Virman-ff-two left feet - part 18-ii

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#331

Wow anu yu are such a great writer ...:-)
Thanx for sending me link of this ff ...nw I realize wat I was missing its reallygreat 👍🏼
Pls pls update sooon nd do pm :-)

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ramanirani

@ramanirani

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#332

hey amazing yar...
you carried their emotions well...
thanks for the promo dear...
continue soon...

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#333

First of all thank you so much for this super fast update.. You made my day.. 🤗

Wonderful update Anu .. Amazing ⭐️.. I loved it to the core.. It was beautiful.. I just cant stop admiring Virat in this update .. His dialogues are very well written👏.. Loved this love-struck naughty Virat veryyy much...

Manvi is really very smart 😛.. Loved the way she made him confess his love.. You have portrayed their emotions, their relationship beautifully 👏.. The last part of the update is just awesome 😳⭐️.. Will be waiting for your next update.. Thanks a lot for the pm.. Take care 😊

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afreen

@afreenkansal

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#334

Awesome update
At last first confessed
Continue soon

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Aenna

@Aenna

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#335

Waooo it was reallyyy heart touchinggg...
Nd i just luved it how manvi teased him..
Nd dere love for other nd
m sooo happy dat
finalyyy virat confessed his luv
update asap

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Kiara_rocks

@Kiara_rocks

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#336

Lovely update...finally virat confessed his love to manvi... 😊
The way manvi make virat talk was so cute...loved every bit of the update... thanx 4 d pm too