ArHi FF:4:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES - Page 7

nice update do pm me?

oh my my...what has happened here...who is that little girl...someone from his past or that tiny part of his brain pricking him of his misdeeds...hmmm mysterious it is.Ans Arnav and Anjali do know about Generals transformations...so much from the past is getting unfolded slowly but steadily...cant wait to know them.I loved Khushi's convo with that head...could actually visualize it..it was butterly cute...

Congratulations on the new thread!! 🥳
Really great chapter, I loved the bonding between the siblings, it was sweet (completely unlike my relationship with my siblings 😆 )
I can't wait until they meet again 😛 he says he has no feelings for her? 😆 yeah right! 😛
Good luck with your exam and I hope you pass with flying colours 😃
See you on Monday now 😉

Congratulations on the new thread...
So anjali knows about the transformations...
And arnav ke liye kuch kuch ho raha hai!! ;)
Thanks for the pm... :)

Originally posted by: A_Soul

Oh my !! i didn't realize you hadn't commented for that long..😲😲

Chapter 116: In Pursuit for Their Precious

Tensed Pretty update lin..

It was from Lord Akash and her father did not think it noble to read a personal letter of his daughter's'.

Shashi Uncle.. aisa moka kabhi kabhi hi milta hain.. padh lo'

n you were worried i wont like it,eh?? the very 1st line had me laughing crazy..😆😆..i agree with u btw..😉😆

'.but his eyes fell on the word "Miss Kushi" in a paragraph at the end and he could not stop himself from reading that line.

Ok Soul it's a serious matter over here so shut up!!

hey..may be shashi uncle did read it n pretended he didnt know..😃

Babuji looked at her, amazed that the girl who rarely ventured out was willing to come to search for her lost sister.

Lin.. I understand that payal is shy n not out going girl but any concern n loving sis will go out to find' isn't it obvious! So m not getting, y Shashi uncle is so amazed and you have emphasized it here?

EXACTLY!! EXACTLY !! hugs, dear ! i asked her the same thing.. i know she was trying to show the love n concern for the sister but even i felt that he shudnt have been amazed.. 😲he knows how close the two are.

No sooner had Master Shashi caught a glimpse of the Lady Anjali who was always confined within the Castle, than he was shocked to recognize her as a fleeting similarity to the painting he had seen on General Jha's worktable though he had only seen it in a flash of a second.

Shashi Uncle.. u r on right trip'!!
swear! he has a very good memory..

Ohhh I love this Lin' superb much more better then original one..!! Super Exciting'

"Bitiya!" said the father and his daughter fell onto him. He was about to lift her up, when Lord Akash volunteered and lifted her into his arms, his worried look searching her eyes for possible pain, "Miss Payal, does it hurt?"

"No, thankfully no," she muttered, embarrassed over the scene she was making, and she and Lord Akash looked suddenly at her father. Master Shashi nodded, granting the permission for his daughter to be carried by Lord Akash as long as they remained in his vision's radius.

Aaaye haaye kya scene hai'. But u know lin.. aisa har kisi ki life main kyu nai hota'

so true yar.. i wonder the same.

Btw, I love that last words.. typical parental concerns..

"Bruises are too common in this Castle but they must always be attended to instantly,"

I understand Lady Jha' some are emotional and some physical'.

Lin.. captivating line it is!!

a captivating explanation.👏

"Gupta, boy! Its Gupta!" said his mother exasperatedly, "Why address her by her first name as though there is a string of familiarity?"

I like it, the way she said'

lolz..she doesnt look like his mother from any angle..

Lady Anjali fell silent, and Master Shashi, who could not help remaining silent about the wretched suspicion in his mind, asked, "Do you have any other brothers other than the First Lord and Second Lord?"

Shashi the detective awaken'.hurreeeyy

"And I wish you find the strength to ride the storms of your future."

Bade buzzurgo ki aankhain kabhi dhoka nai khati' his doubt and his instinct has sensed the arrival of future storm in her life'

true.

"It is for one's strength that one needs most blessings. I am certain your words will be a shield if storms must knock at my quiet door."

Yeh toofan ke pehle ki shanti hain bachhe'.

Again wise linny's wise words'!

Chapter 117: Gypsies and Goodbyes

Concerned update' beautifully written..Lin

I loved that u have write "the man" or "he" only to refer Lordy in whole update (except once)..

