Arshi-Yuvreen-Rishbala:Under One Roof Part6 - Page 31

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chaichil

my fav scene... She turns to walk when suddenly Arnav grabs her from her wrist and pulls her towards him. All she could do was to just collide to his hard chest. She looked into those evil eyes. They were filled with rage and anger. He was turning red with anger.

gosh this was soo intense...i loved khushi's character the best the way she is described shez a strong girl...ww i luv her confidence


damn this was the bestedt dialog i jus luvd it

Yuvraj: Now she is the one who deserves to be ASR's girlfriend. Lavanya jaise tho hazaron mil jayengi. But it would be hard to find a girl like her. She best suits my bhai.


i really loved suvreen and madhus bonding i think they will make good frnz...


please dnt make yuvreen so guddy guddy mushy mushy pair...and please lyk in d show dnt make suvi be crazy abt him...
please even give them tht intense walla scenes!!!...tht jus my opinion

but manish ur update was so osum👏
keep up the gud work...all the emotions were so well expressed hats off buddy!!!!😃





Thanx a lot tanya...!!! 😃😃...and ya I know I did justice to Arshi jodi...but not for rishbala and Yuvreen in this update I think..I am sorry for that...and ya Arshi's intense scene had really come out well..😃 Hopefully I can put some more intense scenes for Yuvreen and Rishbala as well...Finger crossed...I think for that I have to make Yuvraj a little bad boy na? 😉 Dialogue..I so knew it..that atleast one of the SG fan or Arshi fan will like that Yuvi ka dialogue...so childish and that too best describes Arshi jodi isnt it..? 😉 😆 Okay, now this is a surprise...I mean while writing Suvi-Madhu part I did not know that would get such a good response..In turn I thought Kushi-Payal or Kushi-Anjali wala bonding would steal the show...or even Padmini-Raj and RK-Raj bonding was soething good...But then not bad I think the friendship wala magic did work out. And ya I too thought that Yuvreen story is getting a little lame here...should work on them..I think I need to think toda hatke next time...I need to do justice to this couple...but kya karoon inko door karne ka man hi nahi kartha..so I end up make it all goody goody...looks like it is time for me to wear my thinking hat and then think..!!! 😛😃😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago


Thanx a lot kavana.!!! 😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sujairohit

Very nice update.Liked it.



Thanx a lot akka..!!! 😃😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nathiya143

Nice update . Thanks for the pm . Tc.



Thanx a lot Nathiya..!!! 😃😃😃 and congrats for ur wedding..!! and also All the best..!!! 😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago


Thanx a lot...!! 😃😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meniranjana00

oho.. k read all ..
and now he becomes her senior???seriosly



Thanx a lot for reading all the parts...and yes Arnav is Kushi's senior here...Just wait watch wat turns they take in the love life...!! 😆 😉 😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago


Thanx a lot Suruchi..!!! 😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was fab... i really loved yuvi's dialogue dat khushi should be asr's gf.. lav jaise to bht h.. hehe
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mehak06

That was fab... i really loved yuvi's dialogue dat khushi should be asr's gf.. lav jaise to bht h.. hehe



Thanx a lot Mehak...So think Yuvi is becoming the Dialogue wala character of this FF...hehehe 😆 😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ok, so I'm gonna break my usual record of long commenting n chapparing... 😉

Dear manish,
U remember me no??😉 😆
Yes? Den good boy!!
No, den... 😭

Hee hee!!!!! Jst kidding!!

Ok, first apke answers...
My fav charecter: My ASR!! <3
Den RK n Cheetah on numbr 2!! <3

Fav scene; wen RK convinces Arav.. Oops! I mean RAJ... 😊
Nt up 2 mark: yuvreen...

Ok answerd...

Now commentating!! Criket wala nai commenting wala... 😆
It ws... Kuch Naya bolti hoon...
Umm... Rotabulus!! (ROkin n fanTABULUS) ;)
Mastacular (MAST n spectACULAR) :P
Ossum blossom
Coolyo!!

Hee hee! Aakhir khar Maine record thoda ni!! ;))

Nywys... Looong tym since v tokd... 😊
Edited by Aditi_4ver - 12 years ago

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