ArHi FF:4:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES

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MithilaTorr

@MithilaTorr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#631

Wow! So beautiful! I used to think how will Khushi lift the sword! Fighting Arnav is one thing and fighting ASR is another! I felt Arnav was encouraging her unconsciously to get ready to fight his demons. It is going to be a tough battle of her and his demons! I felt so. I love u 😆👏

The moment she said hard skills my heart elated. I just knew dance was on the way. Waiting for that!

Thanks for the PM

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Tammie

@saomom

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Posted: 12 years ago

#632

Waaah. *stomp* *stomp* I need the BALL! 😆

Arnav and Khushi had a bit of the old Darcy/Bennet thing going on and I for one LOVED IT!! (I know you're totally shocked and amazed.)

I'll probably be back. I'll probably read it again and have more fascinating things to say. lol

BRING ON THE DANG BALL! hahahahah

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farha

@farha5556

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Posted: 12 years ago

#633

i am messed up with so many things sorry for not commenting and liking other updates,loved this update,surely arnav is jealous.continue soon.

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s_mg

@s_mg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#634

Ooops!! so the First Lost is getting jealous now ..:) i were getting goose bumps while reading your update .. awesome awesome awesome .. loved it ...

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#635

Rabba Vey Aqui(now I'll call u wid dis name or AqL) anyways... Last night the signals were back but my bad luck I tried really hard but I was caught by Captin Responsibility (rascal he is) so he caught me and I couldnt make it any ways Congrats Mav to get da 1st spot next time go to sleep like good babies ok *wink* Superb update Aqui... Hahahhah Aman is an intelligent man he knew Khushi has a special place in Lordy's heart so he backedoff but tut tut poor man have to face his wrath for laughing with Khushi how dare he how he enjoyed the oh ever so sweet laughter of youngest gupta and enjoy her company huh? Lolz poor lordy is confuse which made his anger to rise that y does tht particular Miss Gupta seems to enjoy everyone's company and laugh wid them except him... Hmmm my dear Lordy think back till now u have just behaved in either of the two ways one is where u show ur anger and the other ahemm when u make her confuse of ur INTENTIONS? So thats the reason Soul n KP's guy(being on safe side by not siding either of the two comrade for the love of my life haii I have so many dreams abt my career and love life which hasnt even started hell which is not even abt to start in the near future waiting for my prince charming*blush* m besharam aint I) anyways so lordy my love(*hands in air* PEACE Soul n KP m just quotting the word for the sake of it I cant say my son n I am defo never going to say my brother *un-hun*) try to be a little frndly with her and she will laugh with u only IF she dont faint after seeing ur frndly behavior so u know... Oh god poor girls were enjoying and Lordy came and wht he saw again that khushi was laughing and enjoying with La. Oh no nooo *BOMB* and lordy's head exploded with anger at da mention of ball here he was trying to control his anger on the most important problem in his life for da time being and there u go... Khushi n La preparing for something to which Lordy hasnt said yes till then n there comes the lava running from his veins to go to the needed destination HIS BRAIN n he orderd them to leave n then specified La that he want Khushi to be here to talk to her for her visit to industry and more importantly her journey back from industry to home. And there he go... He shut the door *dhak* he locked the room *dhak dhak* for the time being my heart ignored his picking up da sword but his catlike stride towards her made it *Dhak Dhak Dhak* ok now be serious Farwa ok so hahahaha he orderd him to pick her sword n what he said that she must have enjoyed lauging n riding wid Aman and when she told that she went to meet the princess he didnt paid any attention n accused her that she even PLAYED sword with him. There u go girl u have been proven guilty for doing these two things and now da punishment fight with fuming with jealousy oops sorry sorry fuming for her wrong actions Lordy. The fight scene was superb ohh Lordy khoo gaya Khushi ki pretty looks main ... Those beautiful hair, those big dove eyes with the hint of anger in them, those lips and Lordy been knocked out and poor Khushi didnt know her effect on him so she resume the fight only to see a little late that Lordy was somewhere else which resulted in her giving injury on his shoulder. But why did he get so angry after that incident.. Was it anger on more himself for losing his senses for her beauty *scraching my head* and the fight go on till he disarmed her to satisfy his ego for the little time in which he was distracted by his senses. Yea that's right Khushi either see him while fighting to learn his moves or let him teach u only then u can master him. BTW Lordy now a days u seem to lock her in ur arms chakar kia hai??? Yeaaa her challenge did the deed and now there will be a ball in which both will dance to prove the other wrong. My heart is already swinging on its own beat.
Oh BTW Aqui did I tell u that I wanted to say u that I loved da last update and I would say it was the best written among all other ffs written showing other countries coz u created China in one singal room even not being in China.
PS:-I have given the sweet little pigeon extra treet so dat next time he may flew faster than others and I'll be the one to made it first.*wink*

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BublyKhushi

@BublyKhushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#636

It was amazing. It was amazing

loved their romantic war... ❤️

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afsha

@-afsha-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#637

Khushi is awesum

She made Arnav agree for the ball n he didnt realise it also

Plz Khushi shuld win

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moon8387

@moon8387

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Posted: 12 years ago

#638

The inn was very cosy today may be becoz I was greeted by the most amazing story teller...
The latest development in Arhasia has plastered a permanent smile on my face.
Master Aman is very brave... He is always able to speak up to Lord Arnav though everytime I feel that he would fumble. I guess working for long with Lord Arnav has its own effects.
I need to salute Miss Khushi. She fought n she fought mighty well for a new trainee. Am just so glad that Master Aman made Lord Arnav jealous enough to ask Khushi to.practice with him. Its like Rabba Vey with every clash of the pair of swords.
And the challenge of the dance!!! I had that feeling in my bones that they would dance... Yes... A dance challenge is all the more better...
And did I mention that the way Lord Arnav stripped his sleeve to ask Miss Khushi for the dressing was super romantic??? I loved that absolutely...

Please do tell us soon bout ur next visit to the inn. We need to hear about that dance pretty quickly.
Ohh!!! Another thing. I always sneak in my cup of coffee to the inn to listen to you. Hope its ok.

Edited by moon8387 - 12 years ago

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Kiruthika

@-Keerthi-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#639

Hi Aqualine.. Missed me..?😉 sry i was out of town nd sick for a while.. Bt i didnt miss any of ur updates.. i read all of them.. just couldnt able to comment briefly..

sry😳

Chapter 130,131,132 :

The Awaited Industry visit: Finally khushi goes to industry.. Lord arnav had no idea huh?😆 i guessed it.. otherwise he wouldnt leave without meeting her nd definitely wouldnt let aman to get her.😉 nd aman understood tat he wont get khushi for ever nd has to let her go. tat was gud. poor aman.. nice guy.. bt khushi is only for Lord arnav.

The Princess: OMG tat was Princess of china..?😲 she was really grt.. i loved their conversation.. Da-xia right? she realy liked khushi..😊who wouldnt? she is so lovely..

The Parting presage: so finnaly dey parted nd arnav saw khushi-aman together.. obviously he is irritated..😡😉 Lord Arnav was really jealous.. aman is so gone..😛

Chapter 133: A War nd a worry:

ok Arshi meeting was amazing.. Sword fight was dhamaka.. so now Lord arnav is gonna teach her by himself huh? clever guy..😉👏 Lord arnav let khushi take care of hid wound.. he started opening up to her i think..

Khushi challenged him to dance..? wow.. nd he gave permission for ball. 😲we gonna get arshi dance nd i m gonna love it.. 😊👏