SS Manvi and Virat from the beginning part15,16 - Page 24

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey nisha...u updated...unexpected...As usual awesome...it is so funny... i was laughing while reading... you are awesome in this ha...and the dialogues were beyond awesome...your 20 mins work was superb...lol... virat's pov was also nice... both were in the same boat... i mean virman...yayyy...here goes my usual line...i like this song...lol... i will try to change in future...Where is PL epilogue nishu...U know i m waiting for that...Show some mercy...anyways thanks for the pm and take care nish...U better update anything sooner...otherwise i will protest...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update Nisha... 😊 ...
Loved the manvi style and attitude...bilkul bindaas... 😊
The way u described everything was superb... 👏 ...
I was really waiting the virat side...n finally...i got it... It was amazingly written😃 ...
Loved the whole update to the core...
Continue soon if possible...thank u so much for the pm... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Okay firstly, I didn't get anything in the update so read it all over again which wasn't a great idea as I have a migrane but. I decided to read it for old times sake nisha and woah girl you got some talent. Haha manvis mum a babysitter that cracked me up. And virat doesn't seem to have a great bond with his mum and dad oops step mum. Hmmm both seem in the same situation in a way.
Thanks for the pm
Update soon even though your going to take another two weeks ( ps If you want to remove me from your buddy list don't even think about it. Lol jokes you can because I hardly comment on any of your work pieces let me do this auspicious work my self i will un buddy you. Nice getting to know you Americano .)
Thanks for listening to my bakwaas nisha. And hope you get a great response.
Inayah x you can have a last jhappi off me 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
There you go I've done it were no longer buddies. You should be happy because I hardly okay I mean ever get time comment on your work. You can remove me from the pm list. But this isn't the last of my friend across the pond we shall see more. Hasta la vista baby x 😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
And it's unfair to you because as you said you send out over 70 pms if I read that right yeah and I don't ignore it I never have. So I am trying to get you some justice
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Posted: 12 years ago
Okay I've commented more than I ever have on this ss wow I should get a medal 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shit I forgot its not the Hogwarts CC. Bye nisha good luck with the rest of the SS. Ps will this be considered spamming 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
omggg this is freakinggg hilarious goshhh man it takes guts to write such awsomeee stufff add me in ur pm list too so tht i cnt miss it and yeah did i tell u tht its the mosttt uniqueee thingiee ive evaaa read 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am glad you updated Virat side of the story, it is heartbreaking to see him like this, just like Maanvi side is.

I curious to see how both their presentation will go and how they will work together.

Great job and thx for the pm! 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lolzzz its damn funny...hehehehhe...both r so witty...like u scratch my back so ill scratch urs...tit for tat...both r such arrogents brats...any ways virat side story is not much different...both parents r so much involve in there work that they dont hv a time fr there kids, but still they expecting them to behave obediently...how? Why? Any ways cont soon

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