SS:ARJUN PROMISE..i m always with u riya*Completed* - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

[not-sorry fr thoda filmy hai]
SCENCE-One old man coming from inside n took one light lamp on his hand
.
a gaye tum log ,vo kab se tumhara entjar ker rahi hai,
shree nerver n fearing so he hold arjun hand,
A-shree ye bachon ke taraha mera hath kyun pakad rakha hai ,leave my hand
.
Sh-sir plz pakadane digiye ager mujhe kuch ho gaya to meri family ka kya hoga
(,in mind)
kahan phasa diya mujhe oh god plz aj bachha lena
.
they both goes inside n sit on the sofa ,
Arjun ask the old man-yahan etna andhera kyun hai...
man says -bus wait for few minute sab. pata chal jayega
...says this the man goes from there
shr-sir sab kuch kitna ajeeb lag raha hai , pehale us door ka atuomaticaly open hona ,phir us man ka sudenly hamare samne ana...
A-(in very n observing cool style)
haan shree kuch to ajeeb hai per jaisa tum sonch rahe ho vaisa nahi n say somthing in shree years shree nodded in yes n left
.
FEW minute later
.
both saw a beautiful girl comes down from the the stair with one candle in his hand n wearing white sarii ,

with sime horror
background music ...
,arjun observing her very carefuly but he culd not see her face...
.
arjun follow that girl...
A-abhi to yahin the ab sudenly kahan chali gaye,
Acp arjun ko bevkufe banana etna bhi asan nahi
.
on the other side riya( in mind) ye to darne ke vajaye mere piche he pad gaya,ab ese yaha se kaise bhagayun
(she also not seeing arjun face due to darkness)
.
sudenly she saw one man, usake pure chehare per blood laga tha n usake muh se do bade bade dant nikal rahe the,
ye kon hai ye chotu to nahi hai...
kon ho tum but the man dont giv reply,...dekho age mat ana verna ...she sreemed loud n pushed that man n run from there,
plz sombody help dekho mere pass mat ana...
during runing she bang on one person ,
TO B CONTINUE---



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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
U should continue...I really like the concept...just one thing shouldn't Roshni be a little older bc if she is 30 and Riya is 18 tht doesn't sound right...srry if it ofended ui was just trying to point it out
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23



Hahahhhaaa sorrryyy if i disspoint any one but kya karon repeat style entry dekh dekh ker or pad her borrr ho gaye the ,formaly introduction thoda bor lag raha tha ... to meine socha kuch alag karon if u like my start then i continue other wise i stop writing this ss,
acctualy mein thoda funy n filmy banana chahti the ,
ek new experiment pata nahi succesful hoga ke nahi...
so plzzz plzzz leav ur comment that u like
arjun entry or not...
n sorry for waistinggg ur time...



CHAPTER-2-PG-8&9
Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey ...
Great start ... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: arnavkhushi1206

U should continue...I really like the concept...just one thing shouldn't Roshni be a little older bc if she is 30 and Riya is 18 tht doesn't sound right...srry if it ofended ui was just trying to point it out


first thankkk for such a sweet comment
n about roshani age
roshani=30
when riya=10
that meen roshani 18ya19 ke hogi jab uski sam se marrige hue hogi,
so is i m right or not plz tell me ,shuld i chang????
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Plz tell me that person who banged with riya is Arjun
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Christeee

Plz tell me that person who banged with riya is Arjun


sorrry dr but uske liye next part ka wait kerna padega ...n thank u for commenting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28

🤣🤣🤣 i luved the update... its really funny continue soon... bt dnt 4gt to update ur other FF

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Posted: 12 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Leki

🤣🤣🤣i luved the update... its really funny continue soon... bt dnt 4gt to update ur other FF


Thankkk dr for ur lvly n suported comment
n dont warry dr nahi bhulungi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Hey , intersting ..
I think vo Arjun hi hoga jisne Riya ko daraya hoga..

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