NEW FF Bheege Hont Tere

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Bheege Hont Tere


Character Sketch


Aditya Aluwalia Kumar - Age 22

Younger Brother of Shabir, College Student. Aspires to one day also become successful. Spoilt, fun loving and everyone's favourite. Very popular has rivalry with Arnav Singh Raizada. Still continuing his family enemity with the Raizadas. He does not understands the meaning of love and thinks it only exists in books.


Shabir Aluwalia Kumar - Age 25

News reporter by profession also handling his families hotel business now becoming the Trustee of the College his brother studies in. he doesn't believes in family enemity and is the best friend to his brother. He has no time for love but is a big flirt.


Arnav Singh Raizada - Age 22

College Student, reserved, rich and everyone wants a bit of him. Younger brother of Prachi who loves his sister and will do anything for her. He doesn't believes in love, but real love can change him.



Prachi Singh Raizada - Age 23

She believes in love, waiting for Mr perfect despite being engaged to Viren Vadhera a well known lawyer. Older sister to Arnav, doing voluntary work at his college for time pass.


Pankhuri Gupta - Age 20

Younger sister to Kushi, entering higher education at a new college. Quite girl, reserved and punctual speaking out the truth. She looks for Mr Right for her Sister believing in arrange marriage for herself.


Kushi Kumari Gupta - Age 21

Older sister to Pankhuri. Waiting to get married, to a dutiful husband. This is her only dream although she is doing home science in college. Best friend of Prachi.

PART 1

Dressed in yellow light saree, she walked out into the empty brown streets of kolkata. The night sky had fallen, the stars illuminated the streets and was the only source of light in this darkness. There was a spring in her heels as she has found a new existence, she felt wanted, she felt loved, she felts as if the world around her was beautiful. She was indeed in love.

The heavy rain tip topped over her wide open dotty umbrella. She wanted to dance, she smiled, her face glistened. She let the umbrella fly away, now being drenched in the rain.

A big bulky hand suddenly grabbed onto her shoulders from the back, which shook her up. She wished to turn around, but was stopped by his fierce strength. His face approached her neck, like a cobra that wants to attack his prey.

His light razor like stubble bruised her delicate skin cutting into her face. He vigorously rubbed his cheeks onto hers, igniting a fire; like the way when two stones are clashed against each other. He unfastened his silky tie and put it around her mouth, as he did not wish to hear her squirming.

She plans to fight back, her arms now swinging to punch him from behind but little did she know this man came prepared as every move of hers was read by him accurately now grabbing both her hands and the whole of his body leaned against hers pulling her to a near by ally.

He pushed her against a bricked wall and unbuttoned his shirt breathing really deeply. She tried to run and escape this nightmare, but he quickly unbuckled his belt, took it out and spinned it around her leg which made her fall on the floor. His trousers now came off, and he stood nude.

She looked up not being able to see his face, thanks to the cursed dark night. Laying on the floor, praying for a miracle, crying her heart out she could not escape as he came forward undressing her.

He ripped open the blouse, and molested her breasts. He sucked on them like a tiger and made them bleed as if he is a cannibal. He then made his way down by roughly kissing her stomach. Her saree was now all off and he fulfilled his biggest desire entering her body. After he finished with her body he whispered in her ears "bheege hont tere..".

She was Raped!

Two years later...

NOTES:(Please comment ur feedback as this will help us monitor if you guys are liking the script and if you would like us to continue.. We will ONLY continue writing this story if u guys are liking it.. do write what part of the story u like and which characters wud u like to see more?? x thanks xcomments below or PM me.. if u have read and liked it... 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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it's really shocking...
bt got all my fav ppl
update soon..
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Omg! Poor girl! Who was that?
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CONGRATS
SHOCKING START
WHO IS THE GIRL AND THE GUY
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some think different from others...
n i really liked it...
continue soon..
thanx fr the pm...
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Totally different ... Quite shocking start ...
Add me to the pm list 😉
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Wow what a start.. who was the poor girl
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i really like the casting

I part is very shocking pls continue the story
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A shocking start! However, im very eager to see where the story goes from here! Thank you for a great beginning
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