Virman-ff-two left feet - part 18-ii

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sweets1126

@sweets1126

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#371

Awesome part!!:) Thanks for pm!

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#372

Awesome update!!!
Loved it!!!
Virat is so adorable!!!
The way he cares for manvi is so sweet!!!
Beautifully written!!!
Love your style of writing, it's superb!!
Waiting 4 ur next update!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#373

What an update dear!! Awesome ⭐️.. Loved it totally.. Its a mixture of different emotions.. Loved those little family get together moments 😊.. It was very well portrayed 👏.. Vmom is a sweetheart.. Loved the way she was trying to make them feel better.. Awww Virat ☺️.. Love him.. He is naughty but at the same time very caring also.. Manvi is one lucky girl 😉.. Loved the way Virika were teasing them 😛.. Superb update Anu 👍🏼.. Will be waiting for the next part.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 🤗

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Kiara_rocks

@Kiara_rocks

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#374

aww...this was too cute !!! Virika are known for ruining Virman moments !! kidding!!
Pleasant surprise indeed !! Virat is just too adorable !!

Awsum update !!!!!!!!!

continue soon...

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MadhuChowdary

@MadhuChowdary

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#375

hey anu...let me first recollect how many emotions you have included in this update..mixture of all the emotions...indeed it was good...well written...i liked vanshika's scenes...virat's love for manvi is nicely portrayed...and let me remind you one thing...you have another ff called sachchapyar..so kindly update that one also...thanks for the pm and take care anu...

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shona9

@shona9

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#376

Dear anu...
Loved it...
Full of emotions...
Loving dis virat...
Thanks 4 d pm...

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Kiekeboe

@Kiekeboe

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#377

*res

My my my the Virat in love, worried and caring... how is melting me ...

I truly love this update, such family care... their love...

Wonderful written...

Edited by Kiekeboe - 12 years ago

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preetipc

@preetipc

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#378

Loved the update anu.I am in love with Virat .Love how much he cares for her, her small hurt and pain makes him forget him everything around him, and just he sees is her .Love him , he loves her so much . Loved Vanshika mom .The way she understand Virat and Manvi's guilt and the way she comforts them .Loved the way Viren teased them and Virat not paying attention to it and just concentrating on Manvi alone.Waiting to see what happens next in their lives .

And as i am instructed 😆 no more P.s from u , here is the thing i would say as a note

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..After ur every update , i am all like this till ur next update going fro and back to ur every story threads.(.its u😆)so now and then update all ur stories to save this soul 😆Pls sacha pyaar bhi update karna .thanks for the pm😊

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Aenna

@Aenna

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#379

Haye i was waitinggg for dis update eagerlyy
its d bst update ever.. .
Omgg virat was being crazy day by day
waooo m enjoyingg dis track nd i luved
Dis update update asap