Swaron Christmas OS - My only wish this year

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LittleBitOfAlexis

@LilBitOfAlexis

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

the OS was perfect for the occasion of christmas .It was just amazing and you wrote it

beautifully 👏

i loved the ending of the OS and the part where swayam stucked a red bow on his shirt as her christmas present🤗

Keep writing OS

Edited by swaron_pk - 12 years ago

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@--devilish--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

eeepss that was so damn cute...it was awesome...☺️their first meet...

then the ice skating...

then the snowball fight...

the flowers...ornaments...their cute cute lovely moments...

beautifully written 👏

the whole time i was completlly spellbound 😊

will be waiting for the othr updates! 😳

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muskan

@LoveShantannu

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Tanya you again left be speechless. Bow to you. I guess it is the longest and the best os I have ever read. Seriously it is a masterpiece and a pure yet heart touching piece of writing. The way you described Sharon's first emotions about being a loner was amazing and how swayam came in her like a wisp of fresh air and took away her miseries. Then how they spent time with each other. Their kiss under the mistletoe. Their sweet talks. And their final confession. All was written perfectly and smoothly. One again bow to you

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Simren

@DanCing_DiVa_SK

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Hey sweety sorry for updating late...
Tanya Amazing OS yaar...
Loved it...
Beautifully penned down OS...
It was a cutee and long update...
Thnkx for the PM dear...

Simren👏

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Karen Johnson "Maria"

@Karen_sharon

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Hey Tanya aka my dear sweet shona (ur new name 😃), 1st of all Merry Christmas and this OS was truly Fab...tonight I'm goin for the Christmas Mass to Church and I'm surely goin to enjoy Christmas even more after this OS...luv U Shona...my darling and ya I'll be Updating DaruDesi this week...the update is ready in my lappy just need to post it...:) With love Karen (Maria)

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IntricateKnots.

@IntricateKnots.

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Awesomely Written OS! :D

Had so much of fun reading the looong OS! :P Keep Writing More and More!

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Priyambada Subudhi

@pri_tanvi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Awesome awesome awesome!!! Beautiful OS!!

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Crazy4AshVik

@Crazy4AshVik

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

I really loved this one!

The concept, SwaRon, Christmas...Just made me 10x happier😃😃😃

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

That was a really sweet and very merry SwaRon OS !! I'm happy that Sharon got Swayam as her Christmas gift, there was nothing better than him for her !!

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ArYa/Ash

@Arya.100

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

beautiful os... belated merry christmas...

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