But occasionally, her mind wandered to the man in her thoughts.

Lovely sentence formation lin dear..

She didn't understand why he had suddenly changed overnight.

He was detached and preferred to be unaccompanied.

The sore two hours of waiting for her endearing enemy worried her and she wondered what had gone wrong that he would exempt himself from being around.

Ooo Khushi dear' I loved dat u r concerned n worried..
me too..me too..

In all the gusto and gladness, Kushi didn't see the man walk towards the last cart and pick up her tiny box. She didn't see him walk towards her. Only when his hard hold on her hand jolted her back to Earth did she realize he had come back.
He lifted her box so she could see, "You need not come with us anymore. Your home is that way." He nodded to the fringe of trees to his left and she stared at them and then at him.

Kushi took the box from him and waited for him to release his hold on her hand. But he didn't. Instead, he did a surprising thing. He led her through the forest by her hand, not bothering about the gypsy procession he needed to catch up with.

Kushi struggled to hold her box and lift her gown with one hand as he dragged her through the forest, mercilessly pulling at her other hand, not caring if she found it hard to march up to his speed.

I was so lost in this scene Lin' Just amazing' a road out of forest.. grass on both the sides and only two of them are walking..

hain na.. this was one of my fav scenes too.. this is what i like the best about linny..she transports you into another world.. makes you imagine things just the way she sees them..👏👏

Kushi remained silent all through the remaining journey, knowing this might be the last time she was seeing him, knowing this was probably what he wanted too. A last few minutes to be with each other'''.'.though she could not understand why he was not quite gentle upon her.

Though as a reader n as viewer of IPK, we know that they will meet again' that too very soon.. still I feel the pain here lin.. that khushi is feeling unknowingly!!

how can't you?? saara waqt tau apnay aap ko khushi ki jaga imagine karti ho..ofcourse you cud get her feelings perfectly.😆

He let go of her hand and she began to walk away when he called her, "Kushi."

OOOhhh' that husky voice'

lol..i believe there's no limit to ur imagination..right.?😆

"You wasted a whole day of mine with your recklessness but I am willing to let it slide by because I won't gratefully be seeing you again," he muttered, "But though you are of no concern to me'''.I just want you to be careful of the dark."

Look at him' how he choose to start' like MAIN lordy hoon types..

And the second sentence here is like, I want water but I m not thirsty.. my lordy, he is so concerned for her..

hahaaa.. soul..if u didnt stop being so cute buddy..i swear..i'll end up falling for u.. too cute !!😛

He looked to the ground, "The nights are unsafe. Just be careful."

M glad that he has not misunderstood her or not shown any sign of misunderstanding, even not pour his frustration on her in terms of anger' instead I see there is sign that he himself is thinking that khushi does not know anything about that shadow came to meet her last night..

i too thought that he was concerned for her..😃

So happy that our tale is not taking path of usual daily soap..

same here!

Chapter 118: Home At Last

The chap has reminded me the days when I came home late from office.. mom n dad worried so much' and we also discussed thing like "how was everyone's day" n other important topic while dining only' Lovely family gathering..

aww..sweet.😊

"You worry yourself too much!" said Buaji, "Especially over your youngest. And to think that you expose only your cold shoulder when she is present herself."

Even we readers have same complain to Garima aunty..

Garima snorted, "Lucky enough to have made us sell off the mill and the house."

I just don't like it' how could you say that, it's ppl' mind set is responsible for this..

i think its just that she too can see the carelessness n innocence in khushi n gets worried for her n wants her to be like payal.. a li'l responsible,knowing that the world is not a safe place. besides they say jis se jitna pyar hota hai ussey utna hi expectations bhi hotay hain.

"Was he cruel to you?" asked Payal, leaning towards her sister to brush of a portion of some leaf that was stuck in the younger one's hair

Yes if we recall grape incident, he is REALLY cruel'😆😆

hahaahaa...too good. i think he was more cruel on us than on her.😆

Kushi looked up from her plate and paused before answering firmly, "No, he doesn't."

How cool it could be, if khushi has said.. "Uski itni himmat jo ab mujhe Khat likhe"'.

Wallah !! kitna maza ata.

"He was a good man but I suppose not good enough for you, then."

For this, a daughterly kiss to you shashi uncle..

one from me too shashi uncle..

