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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for the late reply. I was expremely busy and couldn't read any FF these days. ny way coming to the update. It was just awesome. This FF is not something which one should read because he just enjoys reading but it should be read to experience it. Each and every SwaRon scene and conversation is penned with such a delicacy that one can't help but fall in love with SwaRon more and more. I couldn't pick any favourite scene as each one was awesome in its own way but I really liked the story from Sharon's childhood. It was nicely inocrporated in the main story. Over all an amzing update. Really loved it.
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I m always at short of words whenever I read update of this ss.It made me love swaron more n more..:)
Loved the comfort level they shared.Its good to read about sharon showering all her love to swayam.Sharon's childhood part was really nice.
Loved it
Waiting for next part
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Cute update 😊😊
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PART FIVE

Both shared a cozy dinner in the hotel's restaurant. When they came out, Swayam
took Sharon by surprise and scooped her in his arms. He carried her all the way to
the room. It was a long way from the restaurant to the room. Sharon kept giggling.

Sharon (giggling): Swayam put me down, everyone is staring at us! Swayam, kya kar rahe ho, put me down na.

Swayam didn't utter a word and just looked at her giving her a naughty smirk.

Even though Sharon kept asking Swayam to put her down, she was enjoying it
completely.

They finally reached their room.

Swayam: Take out the room keys from my pocket Sharon!

He was still not ready to put her down.

Sharon: No Swayam, tum khud nikaal lo.

Swayam: Nikalo gi to tum hi, and m not putting you down. Jab tak nahi nikalogi, ill stand here only carrying you in my arms.

Sharon gave up and took the key out and unlocked the door. Swayam entered their room and placed Sharon on the bed.

He stretched his arms signally he was tired and said,

Swayam: Kafi bhaari ho tum, ouch!

Sharons jaws dropped and she looked at him with an open mouth, shocked! She got hold of Swayams coat and mouthed,

Sharon: hawww Swayam!

Swayam giggled and hugged her.

Swayam: Bhari ho to kyahua, tum isse double bhari ho jaogi tab bhi main tumhe aise hi uthaunga, all my life!

Swayam passed Sharon her nightwear.

Swayam: You change here itself, bed se utarne ki zarurat nahi hai, its cold. I'll change in the bathroom and come.

Sharon adored him for his gesture and quickly changed. Swayam too changed and
came in sometime.

Sharon: baby'

Swayam: yup!

Sharon: there's a packet in my suitcase, red colour wrapper. Please take that out na and don't dare touch the others.

Swayam: yes boss!

Swayam opened the suitcase and took out the red gift box. Sharon signaled him
to give it to her and sit next to her. Swayam removed Sharon's day clothes from
the bed, closed the suitcase, and gave the box to her. He sat on the bed next to
Sharon. She moved closer to him and got herself cozy. She opened the gift box which contained few lavender scented candles. She knew Swayam loved lavender.

Sharon (handing the candles to Swayam): Since you've ordered me not to move out of the bed, you will have to light these up.

Swayam gave her a loving smile and happily lit the candles.

He came back to Sharon and mouthed a 'love you'. She moved closer to him and he made her sit on his lap. Sharon turned to face him. He kissed her on her forehead.

Swayam: Sharon, this was the best day of my life. I love you soo much Sharon.

Sharon: This was the best day of my life too Swayam.

Sharon monkeyed around him and hugged him. Swayam nuzzled his face between her hair and neck. He noticed she was still wearing the 'swaron' locket.

He kissed her on her nape. This made Sharon shiver. Sharon closed her eyes and moved her neck up. Swayam placed a trail of kisses on her nape and moved to her front neck. He held Sharons face and kissed her chin. Sharon had a sweet smile playing on her face.

Her eyes were closed and she seemed to be drifting into another world. She was
breathing heavily and her expression spoke a million words. She was longing for him.

Swayam held her by her neck from the back and laid her on the bed. He stroked
her hair and kissed all over her face. Sharon had her eyes closed and was holding
Swayams tee shirt. Swayam kissed both her eyes and called out to her.

Swayam (whisper): Sharon'.

Sharon opened her eyes slowly to find Swayam staring at her with a sweet smile.

