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vidya.sanjay thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
What a match has god made.these two are one of a kind.
I am awaiting more rabbaves and you have already hinted towards the famous 'Teri meri" event.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maverickmartin

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YES! I did it!! 45 refreshes. *sigh*
CONGRATS





It was sort of scary, Arnav's sudden rage and his urge to make Khushi fight. Is it a symbol? That Khushi would manage to put a scratch on his hard shell, enough to let some of his inner self seep through and in defiance he will fight her and make her fight back, unknowingly strengthening her against himself? That he would know he could defeat her, but in the end he'll let her see to his wound(s)?
GREAT POINT

Ah, me the Questioner.

Arnav: Khushi. You want to go horse-riding? Come with me. You want to learn sword-fighting? Learn from me. True he indeed want this
You want to make your heart beat fast? I want to too, damn it!😆
🤣
hahahah so funny comment but very true dammit
Oh! She did it! But of course, he had already been acquiescing at the back of his mind, isn't it? The moment for me was like (if I was Khushi): "*throws hands in the air* Hah! I did it! *looks around and sits up* But of course I could. I am intelligent, you see."
😆😆😆
hehehe

Dancing! A challenge! Delightful! You're just stirring our hunger for the Ball chapters, you know, Lin?
ah she is a tease aint u Lin?



Done!



loved ur comment fully but these parts my fav.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ohh my god! what an amazing chapter!

The start was a hard one! I felt so bad for Master Aman! Lordy Lord, you're terrible!😡 but still I love you! 😳
..and then! the scene all we readers wait to enjoy! 😉 our Tigress! 👏 Its only Khushi who has the courage to fight him back! Bravo girl! 😊
I always blush when i get to see Arnav pulling Khushi towards him! haha! 😆
it was all about Arnav and Khushi but my heart here goes only for Khushi! she has a heart of gold! she cant see anyone in pain.. Ohh I love you girl!

though Im not a person who thinks a lot about future but Im all excited about the ball! *Teri-Meri" 👏 👏
I know its going to be b'ful!
..Khushi won the challenge in the serial, so its going to be fun if History repeats itself! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
ooo.. somebody is mellowing down... going all mushy!
speaking of going hard/soft.. my gutter mind is wanting to poke fun at mr. raizada and tease him,
but i think i will preserve that for our story teller for she would know more of what the lead pair is thinking in their 'ah so innocent' minds!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rabba ve dear Aquiline...
Beautiful chapter... Enjoyed reading it...
Chess-checkered ballroom floor?!!!! Typical Aquiline's Touch?!!! 😉...
Love your subtle writing style... Waiting eagerly for the ball night...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shass