The life at the Castle was to become a thing of the past and she had a whole new future before her. A future where the Castle would no longer be a part of, Kushi's mind was certain, but she knew her heart was not.

Ha ha ha ha *evil laugh*' "Not yet dear.. not yet" LH in me saying

🤣..very soul-ish !!

Song of the situation..

Aye dil laaya hai bahaar
Apnon ka pyar, kya kehna
Milein hum chhalak utha
Khushi ka khumaar, Kya kehna

Khile khile chehron se aaj
Ghar hai mera
Gule gulzaar, kya kehna

aww..just a perfect choice. i love this song..👏👏👏

Chapter 119: The Apparition

Before commenting on chap let me tell you one thing' I read the title, and I didn't know the meaning of APPARITION but I was so eager to read the update that I didn't pay attention to that'.

After reading it, I was like.. OH My GOD.. She seems a ghost'

And now while commenting I find the meaning of the title.. and I am.. mera to pachka ho gaya...😆

But lets not call her Ghost (as it is usually referred for not good soul).. yes could be spirit (so it could be good could be bad)

BTW' thanks for SCARING ME'

lolz.. i haven't read it anywhere other than my old literature books..its quite commonly used there..

He was angry as he walked to and fro, "What was he doing there?" And then he stopped and wondered, "What was she doing there?" Did they...

It is so delight to see you like this Gen Jha' u r worried on "DID THEY'" and we reader so wish we could say " They did'"😉

hahaaa.,.. now you got me rolling !!!🤣..why didnt i think of it b4.

"Like there is something that stops me from getting rid of this meddling curse!"

This is very interesting thought of him linny'

He turned around to place his sword back on his table when he saw, with horrid fear, the little girl from his nightmares sitting upon his tabletop, her legs crossed under her pale frilled frock.

Her hair was let loose, its tips reaching up to her shoulders, and she sat, looking away from him, her eyes on the tiny framed painting that was propped upon his table.

This is really frightening ' But I love the way you narrate it..!!

me too..

She had lifted her head to look into his eyes and with sheer terror, he saw how red blood streamed like tears from her glazed eyes. And adding to his mixed horror, the red teardrops slid from the girl's pale face and fell onto the face of his wife's framed picture, marring her pale cheeks and tender eyes with the ominous red drops.

Lin one thing I didn't understand or I should say visualized here is' I could not able to read expression of her eyes.. blood drops are of anger? pitty? Sadness? Or just to scare him'

i felt they represented pain..i have actually seen a scene like this in a movie n it is quite gruesome. how can u read the expressions,the tears say it all,dont u think?

And then he stood up, placed the painting back on his table and gritted his teeth, "I will make you want me, Kushi. I so will. No one is going to stop me from this."

And here starts the real battle'. Bring it ON linny'.

yes. his pagal pan has started.. that sentence had a bad ring to it..

The girl seemed to ignore him and her fingers reached out and picked up the painting of his wife.

Here when she lifted the painting, I thought she will caress it' and the next thought come in my mind that in few updates u will show that Lady Jha is pregnant, she could be a sign of that child'. But after reading further I m sure that I m certainly wrong.. y would the child threw the paining of her mother??

She threw it in anger.. so the spirit is angry on Gen Jha due to Lady Jha'. So if I consider here, her as sign of the curse that Jha has, does that mean that his Curse will hurt Lady Jha, so it is poisonous for Lady Jha and not Gen, and by getting cured by Khushi, Gen wants to save Lady Jha from his curse'

I think I m thinking too much right' But I think I have some logic.. whats say girls?

1. i dont think the Gen has any feelings whatsoever towards lady jha n thus will least bit be concerned about her.

2. he's doing everything for himself.. n doesnt care about the rest. but in ur last comment u did say if it was related to ''his past''.. n back then n even now i cant see his past beyond his ''curse'' n ''marriage''. however after reading this update..i too felt may be its ''a spirit'' from the past.. the possibility is there. so i was thinking,do u think that the way he has used lady jha n also is trying to get khushi.. he used many other girls too?? n may be one of them has taken over his thoughts???

I don't know who you are or what you want, meddling little twit! But I will not let you mess with my head anymore. I will make this curse end and end your visions once and for all!

So this means, the child was in his dream earlier and the child here are same'. Well in this case m thinking on how the both incidents are connected?