Swayam lied beside her. Sharon moved closer to him, slipped her hand in his hair and placed her lips on his. They kissed each other for a long long time massaging each others back and head. Sharon made Swayam put his hand on her waist inside her tee shirt. After sometime she too slid her hand inside swayams back. Her touch made Swayams inside do summersaults. Neither of them was ready to break the kiss. They kept taking short breaks to breathe and continued kissing. Swayam rubbed sharons waist slowly. Sharons hand glided all over his back. The touch on the others skin was making shivers run down both their bodies.

Finally Swayam broke the kiss and pulled the quilt over them. He turned Sharon,
making her sleep straight on her back and ran his hand on her forehead slowly. He caressed her hair gently stroking his fingers through her hair a couple of times and kissed her eyes.

Swayam (whisper): you're beautiful...

A sweet smile spread on Sharon's face . She opened her eyes slowly and looked deep into his eyes. She pulled Swayam towards herself and hugged his head on her chest.
It gave her an unusual satisfaction. She felt complete and secure by hugging him
this way.
Swayam moved his body down and rested his head on her chest. Sharons
breath was getting heavier by the moment.


She glided under Swayams body and made him lie over her. She still hugged his face on her chest and massaged his head slowly.

Swayam slipped his hand inside her tee and held her waist. He knew Sharon was
loving the feel. Sharon took a deep breath and closed her eyes.

Sharon(whisper): baby'.

Swayam(softly): hmmm'.

Sharon(softly): I love the feel of your touch on my skin.

Swayam took a deep breath and pressed her waist firmly. He gave a little squeeze and gently rubbed her waist. He hugged her even tighter.

Sharon: I love you jaan'

Swayam: love you too baby'

Swayam: Sharon, I am sorry if I've hurt you in anyway...

Sharon understood he meant about them getting intimate.

Sharon: baby, you are not hurting me a single bit. You don't know how much I am
loving being close to you Swayam. Baby, really, being physically close to someone
means a lot to me. I can't get comfortable with anyone around me. It's difficult for
me to even hug guys, you know that. But with you, it's completely different. I love
the feel of being close to you. I love your touch. It's so divine. You make me feel so
secure. Baby, when we love each other so much, when our soul is one, really how
much does physical intimacy matter. We are already one jaan.

Swayam lifted his head from her chest and looked into her eyes.

Swayam: but we can take this slowly'

Sharon puts her palm on his cheek.

Sharon: Swayam, if you are uncomfortable, it's okay. But I really want to feel close
to you. I want to pour out all my love. I want to feel your warmth. I want you to feel
loved. I want to feel being loved. And what difference does it make before and after
marriage. Marriage is nothing but a commitment na, and we are already committed
to each other. And we love each other madly. I know you will never hurt me. I trust
you Swayam and I love you.

Swayam closed his eyes for a moment and opened them slowly. He looked deep
inside her eyes.

The mesmerizing fragrance of lavender was spread all around the room. The flickering candles made their faces shine under the dim yellow light.

Swayam slid his hand further inside Sharons tee shirt and placed his hands firmly on her lower back. Till now he would just hold her waist. With the other hand her held her back neck and softly pressed it. He massaged her back neck slowly relaxing her and distressing her muscles.

Sharon held him from his head. He moved forward and placed a suckling kiss on each of her eyes slowly. He kissed her forehead and moved to the bridge of her nose. He was noticing every pore on her face. He kissed her nose bridge, the corners of her nose and her cheeks. He then moved towards her right ear and murmured

Swayam (murmer): love you my princess'

Sharon took a deep breathe in.

Swayam sucked her earlobe and moved his hand behind her ear. He pressed the
back of her ear massaging softly.

Sharon relaxed her head and gulped.

Sharon was still holding his head. She kept running her hand though his soft hair and lightly massaging his head. Both of them were breathing heavily.


Sharon slowly guided his head towards her face and made his lips touch her chin.
She glided his face further down to her neck and moved her neck up to give him
more access. Swayam place a trial of kisses from her chin down her neck. She guided him further down making him kiss her adams apple, slightly left to the crook of her neck and down to her chest. She pulled him down almost to her cleavage. Both were drifting into trance. Swayam kissed her on her cleavage. The kiss made Sharon arch and she pressed his head on her chest. She let out a deep breath. The arch allowed Swayam to massage her lower back lightly.