can i dance in the Ball too?? oh plz,oh plz... 😃..with Soul,missing who knows..i may get a chance to dance with the lordy.. though i cant imagine his expressions on rock n roll moves,in the medieval😆
Oh yes Lin plz let her b dere n shass plz un dono k darmiyan anay ki bajay try to become the cupid to give more RABBA VEY,who knows Lin change her mind,giving a push to Khushi towards lordy n sometimes giving it wid lordy but less wid him as he might made tandori chicken out of us all dancin on TANDORI NIGHTS
.i bet he spent the previous night tossing in the bed TRUE, then began the game. will lordy ever try to sit n think logically?? i guess never! *NODING HEAD IN AGREEMENT*or else he would have found why she's happier with others n would even be surprised that she'll be doubly merrier with him but alas !! PR WO KOI MOKA TO DAY HE ALWAYS GIVE HER EITHER OF DA 2 THINGS 1-PAIN 2-DHAK DHAKhe had to try things the hard way n so,it comes to drawing swords!! like seriously lordy?? *eyebrow cocked*.*shaking head* but i tell you linny,me loved it,was waiting for it for long now. First it came to halting her in her tracks coz he so hates it when she tries to distance herself from him.AHEM WE DONT LIKE DA DORIYAN AS WELL hai na?.then his Royal-Highness orders her to fight, coz he's reminded of Aman's training her..challenges her for that sake. then gets all Drooly over her beauty n gets hurt a little..gets all angry coz he probably feels that Aman's training is making her better with time n also coz she could ACTUALLY hurt him.I think he was more angry on himself for going all drooly on her n hence couldnt pay attention on his opponent Ouch Lordy!! it was a wrong call,told ya. then takes out all his frustration n anger in moving her to his tunes..btw, i suspect thats how its going to be in the future..poor khushi ! teaching her the skill n trying to make her better with his knowledge of the skill,n trying his best not to make her cry..yup! he doesn't like her tears too.. then when he has had it enough, he easily throws her sword away..well, she wasn't a match for him in the first place.. but he loves to spend time with her n also to give her some of his lessons on the art..AGAIN Agree then suddenly,thats not enough n almost jumps on her,pinning her to the wall,scaring the hell out of that poor innocent soul.. his way of telling how much he needs to be near her n hold her. 😃. *shaking head* see lordy now we understand u so well so next time do something which we didnt expect like ahem doing something ROOMAANTICCfinally,she sees a tiny-winy cut,which naturally bleeds... n Pop goes the ''tigress avatar'' n we see the ''green-heart'' emerging. i tell you linny,she also undergoes ''transformations''..i laughed aloud here earning myself a glare shassy really yaar love u think about it. she still cries.. no use giving her lessons in strength lordy coz whenever it will come to you n your pain, her strength will keep failing her. coz she can't see you hurt. what?? now you are even surprised?? you'll be all that unless you'll listen to me. SHE LOVES YOU !! *Shouts at the top of my lungs*... No use !! dont waste ur energy the lady in hood had clearly shown him tht the key to his freedom 4rm da curse but have he even given it a heed gives her the right to touch him n not just that but to attempt to heal him.. Good lordy,Good.. one step at a time ! then freakingly stares at her throughout the procedure... OOOhhh La La... you have no idea about the ''power'' of khushi's imagination.. she thought of you as ''nani''??🤣.. that too while ''knitting''?? *Ahem*..i imagined him that way too..in her sari even..🤣🤣🤣.. rolling on the floor now!hahaha me too ROFL . then,finally lets her go.. thats how he likes it..having her concentrating on him ALONE ! yes dats it
what victory n defeat both of you?? victory n defeat from now onwards will be the same for you both ! that goes for your pain n smiles too.. but i aint telling ya anything..cz you'll learn it the hard way... but you'll learn it.*clapping* 4 the last lines specially This kind of crap comes to my mind when i write it as 1st reaction to the update. Oh god shassy this was crap seriously... No doubt ur usual comments have to b best when the crap thing is so gud
Btw,me missing my General... *hint**hint* me too
@Farwa--such a sweet person you are... thank you.. muah. aww *blush* u too shassy *muah*


I loved every part of ur comment but alas mob limiting words so had to cut some parts
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Posted: 12 years ago

Rabba Ve Miss A,

Just finished reading all the chapters...amazing!

Felt sorry for Aman's unfulfilled love….auwww!

You really brought out the essence of the Chinese princess, her grace, humility, kindness and intuition, and the fact that she recognized the special qualities in Kushi. Wow, can't wait for the mysteries to be revealed from the book that was gifted to Kushi and what Yin and Yang will happen between the leads (wink; wink). Oh and we are so having the Tea Ceremony at your next narration at the Cottage!

No surprises that Kushi would be the one to persuade Laad Governor to agree to the ball and love the all this jealousy brewing within the Lordy! There was Rabba ve playing in my brain from the start of their sword fight till the time Kushi walked out of the room.

Great job can't wait for the next chapter.

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Posted: 12 years ago
*Plop* I'm here. Waiting. You said Sunday, right? Well it's late Saturday night on my side of the world, so I'm guessing it's Sunday in your part.

I'm going to go over to the couch in the corner and take a nap (read: get 6 hours sleep) and then I'll wake up. Please have my hot chocolate warming. I'd also really love some ladoos, so if anyone has any, bring 'em! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi!!!
new reader alert!!!😆
ur story is so awesome...ur writing jus takes us into this world of fantasy n makes me forget reality while reading it...
i read all the chapters in one go...i really did!!!!
it was seriously crazy that i couldnt stop without completing till 133 n was awake almost entire night to finish it...
loved it...each one of your chapters n i have got no words to describe ur writing...
its jus that i dont have time in my hands to respond to each of the chapters...well when u have 133 updates its a herculian task..😉..but, you will surely get my comments starting now...


its sunday already!!!..do we get an update today???...waiting...😃😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
i have been an occasional silent reader until now but the happenings of this chapter and the way you write are fabulous and have overwhelmed me to the point of making me comment!!!!!!! i love how you keep the events similar to the original show, like the sangeet bet and arnav saving khushi instead of lavanya from chapters 126 and 127, but the context is totally different!!!!!!!!!!! this is something that makes IF so very worthwhile! i cant wait to see how the next chapter is😉

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