Virman-ff-two left feet - part 18-ii - Page 33

Awh dis was awesomeee... Loved it... Romantic and full of emotions... Love the way Virat expressed his love.. Awh... Love u.. Thanks alot for writing dis FF... As I told u earlier also nd repeating it again dis is my fav FF... ❤️
And thanks for updating 😉

eee..thnk u for the fast update !!! Beautifully written !! Love it !! Loved d confession !!!!
:)

yayy...anu this thread has reached 50 pages...party do na mujhe...


coming to this update...excellent one...romantic and emotional...i loved it...the way manvi made virat express his love was nice...but how he confessed his love for her was really amazing...haha...desperate virat was so funny...he was madly in love with her...i want to read this line in this particular ff...i so loved it...u made me happy with this update...even though u said that many plz's...i m going to say it was short...dont hate me for that...i was just kidding...short but sweet update...why u were feeling guilty...anyways thanks for this update and for the pm...take care anu...

see...my comment is on 50th page...ab tho party banti hai(for party update SP or TLF)...i can take that as a party...lol...

I loved the whole update specially the virat's confession...
n thanx for pm


hey congrats u reached 50pages...

Its damn hot n romantice...cont soon

it was gr8 as always
i jumpd lyk a monkey when i saw your pm. and my mom was like whats wrong???
Really you are such great writer. Please update next past soon. I cant wait for it

Wow!!!! I'm short of words.. Thanks so much.. look forward to part 13..

a chapter worth the wait...amazing beautiful, descriptive and mature...great work

Woow.. Wonderfully written, da emotions were portrayed wit gr8 perfection, at 1st i liked ur works but now m fallng hard for dem as jst gettng da pm lits up my face... Jst amazing.

Hey Anu
Firstly sorry i didn't comment on last update as i was busy in somewhere
Last one and this one was brilliant update
I thought as u mention 3rd last update that so called maya going to seduce virat, i was scared but after reading both the updates i'm too glad...
Now they are one just like virman
I just loved both the update
Virat confess his love wooow, the way he said was awesome and i like manvi too how she played with him
And last para was super and beautifully writen
Thanx 4 d pm
Waiting 4 ur next part... Update Soon