And if hoopoe's theory is true (which I think very much dependable) what the symbol of their marriage wants to indicate by throwing Lady Jha's painting??? Well I have not read the analysis of any yet, so don't know if hoopoe has already answered this'.

read n we'll discuss later. 😊

Song of the situation'

Bhoot Hoon Main
Na Aah Hai Na Raah Hai
Na Jism Hai Na Jaan Hai
Andhera Hai Pyaas Hoon Main
Bhoot Hoon Main

Na Dard Hai Na Umang Hai
Na Aas Hai Na Saans Hai
Rondhi Hui Aag Hoon Mein
Bhoot Hoon Main

Bechain Sa Sailab Hai
Zalimana Tezab Hai
Zehair La Ilaj Hoon Mein
Bhoot Hoon Main
lol..lol.. 😆😆😆.. you always choose the perfect song!!👏

Enjoy

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Scared Soul
🤣..i love ur signature.. n the way u express ur true feelings in just a single word..explains all.. again u r very cute. loved the post as lways.. waiting for more.. 😉
A GREEDY SOUL.😃[ME]
THANK U..🤗

congrads on the new thread

OH MY..OH MY.. such talented bunch of people n they choose to hide it.. what was that KA?? WHAT WAS THAT??😲😲 Loved reading your long comment. was trying to edit afew pics which didnt work,unfortunately n then saw ur comment..instead of returning to studies,i was compelled to scribble afew lines for you.. too good buddy!!👏👏👏

Originally posted by: khusiarnav

Res

Edited:

I know i am terribly late... sorry guys!! Hey, better to be late than never... right?? 😃I know that was cheesy...😆
am glad you came,even if late..😃

The Gupta family

I was not surprised by the reaction of the family after knowing their Khusi is missing... It always comes down to the mishap in family to know how much each member is important in their lives. I admire Payal for showing the letter from second Lord to her father. it shows where Khusi stands in her life!! It felt nice to see Payal letting Shasi
lolz.. dont mind but whats with not writing an extra ''h''..eh?? for a moment i thought u were referring to me n i frowned n then got it right.. 😆😆😆.. i read it the way you write it n it sounds funny! ''khusi'' n shasi''...😆😆
read the letter and Shasi's hesitation to read the whole and chose to read the part where Khusi was mentioned... The easy relationship and the deep understanding between father-daughter is commendable here!! Also the panic state of garima tells no matter how inexpressive she might be in showing love but she loves Khusi dearly... In all this Bua ji was the only one who stood strong and didnt let go of her emotions and asked them to do the needful to get Khusi back!!
something tells me that this very characterstic of buaji can give Khushi a tough time in future.. she's quite dominating n takes decisions with too much surety.
She is a strong lady, pillar of the family when it comes to any crisis!!! My love and admiration is only growing for this family... always standing tall and united!!

Shasi and Payal's visit to Raizada castle 😉

Ok i have to admit, despite everyone in Gupta and raizada family got all worked up for khusi going missing I was glad it caused shasi to meet Lady Anjali!! I was happy for Shasi, his effort to come to castle in search of his precious khusi paid off, he got some answers atleast... and to my relief he did made sure of it by asking Anjali if she has another brother as well... I cant imagine what shasi felt when he saw lady in the painting as anjali who is a married woman. It would be hard for any father whose family considers some guy to be possible groom for his daughter but the reality is something unimaginable!! I would like to share something similar that i witnessed few years back, my massi was dating a guy whom my mother never liked for some reason. she always had this opinion that he is not a nice guy and he has some bad intention for massi. Later my mom found out that he had used women in past for their money and threw them out of his life once he finds someone else. It was a shocking news for all because we all liked him... my massi really liked him and was planning to get married!!
oh my!! glad you guys realized this before it was too late.. i tell you buddy some people's instincts are too good but then they are also blamed n not rightly understood for it..until time confirms their suspicions. they just see ahead of time when others can't.
So I felt like it was my mom there in the update whose suspicion was proved right about that guy... Anyways, Shasi being the matured and a thoughtful person.. he knew that Anjali has nothing to do with it and cant be blamed for anything. he knew someday in future she would be aware of it and her relationship would not be the same anymore. A loving father and good human being that he is, he blessed her

"And I wish you find the strength to ride the storms of your future."

Though Anjali didnt know the reason behind his selected words in the blessing, nevertheless she accepted.

"It is for one's strength that one needs most blessings. I am certain your words will be a shield if storms must knock at my quiet door."

