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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: shrutisweety
awsome start dear
different concept
so now arjun is on mission
intersting
continue soon

Thankss shruti for such a suportive comment

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Queen.Bee
awesome!!! so rathore n roshini is riya's parents!! so sad sikender killed both of them!!! loved ur concept.. update soon!!

Thankss dr for ur lvly n suportiv comment ,

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: fatima15
fantastic start dear :) loved it
different concept
continue soon😃

Thankss fati for liking that concept

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Arooj Arain

@aroojarain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

wow!! diffrnt nd amzing cncpt dear :) lovd it.:) continue soon :)

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856040

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Hey loved the concept continue soon

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Such a different concept dear..

like it , plz continue soon & PM me.😊

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athira

@shruti-love

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

nice concept

loved it

cont soon and pm me

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

HI FR I M BACK WITH MY SS ,I HV NO IDEA THAT ALL LIKE OR NOT ,BUT I JUST WANA TO WRITE SOMTHINK DIFF HOP U LIK,N PLZ LIKE N LEAV UR COMMENT IF U LIKE
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****Chapter - 1-****
"arjun's welcom in riya's house"
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SCENCE-
THREE FR R DISSCUSING SOMTHING--
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what koe ACP Aa raha hai,
...
No way mein apna khayal khud rakh sakti huin,mujhe kise ke jarurat nahi hai,
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Its my life n mein jaise chahungi vaise spent karongi,
koe bhi acp aa ker mujh per order nahi chala sakta
.
Dont warry Re we all r here ,mil ker dekh lenge us Acp ko,(One man saying this n showing his punch),bus ek pach or vo ACP to gaya samjho,
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hahahahhha all laughing
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Re-i kno tum sab ho,tabhi to mujhe kise bath ke tension nahi hai,
Riya giv highfy to mahak n chotu
(Riya ,mahak n chuto r frs n first chuto r riya's bodygard but very soon they becom fr)
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Re-kuch to soncho yr us acp ka kya karen,ke vo acp khud ba khud yahan se bhag jaye,
mahak chuto kuch to soncho
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chu-kyun na hum us acp ko etna khan khilane ke kha kha ker mota ho jaye ,or commissionar sir use khud job se nikal de
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mahak n riya -stop chuto kya bekar idea hai,tumhen khane ke sivaye kuch or najar ata bhi hai ya nahi,
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kuch or soncho yr...
yes gosht...what gosht...hann ghost bus ab rat ka wait karo,
ch-Rat ka
R-han rat ka ,vo acp rat main he ane vala hai na..mahak us acp ka nam kya hai...
Ma-yann...Wait...kuch kamba sa nam hai ...hann ACP Arjun Shuryakant rawte..
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R-What!! hahahhha kya nam hai like mahabharata arjun...dharm ka sath dene,vinash ko rokane,her yug mein ayega ek arjun...
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hahahahh...eska nam hi old sound hota hai to ye kaisa dekhata hoga ,mota sa ,thoda kala n bade, bade muchun vala
OMG Poor arjun ese nahi pata ,ke hum ese sath kya kerne vale hai,

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

OMG,bus karo...bechara acp use kya pata ke uske sath kya hone vala hai.
(Opps abhi arjun aya bhi nahi or yahan to arjun ke bare mein kya kya soncha ja raha hai,lets read ,
ab arjun kya kerta hai)
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SCENCR-arjun n shree outside the riya's house
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(shree was an it sepcitist ,n commissioner instruct arjun that shree also work with him ,so arjun hv no choise)
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A-ehase kya dekh rahe ho shree
Sh-sir ye to kaphi bada gher hai!!!
A-kyun tumhen kharidana hai
Sh-no sir mein to...but stop to see arjun angry face
A-ager tumhara ghurana band ho gaya ho to ander chalen..
shree nodded yes n follow arjun,
ajeeb bat hai shree yahan ass pass to light hai,per...
both took only two three step ...sudenly one person r comes there n say--
bhag jao ,bhag jao yahan se barna--
arjun caught his collor n ask varna kya hann kya karega ...man...hahaaa mein kuch nahi karunga per ...
vo sab kuch ker sakti hai..
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Sh-sirr ye kiski bat ker raha hai ,mujhe to der lag raha hai..
A-oh sutup shree mujhe bat karne do ,
Man-vo tum dono ko nahi chodegi ,
usaki atma yaha kise ko chein se jine nahi deti,vo yahan apne pyar ko dhund rahi hain ,or jab tak vo use nahi milega vo yahan se nahi jayege
sh-Whattt!!! . atma kya bat ker rahe ho...sir plz abhi chalten hai hum morning mein yahan atein hai...kahin us atma(soil) ne hamein mar...
A-oh sut up shree ye atma ,vatma kuch nahi hoti,or ye pagalon ke tarah batein kerna band karo...ager commissioner sir ne nahi kaha hota na to mein tumhen...
Sh-sorry sir
arjun turn toward man but the man is not there,
ab ye kahan gaya,
Sh-sir vo man kahan gayab ho gaya ,kahin vo
A-shreee giving an angry look...just keep quit n follow me,
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both goes near the main door(,it was very big )
n wana to ring the bell but before he ring,
the door was atumaticaly open,
khaaarrr rrr