SS Manvi and Virat from the beginning part15,16

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manvilover18

@manvilover18

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#541

thanks for pm...

really awesome update...

sorry for late comments...

plzzz plzzz try to update soon and pm me...

waiting for next update...

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Rachel19

@Rachel19

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#542

hey very nice update 😊

loved the way virat and manvis mom were irritating manvi

but felt bad for virat he was missing his mom so much

and manvis bunnies pj's hilarious😆

i liked the bond between virat and manvis mom

such a sad story of her and the problems they were having

please continue soon

and thank you so much for the pm😳

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#543

Nisha... u write so well dear
it was fabulous update
virat impress manvi's mom, oh GOD
It was too gud
Love their bond
And virat manvi never ever be changed
Thanx 4 d pm dear
Waiting 4 next part ❤️

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floral

@floral

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#544

wow awesome update dear i just loved it please do continue soon and thanks for the pm dear. u are a fabulous writer i your great fan hatsoff to u dear . this update was really funny to me i enjoyed it a lot thanks for making me laugh😃😆

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virmanhus

@virmanhus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#545

OMFG!!!

U are a damn awesome author!!!!

i just read d first chap of this story, dat too only half (y half, i'll tell u,, wait)

i cudnt stop laughing at most of the instances..

Oh great she is shushing me now like my voice can beat her vacuum that is louder than a lawn mower. I went back in my room, grabbed a pair of scissor and did the unthinkable- cut the wire of her vacuum.

I need a camera, I need to take a picture of this look on her face. The noise is gone. Such a relief

There I told you, I have the geekiest sister on the planet

for heaven's sake i was rofling like nothing,,, now den i had to stop in half, coz my mom appeared from no where at the noise i made,, so like a good girl i had to get back to my work from reading...

Now dat she's looking at me, i'll have to read d rest at later

well the way u introduced manvi, the way u made her bold in introducing her family (only upto this have i read),, its so unique, hilarious & i love ur story already!!!

will read it till the present update & get back to u soon...

u are fabulous,, get going!!!

PS: Anu di (Bolt Blue) recommended ur writing to me, she's my favourite author,, wen she said dat u are hers i badly wanted to read ur work.. i read ur 'break my heart...; last night, i wanted to comment for it, but i think i'll grab some time coz its supre awesome... so i thank my dii alot for telling about u.. & vl soon comment dere & followa all ur stories.. u are epic!!! 😉

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deepika03

@deepika03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#546

finally da truth is revealed...i wonder y mother daughter dint have this kinda moment before...anyways it was a great update and fully justified manvi's mom's behavior though it was still unfair of her to be negligent towards manvi...

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sn2012

@sn2012

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#547

Yayy you've updated, I've missed your writing so much! Awww love how Virat and Manvi's mum get along but also how it annoys Manvi is so cute. Virat's care for Manvi is so sweet. Manvi's mums reasons behind her action was heart touching, I'm glad you gave us an insight to why she's doing what she's doing, makes us look at her from a different perspective, hope Manvi eventually does find out. Can't wait for the next update! :)

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kinz

@kinz

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#548

viraat and manvi are seriously Hilarious🤣 viraat seriously touch her feet? thats was really unexpected Casanova and Hitler really know her well and there bond was awesome just in there first meeting they both care for her...i think after this dinner manvi's mother will definatly compare her dates with viraat😉 i hope she would not allow her to date anyone else other then viraat

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Faria12345

@Faria12345

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#549

This part was realllyyy cool!!!!! Loved how mr. Casanova n hitler read her mind.. N Virat ufff he is so damn sweet... Proper knowledge n dressed up ahem to be son in law huh...
Finally hitler had a story behind her ruthlessness... I wish manvi was listening to it from behind... Wud make a hell lot difference... I can't wait for next part... Plzzz update soon n pm meee

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nisha22222

@nisha22222

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#550

i m a brand nw reader of this story
the story is amaxing
luved the new virman nd virat having a gud image in frnt of manvis mom
wld luved to read further
do cntinue soon

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