I feel bad for Anjali... its always the good people who has to face such disgraceful things in life. My heart goes out for her for being the Lady that she is... wishing good for others!!!

Then there were some fun things too... the amusing exchange between manorama and Akash!! I cant help but like lady Manorama... as a mother she only wishes best for her son! the frown at Akash and payal standing close made me smile... how typical!! 😆

"And what are you doing there, boy? Are you the new herbalist in this Castle?" 🤣 🤣

I so miss her "hello hi bye bye and Khoon bhari tang" Phrases... 😆
Ah..me too..😆😆😆

"Gupta, boy! Its Gupta!" poor payal

manorama is just too much... Becharey hamarey love birds kitne deno badh milraithe... Ankhei char bhi karne nhi diya!!! 🤣 🤣 Jhalim Singh manorama...😆
lolz..so true...🤣

But they are cute... I loved Akash for taking stand and continued to dress Payals wound... Even though he is silent types but he can Talk when Its needed!!! 😃 And Shasi witnessed it, thank god for that!!! 😃

Gypsies and Goodbyes

This chapter was more of a girl's uncertain feeling towards a man who never did a single good thing for her and has been anything but rude and mean!! Pushed her out of window, locked in dungeons , insulted her in every occasion possible but still helped her when they were lost, not that he has changed into saint and become all goody good but small gestures he showed was enough for a girl like Khusi... who never holds grudges or has any bitter thought for anyone!!!
WOW Lady !! you put it so well...👏👏👏
After the night when he accepted her request to stay in the hut, she is a confused soul..confused as what has transpired over the night making Lordy cold as ice and detached!! here she is getting worried for him being out of the sight for two hours.. wondering what might be the reason... In all this she does not realize that her feelings are changing... her worries, her concern runs deep... tugging her heart at him being missing!! the jovial self was not there when he was not around.. the sense of security she has developed over the period of time she has spent with him was missing...

she chose to ride the last cart in hope to see him... His silence made her quite... making her believe sumthing was wrong!!!
superb !!⭐️

As per our Lordy is concerned, after such event night before.. he being detached and silent didnt come as surprise! We know he is not vocal about his feelings... so whatever that was going in his mind was kept inside!!! he is a loving and doting brother... he seeing Gen like that would only make him go worried to no end for his sister who is everything for him!! Cant imagine how painful and hurting experience it would have been for him to see that and think of possible reasons and consequences!!! his silence and detachment is the growing concern for his sister... somewhere he knows he cares for Khusi's well-being but right now his foremost priority is Anjali and her well-being & happiness... 👏👏👏👏

When Lordy held Khusi's hand led to the end of the forest... my heart sunk with Khusi's... Poor Khusi she wants to go back home yet she wants this journey never to end... he is marking his presence in her life and she being oblivious to the fact!!

She looked over her shoulder. They remained silent, looking into each other's eyes, remembering the faces one last time before they departed forever.

aww the separation... Two people who could not stand eachother... never let go of any given opportunity to argue are keeping their silence... looking at eachother... remembering the faces for the time when they wont be together...
loved this...👍🏼

"You wasted a whole day of mine with your recklessness but I am willing to let it slide by because I won't gratefully be seeing you again," he muttered, "But though you are of no concern to me'''.

Then there is failed attempt to sound detached and uncaring... this time it was unsuccessful to work on her Lordy...

I just want you to be careful of the dark."

"The nights are unsafe. Just be careful."

there he said it... his open concern and advised her to be careful!! He couldnt say why, can he now??? Deep down he knows whatever that happened the night before, its gonna affect Khusi as well in some way!! He is worried for her but cant take her back to castle as he himself dismissed her from her service!! So at this point he can only warn her and ask her to be careful!!
even i felt that..dont know how right we are..😕

Which infact further confused the already confused girl right there... What should she make out of it??? Indeed a Mystry to be solved!!!

Linny great chapters... though didnt get to know what was going on Lordy's mind but Khusi turmoil and growing concern covered it!!!

Beautifully written... I loved the way you have described Khusi's "situation" just perfect blend of everything was there in the chapter... turmoil, anxiety, concern,relief of seeing him, the separation,, eye-lock (rabba vee, sad for sure) the parting words of Lordy asking her to be careful just did it... 👏
AGREED!!!
N what a great post dear KA..such a nice surprise. loved it..👍🏼