Sharons muscles had gone stiff due to the cold weather and his touch and massages were breathtakingly relaxing. She left his head and slid both her hands inside his tee shirt absorbing his warmth.

Sharon (murmured): love you baby, I love your warmth sooo much.

Swayam kissed her cleavage again and ran his hand around her tummy inside her
tee. He circled his finger around her navel. This was driving Sharon crazy. She slid
her hands further up Swayams back and massaged his back. She was taking in deep breaths and breathing out with light sighs. She ran her hands all
over his skin feeling his warmth while Swayam rested his head on her cleavage and listened to her pacing heartbeat. The hot breath from Swayams mouth was making her feel very warm and secure. The pulsating movement of Sharons chest due to breathing heavily and the sound of her heartbeat were relaxing Swayam.


Both of them were fiddling with each others feet under the quilt.


Sharon turned a little towards her right making Swayam lay on his side. She pushed him slightly and made him lie down straight on his back. She slid her hand inside his tee shirt and felt the contour of his abs. She slowly lifted his tee shirt and made him open it.

Sharon ran her hand on his chest and felt every inch of his upper body. She moved
her face near his ear and whispered,

Sharon: you are sooo warm baby. I feel so secured in your arms.

She rested her head on his shoulder and placed her hand on his chest. She pulled
him and made him turn towards her. She hid her face in his bare chest and placed
a trail of kisses. She ran her hands over his waist and back. She kept massaging his back all throughout.

They entwined their legs and Sharon hugged him very tightly.

Swayam ran his hand over her head and caressed her hair gently. He placed a loving and deep peck on her hair.

He held her face and made her face him.

Swayam (whisper): we fit so perfectly into each other.

Sharon blushed and hid herself in his arms again.

She murmured against his chest,

Sharon (murmur): yes, we do. After all we are just meant to be together.

Swayam caressed her hair and took deep breaths, breathing in the fragrance of her hair. Her hot breath against his chest was relaxing him. His eyes were getting heavy and droopy. He pulled Sharon into another breath taking kiss.

He turned her around and made her lie on her stomach. He moved his body up
slightly and massaged her back neck with his thumb. This made Sharon let out a
small moan. It was relaxing her like nothing else could. He massaged and pressed her entire back over her tee shirt and loosened her up.

Swayam lay himself on Sharons back, held her hands and entwined his fingers with hers. He placed a kiss on her back neck. Sharon was breathing heavily making both their bodies sway up and down.
Swayam slid his hand inside her tee shirt and slowly but firmly pressed the side of
her tummy and her waist.

Sharon took a deep breath, squeezed Swayams palms and whispered

Sharon(whisper): I want to feel your touch...all over me jaan

Swayam slid his foot over sharons bare legs touching them lightly with his foot.
He slid his hand on her lower back and made her turn towards him. He hugged her
tight and Sharon dug her face in his warm chest.

The aroma around the room and the chill in the weather were playing their part well too.

Swayam moved his hand slowly up on her back. He glided his fingers over her skin. This made Sharon gasp and she let out a sigh.
He moved his fingers randomly all over her back a couple of times before placing his palm firmly on her back. He unhookedher inner garment and whispered

Swayam(whisper): relaxxx...this is soo tight, why do you wear it to sleep...it must be
hurting you.

Sharon dug her nails in Swayams back and gulped. She adored him for what he just did.

Sharon (whisper): love you Swayam.

Swayam (whisper): love you too baby.

Swayam massaged the back of her neck and stiff shoulders. He could feel Sharons
body relaxing against his. He held her by her waist and pulled her closer. Sharon ran her fingers down his spine, slowly massaging him along the line.


Both entwined themselves into each other and slowly slipped into deep sleep,
relaxed and content. The touch of their skins gave a sense of security to both which
they couldn't explain. Sharon slept cuddling Swayam with her face on his chest, her hands on his back and leg over his.
Swayam kept his hands inside her tee, soothing her upper and lower back with their bare tummies touching each other.


