ArHi FF:4:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES

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Shruti

@ShrutiPandey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

i loved both the siblings talks! 😊 they were like.. soo real! 😃

and poor you Lord ASR! its too late now! you're falling for our Khushi! ❤️ plus, Im waiting for the sc. where he'll put back the nechlace on Khushi! give your best shot there Aqua.. please! 😳
[ I hope there will be no cellphone there this time 😉]
and like Khushi.. Im 1 of your curious readers! I badly want to know about this transformation thingy! 😉

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Swetyz

@Swetyz

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Beautiful update...
Loved khushi and payal conversation...
And arnav is thinking he can avoid thinking about khushi...poor him

Did they know as about shyam transformations...this is really a new thing..
can't wait to read more...

all the best for your exams...do well...

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bablio09

@bablio09

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

All the best to you and Aura for the exams. May you do well. And I pray the Guardian Angel be with you through your journey, stay and exam. Amen.

so they all are well aware of the transformations and the curse.

Congratulations on the new thread and thanks for the pm.

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shass

@shass

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

FOR THE NEW THREAD...

ALL THE BEST FOR THE NEW JOURNEY N HORIZONS TO BE EXPLORED NEXT..

PS; BEST OF LUCK FOR EXAMS TO BOTH OF U..LINNY N AURA.👍🏼..

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shass

@shass

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

like i said b4 linny..no more long posts... so just scribbling afew points here..

loving how both lordy's n khushi's feelings are surfacing n i can get to read about them beyond gestures. however..this small sequence you presented was perceived by me in the light of symbolism,if i'm not wrong..

Khushi & Blanket-- it was like,how she is coming to realize her true feelings for lordy..esp.the way he came out of darkness of the blanket..as in depth of her heart..n in a way accepts him. loved esp how she knows that though he'll not smile at her,his eyes always do,upon spotting her.

Lordy & Pendant--he has feelings for her,always did..but like always he denies n hides..then gets frustrated n brushes them aside..but at the end,keeps them safe deep down,secretly locking it away..

the contrast of their feelings were beautifully portrayed...👏👏👏

i gasped,when i read that both Lordy n Lady Anjali know of Gen's curse.. lordy has begun to ask the right questions tho, i believe he still has not connected the creature with the Gen. he knows that the Gen gets transformed but he still has to connect the dots to him,for the recent sightings. he's just suspicious for now..
as hesitant as i am for touching the bro-sis relationship.. today again,i saw something in a glimpse. there's things that are ''obvious'' about them n there are things that are ''hidden'' about them..n you understand both.. but then every now n then you see something ''exceptional'' b/w them..n thats what makes their bond special n thats what u show only in ''glimpses''. until i see the exceptional,i'll refrain from writing on them. but i loved lady anjali's mischievousness.
just one thing i didnt like about the CHP.. i was waiting for hermit rituals..n wanted to know more into siblings' thoughts regarding the occasion n past..but alas linny...!!! *shakes head*. he came n he went,that too on foot..😲

NICE UPDATE !!👍🏼

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714107

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

I read this FF all in one go and slept at five am one morning doing so,and I don't mind because this FF is amazing. I can't. ? Thank you SO much for writing, words don't do justice. really. I am so grateful for this. LOVE IT. can't wait for the next update :')

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BublyKhushi

@BublyKhushi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

thanks for including my name 😃

and HAPPY NEW YEAR !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Revathy Sugathan Nair

@revathysugathan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

I think Arnav realises Shyam has transformed but Khushi has no idea who he is - so no MU as of now❓

"I have certainly no feelings for her" yeah right The man's blind as a bat or is he stupid - I know, he is BOTH 😈

Best wishes for ur exams dears 👍🏼 (Aura and Aquiline) Ace them and then come back with more Arhasia - we'll be at the INN on monday

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khusiarnav

@khusiarnav

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Reserved!

new thread... new chapter... And i am effing Late... on page 7!!! 😡 😡 😡

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Congratulations Lin on new thread!!! We did it again... we are on 4th thread... I hope to see many more new thread like this... 😃

Edited by khusiarnav - 12 years ago

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khusiarnav

@khusiarnav

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

"Unres"

Chapter 18

The only person that stood out most for me was Garima in this chapter!!I have always found her very intriguing and someone known. Knowing the fact that She is a mother of two daughters, one being her own blood and one her adopted one,she has done very well at fulfilling the responsibility. Shasi being the loving, doting father with easy rapport with his girls, garima has that stern, strict persona as a parent even compensating Shasi... but isnt that a normal thing??!?! one of our parents is (always) little more strict... drawing lines what "not" to do And here that is Garima!! Her attachment and love to Khusi is very different and very special!! Khusi is not her daughter by blood yet she confesses to Buaji she loves her more! That proves that her tough exterior is only to keep them in line!!

U know, I can relate to the Garim and Khusi's story here. My massi's daughter came to live with us when she was 3 years. My mom literally did her upbringing... just like any mother would do! It wasnt like her parents were dead but they were separated and due to some other reasons she came into our house!! She lived with us for 9 years and went away to live with her own mom (my massi). So many things happened during those 9 years. Now when i look back, everything makes sense to me... i have answers and explanations now which i seek back then!!! If you ask me that if I liked her coming to our lives and sharing everything then NO i didnt in-fact we (me n my brother) didnt like it at first. I remember my brother asking when she will go back to her Own house!! In all this the only person who stood strong, made amends among us, made me realize that she is my sister and will live with us henceforth was my Mom. I see my Mom in Garima... Garima knows Khusi is more prone to trouble, payal being sensible she is not worried about her... its her love for Khusi that makes garima strict, inexpressive and drawing lines for her... To protect her!! She had taken in a girl as their daughter so its always a greater responsibility for her to prove herself that she is her real mother by making sure of Khusi's well being and needs!! In our case my Mom was strict to all, since R was small she used be lenient sometimes... getting away with doing things!! she got extra of everything... My mom was never bothered about me maybe becoz i was too good to fuss about!! I was given the responsibility of my brother n sister from their school uniforms to their school work!! ya tell me... i was their guardian/maid/tutor and elder sister. But i got used to it... i loved them both but was more lenient to sister like my Mom!! watching out for her more than my brother... coz he never needed,... he was basically my moms chamcha! 😆 My mom was never expressive showing of emotions... she was always busy to make sure everything was there... what we needed... on time for all of us!! Making sure her daughters were brought up correctly with good manner/habits/social rules etc. Isn't Garima doing the same??? So my mom was Like garima to R... and dad.. well dad was dad.. easy rapport... easy conversation.. smooth relationship!! My mom is still the same.. the only difference is she little soft now as i am here far away... but still strict!!

Linny when you portrayed Garima, i always felt i know her... then this chapter made me nostalgic... The only difference in your story and mine is Khusi still lives with Gupta family and Loves them to core... But I am not sure my little R, she lives away and has distanced herself from us... she is all grown up now... but whenever i remember her, its still the small girl comes to my mind!!

Sorry guys i didnt mean to bore u with my story but could not resist from sharing... I admire Garima to no end... she makes me proud and also helped in a way to know my mom little more better...I have never discussed or talked about it before.. but for some reason it feels nice!! 😃

And then Khusi finally returned home... is she same Khusi??? naahhh... Lordy unknowingly took some of herself with him... she will never be the same again...

I was glad all the family came to know that Letter writing was over between Gen Jha and Khusi.. so no more marriage pursuit i guess!! And did i hear Shasi's sigh of relief somewhere?? 😆

awww poor khusi... will her heart ever be convinced that she no longer part of castle or maybe someone's life???😃

Edited by khusiarnav - 12 years ago