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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update.. Starting with VirMan Convo it was hilarious 😛.. After reading this update i really felt bad for Manvi's Mom.. i love her.. hope manvi understand her Mom soon ... Looking fwd to the next part Update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update!!!!!😃
hahaha da strting was so funny😆
manvi was trying 2 push him off outside...
really manvi's mom wud thnk of getting him married 2 her 🤣
bt he is such a gud boy...😳
nd manvi's mom wqas supporting him nly...
poor manvi gt so pissed😛
manvi's mom's POV is also r8...
bt really want her 2 share dis wid manvi...
hmm virat bringing all da truths outside...
waiting 2 see wat will happen next...
plzzz cont soon... i luv ur stories sooo much🤗
luv u❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very funny update... like how they kept teasing each other.
wonderful written and loved it to much.

Can not wait to see how they will keep going like this.

Thanks for the pm.
Edited by Kiekeboe - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Caught up wid this story after long ..
So sorry for not commenting earlier .. due to exams !!
Wow .. just love it .. Ahhh Virat .. why is he so perfect ..
love the bond between Virat and Maanvi's mom ..
Wish Virat could meet his mom as well ..
n wish maanvi did something for him as well ..
Eagerly waiting for next update !!
Take care !! :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
aww awesome update
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
welcome back dear...awesome updt manvis mon-virat descussion n manvis reaction were too funny though i miss some last parts i will read that later...n thnx fr the pm...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum awesum ...njoyd readin evry bit f it !!!! lvd hw manvi's mum n virat cud read hr innr thoughts n rpld at same tym. ... manvi's mum n virat part was beautifully wrttn. tnx fo d pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update from the beginning till the end!!!😃
Virman parts were just hilarious!!!!!🤣
Seriously can anyone read someone's mind so well??? This is so amazing!!!😃

Today I realized Manvi's mom love her so much!!! From the beginning she is only thinking about Manvi & her future!!!!
It was really a superb update & quite touchy!!

Okay, by the way, what if Manvi was listening to all this till now?😲

Anyways, we will get to know this later on!!!

By the way gal, WELCOME BACK!!!!😃
You are back with a bang!!!! It had my full concentration while reading it...just amazing!!!!!!😃👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
i like u'r all story.this story is so nice.just love manvi and virat.virat is playboy but somehow inside he is a normal boy like other and manvi,she is really differant from other.virman bond is awesome.love virat and manvi mom conversation.hope manvi get know the true.thanks for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Okayyy somehow i missed chapter 11, but ahhh it was awesome!!

FOBLL loveddd the "huggg" and their bond is awesomeee, and OMG that part with Mannu nd her mom was awesomeee! you made Manvi stick to her character of being spoiled and bratty while apologizing, i liked how you didn't made her all sweet in one go... and ekkss virat for dinner..

part 12...

OMGODD still foblinggg at Manvi's reaction to him dressed upp and with flowers 😆, enjoyed how he nd her mom clicked instantlyyy , against her 😆😃 Awww Manvi's Mom, i feel for herr nd poor Viruuu relating back to his mom! 😔 truelyy enjoyed each minuteee

update soon

- Luv Pari

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