In a couple of hours Sharon came out of her peaceful slumber. She must have slept for not more than three hours or so, but she felt so fresh. She felt this was the best sleep of her life. She found herself wrapped securely in the arms of her man.

Sharon tried to move but couldn't. Swayam had held her very firmly. She slowly tried shifting and looked at his face. The expression on his face took her heart away once again. He looked so relaxed. She had never seen him this relaxed.

It was still night time and Swayams bear chest looked breathtaking against the
flickering candle.

She ran her hand over his chest absorbing the warmth. His lean chiseled body was to die for. She moved closer to his face and ran her fingers across his face. She placed a light peck on his forehead, his eyes and his lips. She moved down to his neck and suckled his nape.

This woke Swayam up. He looked at Sharon with his half open eyes. He smiled in half sleep and let out a soft sigh. Sharon moved down to his chest and placed small kisses all over.

She turned Swayam making him lie straight on his back and lied down over him. In no time she slept again breathing in the fragrance of his skin. By now even Swayam had slipped back into sleep.


After a few hours Swayam woke up and found Sharon sleeping like a kid over him.
He was adoring her when he recollected how Sharon kissed him and lay over him in the middle of the night. He ran his hand over her head and caressed her hair.


Sharon woke up after a while and looked up to him, still lying on his chest. She gave him a cute smile and elbowed herself us on his chest.

Swayam: oooucchh..sharonn...

Sharon moved closer to his face and pressed her lips against his. They gave each
other a small good morning kiss and Sharon elbowed back and slept back on his
chest.

Swayam left a gig and hugged her head.

Swayam: good morning jaan..
Sharon (murmured): love you!
Swayam: love you too. Aur sona hai?
Sharon: hmmm..I don't want to go away from you.
Swayam: acha? Aaj breakfast nahi karna?
Sharon: naii
Swayam: acha! Kal jab mujhe sona tha tab to tumhe breakfast ke liye jaana tha na.
Chalo utho. Breakfast ke liye late ho raha hai.

Sharon giggled, looked into his eyes and made a pout.

Sharon: mmm nahina,please...I want to stay like this aaj pura din.

Swayam smiled and adored her cuteness. He too never wanted to move away from Sharon even for a second. He kept lying with his eyes closed, feeling Sharons weight over him, massaging her head, caressing her hair and feeling her back

After a few minutes.

Sharon: baby...
Swayam: hmmm..
Sharon: aaj breakfast room mein mangwa le please?
Swayam: of course jaan. Kya kahogi?



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Okay, so this was the toughest chapter for me. i hope you guys enjoyed it.

request : please un-reserve you comments in the previous chapters. your comments are really valuable and lets me know which part of my writing you are enjoying.

thank ou all of you for your loving and encouraging words...
appologies for not being able to reply to your comments, as i am online mostly though phone, but i promise to reply very soon.

now coming to part 6, this might take some time to update...it all depends on how part 5 goes with you guys, i really hope i have managed to preserve their innocence.

do let me know in your comments how you guys liked this part and if there's any particular thing in this which stood out for you.

m blaberring so much cause am really nervous posting this part...

thank you deeps darling for your constant support and feed backs 😊 ❤️ 🤗

P.S.: please buddy me up to receive intimation on future updates and future works...its very difficult to scrap individually. 😊

love,
megha
Edited by megsy - 12 years ago
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First of all,the most tightest hug to my SBD for the best part till date...🤬🤗

Then for reserving the very first post for me...🤗
Aweee...di,this update is really beyond description...😲
The way you slowly proceeded,describing their intimacy...was just brilliant...👏
Superb writing ability and senses...😳
You use your maturity very well in your updates...😊
I earlier told you but still just can't stop saying it again...
I AM IN LOVE WITH YOUR SS...❤️

Loads of love...

yours misty...😳

Edited by megsy - 12 years ago
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sorry di for commenting so late

first of all a bigger thnk u for dis update...beautifully penned

it was like i m reading a poetry...so divine so pure...i dont have words to describe...it was fab

d way swaron inconcence is described...its just magical...n made me fall in love wid swaron once again

with each part i feel its d best part...n den wen i read nxt part...i feel its better den d best...continue soon
Edited by ShrutikaSwaRon - 12 years ago
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UMMM...hmmm...aaa...welll...let me find few words 1st...then i will come back and comment...😳


As u know...i write a lot...i like reading as well...ans swaron are one of the most important things which happened to me ...as they helped me resume my writing...after many years...well what makes this couple so different...so special...so MAGICAL...for me the answer would be ...their innocence...which adds charm to their undieing love...the love which was always expressed by swayam & always hidden by sharon...What makes this particular SS so special...with a special mention to this part...

