and they did the same they go outside making a train of kids and the engine is rey they follows rey and reach to the garden)

Rey :Dekho dekho kya woh ped hai

Chadar ode ya khada koi ' (2)

Baarish hai ya aasmaan ne

Chod diye hai nal khule kahin

Oh hum jaise dekhe yeh jahaan hai waisa hi

Jaisi nazar apni

Khul ke sochein aao

Pankh zara phailaao

Rang naye bikhrao

Chalo chalo chalo chalo

Naye khwaab bun le

Hey hey hey hey ehhh'...

(rey start dancing with kids and the all doctors and interns also join them)

rey:Sa Pa

Kids: Sa Pa

rey:Dha re

Kids: Dha re

rey:Gaa re

Kids: Gaa re

rey:ga ma pa sa

Kids: ga ma pa sa

rey:Bum Bum Bum

kids: Bum Bum Bum

rey:Bum Bum Bum Bole

Kids: Bum Bum Bum Bole

rey:Hey Bum Chik Bole

Kids: Hey Bum Chik Bole

rey:Arre, Masti main dole

kids: masti main dole

rey:Bum Bum Bole,Masti Mein Dole

Bum Bum Bole,Masti Mein Tu Dol Re Hey

R&Kids:Bum Bum Bole,Masti Mein Dole

Bum Bum Bole,Masti Mein Tu Dol Re

R:Bhala Machliya Bhi Kyun Udti Nahin

Aise Bhi Socho Na

Socho Sooraj Roz Nahaye Ya

Baal Bhigoke Yeh Budhoo Banaye Hume

Yeh Saare Taare Timtimaye

Ya Phir Gusse Mein Kuch Badbadate Rahein

R&Kids:Khul ke sochein aao

Pankh zara phailaao

Rang naye bikhrao

Chalo chalo chalo chalo

Naye khwaab bun le

Hey hey hey hey ehhh...

R:O Rat Rat Ke Kyon Tanker Full

Kids: Tanker Full Tanker Full

R:Aankhein Band To Dabba Gul

kids: Oye Dabba Gul Dabba Gul

R:Oya Band Darwaze Khol re

Kids: Khol Re Khol Re Khol Re

R:Ho Jaa Bindaas Bol Re

Kids: Bol Bol Bol Bol Re

R:Main Bhi Hoon

Kids: Main Bhi Hoon

R:Tu Bhi Hai

Kids: Tu Bhi Hai

R:Main Bhi Tu Bhi Hum Sab Mil Ke

Bum Chik Bum Bum Chik Bum Bum Chik.

r&Kids:Bum Chik Bum Bum Chik Bum Bum Chik...'

Bum Bum Bum Bum Bum Bum

Kids: Bum Bum Bole,Masti Mein Dole

Bum Bum Bole,Masti Mein Tu Dol Re...

R:Aisi rangon bhari apni duniya hai kyun

Socho toh socho na

Pyar se chun ke in rangon ko

Kisi ne sajaye yeh sansar hai

Jo itni sundar hai apni duniya

Upar wala kya koi kalakaar hai

Khul ke sochein aao'.

Pankh zara phailaao

Rang naye bikhrao

Chalo chalo chalo chalo

Naye khwaab bun le

r&kids:Chalo chalo chalo chalo chalo chalo chalo chalo

Chalo chalo chalo chalo naye khwaab bun le

Bum bum bole,masti mein dole'

Bum bum bole,masti mein tu dol re

Bum bum bole,masti mein dole'

Bum bum bole,masti mein dole'

Bum bum bole,masti mein tu dol re

one kid: oye bum bum bole

(all start laughing)

Atmosphere is full changed now all are happy and kids were happy too. They enjoys the christmas and plays with doctors...(waoo he's too good humesha sabka mood thik kar deta hai )and riddhima who is little away from him watch all this and thinks...

K:kitna acha hai rey, humesha sabka mood thik kar deta hai...bache kitna ghul mil gye hai iske saath jahan bhi jaata hai sabko apna bana leta hai...shayad papa ne rey ko mere liye chun kar thik hi faisla liya hai...(after some seconds)nooo...acha hai toh iska matlab ye thodi na main isse shaddi karlu...humesha ladkiyon se flirt karta rehta hai(with little irritated voice)...kria tu na rey k saath jyada rehkar na pagal hone lagi hai...pata nhi kya kya sochti rehti hai...

(and with neha call her chain of thoughts break and she go towards them and enjoys with them)

In evening all goes to the near by church and after coming from church they cuts the cake and enjoys the christmas eve...All kids were very happy...(Dr.Kirti ka decision bilkul shi tha ye gang hi in bacho ko wo khushi de sakta tha jis khushi se wo ab tak anjaan the)now christmas came to an end...all goes to their room...and sleep)

Do like and comment

Part 6(b) tomorrow but on pg 15

Love

kriti

Edited by Kriti_rox - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fab...lovd it... Jst osssoommm...!!!! Nice idea...:-) thanxx 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome and amazing fabulous ...update res of the chapter soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely update..
Rey is such a sweetheart!
Kria, itna kya soch rahi ho? YES bol do yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congratzz for the 2nd thread
awesome update
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'm so sorry Di , pehle wale thread pe mera sirf ek he comment hai ...
Woh pata he nai chala apne kab update kiya 😳...
Well congrats for new thread..
Iss wale pe pakka comment karun gi...
Story bohat he interesting chal rahi hai 😃...
Loving it ❤️...
Will be waiting for the next part 😊.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved d update ..!
Rey was jst awsome ..!
Hopefully dey will cum 2gether soon ..!
Update soon..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for the new thread...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update...kriya is falling 4 rey...donum ko jaldi milado...pls pls pm me...

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