SS Manvi and Virat from the beginning part15,16

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Cintila

@Cintila

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#221

wow !! Another great update. Poor virat even he is as lonely and isolated as manvi. You've developed both their characters beautifully. Would love to read how the story churns up further. Thanks for the pm 😃

Quote

littlesmile

@littlesmile

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#222

luved dis update ❤️ nd i dnt seem like u have writeen it in just 20 min.till nw we just saw maanvis side of story but on dis part we got to see viraats side.both virmaans characters r really typical nd dey seem to b different from outside but dey r actually so sensitive from inside.thanks for d PM 😊

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Disha

@daydreamer9

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

hey,thanks for the pm.i'm feeling really bad for virat and manvi.they're kinda going through the same.i really don't know how it feels if you're ignored by your family.but i guess it sure is super annoying and frustrating when they have time to lecture you but don't have the time to show affection.😔

Quote

Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Fab Update..! felt sorry for Virat and Maanvi...though the scenario at home is different but they chose to over come their problems the same way...i.e. doing xactly opp of what parents wants u to...ok apart the emotional..loved Maanvi specially the way she turns every sad..bad moment in to a comic...it hurts her but she has learn to live with it...n Thanks for putting in Virats POV n his BG...

loved this dialogue..'I swear if he doesn't lose his smirk he is going to lose a tooth for sure.'...😆

And again he wanted a payback then change of mind as he got the glimpse of Maanvi's part...now would love to read further on how story progreses...specially Maanvi not liking Mr. Casanova n then wrking at the presentation n he would ateast would wana know more abt her which would annoy her more...eager for the next part...

Thanks for the PM Nisha...~!

Quote

Anagha

@anu1989

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Oh Man I Love this Maanvi yaar... She has becoming an inspiration 4 me !!!

Loved Virat's POV & now I am luking 4rwd 4 VirMan to become friends hopefully through this presentatn ...

Thanks 4 the PM Nisha 😊

Quote

oriyana

@oriyana

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Hey Nisha, sorry for not commenting on ur work lately...

And Virat changing his perspective about Maanvi was what I expected when Maanvi was talking to her mother's secretary...

All in All... I am loving this story...

Quote

naina

@naina927

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Nisha i will always be there... dnt ver delete me from your buddy list...

and i want to apologise... i didnt comment on the last part... i was busy...

now coming to the update... it was fab...!!!!

honestly its hard to believe that u wrote it in 20 minutes n that is incredible...!!!! 👏 👏

you are really an amazing and an outstanding writer...!!!!!

i loved the update to the core... ❤️

virat n his family background... oh my gos he is from a broken family but still he has nothing against viren... infact he loves his brother... bcos generally in such cases, siblings develop a bitter relationship...

really liked these parts...

I was in for another lecture but luckily we reached my school. "I'll pick you up at 5 pm sharp." Hitler ordered.

"Awww I love you too." I said sarcastically and slammed the door shut.

I swear if he doesn't lose his smirk he is going to lose a tooth for sure. I looked around him and asked, "Where are your ermm friends? You look different today." Pretending to think I continued, "It is probably because this is the first time I'm seeing you without any girl stuck to your body."

He gave me a fake smile at my snide comment, "You want to stand here and discuss about my friends or you want to work on the stupid presentation?"

Placing my finger on my chin I answered, "What should I choose worse or worst? I'll go with worse, lets work on the presentation."

She wasn't too far either and she asked me the usual question, where are all my 'girlfriends'. Whats wrong with this girl? Why is she so worried about who I hang out with? God, if I didn't know her well I'd think she was jealous or something. But knowing Manvi, she just needs a reason to pick up on people.

Quote

missmystic

@missmystic

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#228

Great update nisha
Love manvi's sarcastic comment
I loved it when she said:

Placing my finger on my chin I answered, "What should I choose worse or worst? I'll go with worse, lets work on the presentation."

I was like LMAO hahaha

Virat's POV was also nicely written
Thanx for the pm :)

Quote

hangok

@hangok

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#229

oohhh looks like the story has now began,
i mean virat has learned something about manvi😊
im excited to know virats perspective about manvi now...

thanks for pm

Quote

Dina

@-DeeNaa-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#230

Yayyy u updated!!!! Loved it again!!!! Ur updates are just beyond hilarious! Manvi character is just so effin awesome! her attitude rocks! and her sarcasm is just LMAO and I love this line cause it soo me :P " I'm not disrespectful, I just like to live life on my terms. I swear when anyone tries to impose something on me it automatically triggers me and I end up doing the exact opposite of what they want" haha and am loving Mr. Casanova and Ms. Cribbers! And Virats point of view is superb! Queen Manvi!! hahaha! Waiting for next update which am sure is not soon but u can always surprise us u knw :P

Quote

1 ... 21 22 23 24 25 ... 71

SS Manvi and Virat from the beginning part15,16 - Page 23

Related Topics

Explore Topics