It seemed like a dream to me...my dream walk...the love...the warmth...the care...the love...& last but not the least...THE INNOCENCE & PURITY ...of their unconditional love...m short of words to describe the effect of this part on me...

The little nuances ...the sweet murmurs...the gentle touches...those deep breath...they took my breath away...i didn't want to quote any lines here...as i loved each & every word of this update...stilll this laila avatar of sharon was breath takingly beautiful...

Swayam: Sharon, I am sorry if I've hurt you in anyway...

Sharon understood he meant about them getting intimate.

Sharon: baby, you are not hurting me a single bit. You don't know how much I am
loving being close to you Swayam. Baby, really, being physically close to someone
means a lot to me. I can't get comfortable with anyone around me. It's difficult for
me to even hug guys, you know that. But with you, it's completely different. I love
the feel of being close to you. I love your touch. It's so divine. You make me feel so
secure. Baby, when we love each other so much, when our soul is one, really how
much does physical intimacy matter. We are already one jaan.

Swayam lifted his head from her chest and looked into her eyes.

Swayam: but we can take this slowly'

Sharon puts her palm on his cheek.

Sharon: Swayam, if you are uncomfortable, it's okay. But I really want to feel close
to you. I want to pour out all my love. I want to feel your warmth. I want you to feel
loved. I want to feel being loved. And what difference does it make before and after
marriage. Marriage is nothing but a commitment na, and we are already committed
to each other. And we love each other madly. I know you will never hurt me. I trust
you Swayam and I love you.


I can't tell u ...what kind of happiness i am feeling after this beautiful update...i have read it N number of times...can read it for another 100 times...keep writing di...u are amazing...

PS-Thanx for thinking me worthy enough to read your updates first di...😳
Edited by megsy - 12 years ago
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Twinku dii🤗


I am dumbstruck after reading this hot hot update, this was a super hawwwt update, Swaron are so deeply in love, Awwiiieee they felt secure in each other's arms, you have beautifully penned down this update and am not at all surprised because aap ho hi tini brilliant writer. just loved this update, i have nothing more to say about this part cuz m short of words so just gonna saythis was super haawwwttt update. can't wait to read the next chapter, please update the next chapter ASAP.
Muuuaaahhh love you dii

Simi😃

Edited by sweetsimi123 - 12 years ago
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gudia di 😳

mein kya kahungi iss update ko...HOT HOT and TOO HOT!!!
right from the beginning...where swayam scooped sharon in his arms and asked her to unlock the door, provided she take the keys from his pocket...😉


Swayam: Bhari ho to kya hua, tum isse double bhari ho jaogi tab bhi main tumhe aise hi uthaunga, all my life!
this was indeed funny...and how cute of swayam...😆

and here also i loved the minute details she have noticed about swayam...that he loves lavender...and she bought the candles for him...how romantic...
and about the hawt part...its better i dont elaborate too much on it coz u have already penned down everything beautifully...
just loved the way they were pouring out their love, their comfortableness in each other's embrace, in their warmth, the eternal feeling of being loved is something magical to be experienced by ur special one and u just conveyed it through ur update so beautifully..😳

"Marriage is nothing but a commitment na, and we are already committed
to each other. And we love each other madly. I know you will never hurt me. I trust
you Swayam and I love you." these lines made me all goo-goo over swaron again...😊

and at the end sharon did not want to move away from him...she wanted to spend her whole day in his embrace...my god u have actually made me picturize a completely different sharon here...but whatever it is i guess i vl accept sharon in any way...😉

eagerly waiting for the next part...
Edited by sweetsimi123 - 12 years ago
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dat was hot.. il unres after sumtym hmm
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