Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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serendipitylove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#391

Ahhh...Aria dear I'm so glad we got a quick update this time😊
When Is d next update coming? I hope it wud b as soon as this one!
Well Arnav has been slightly "maniacal" if I may use that word, hasn't he? He's actually hallucinating Khushi and trying to work out his redemption... Well I have to say that I actually liked that u made the guy sleep by the poolside!! I've wanted him to...although the scenario I imagined was slightly different with Khushi also being there :P lol!

Maaan...now I really want both of them to meet soon!!! I mean Khushi isn't happy and neither is Arnav...But of course he still has to earn her love and she shouldn't accept him too soon and like I always say he shouldn't have it easy... He needs to beg and plead too like Khushi once did with him...Its good to see him suffer a bit...
Somehow this update more than the others made me feel that he has accepted that he loves her... His worry for her...him wanting to see her safe is heartening... The way he reads her diary as though it gives him an emotional connect to her... I see stirrings of love there...

there has to be a way to trace her down, she couldn't have simply vanished off the face of earth like that! I find it hard to understand that ASR being the ASR hasn't been able to find her since 3 yrs of her disappearance... Not even a single clue? Maybe he should hire another detective agency... :P And Aakash saying that they were probably looking in the wrong places sounds like there's more than what meets the eye...I even wonder if Anjali has been sheilding her somehow...I see that the receipt of the divorce papers has driven a desperation in Arnav to find her...And i hope he does!

Did she ever miss him? Awww...really awww...he wants her to miss him too, especially when he misses her so much and not a day goes by without thinking about her!

Anjali already has a new man? Who is also connected to Khushi!!! I get the whole anjali connection now!!! While its not in their hands if Khushi drifts apart that doesn't mean Arnav should be kept in the dark right?

She is fine just has her regular check- up and I knew she hates my guts at this point but I'm going to be there whether she likes it or not!"
Finally Aakash boy gets a spine!! Way to go Payal...its her walking out that has spurred this I'm sure... I would love to see more of this love story too!

Thanks for the PM😊 Please update ASAP 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#392

Originally posted by: -Aria-

Ahh yes, the SL's thread?
Thank you Viji, stay tuned, more coming up!

Looks like I got u more readers 😉 😆😆

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greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#393

Guilt is a feeling that has a potential to kill and ruin the soul, bit by bit. I feel sad for Arnav.

Akash is a great brother. I loved the easy camaraderie that has developed/is developing between him and Arnav.

Ved and Anjali are the common links between Arnav and Khushi.

The short conversation between Payal and Khushi was emotional.

Thanks for the PM.

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_disha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#394

Amazing... so Ved and Anjali are in this together!

Ved is the guiding light to all these troubled people ..hope they all reach their destinations in time.

I am glad that Khushi had a chance to get in touch with Payal...this will bring in the need to talk more now.

Akash is also doing the right thing by going and being with Payal...

Unfortunately Arnav has a long way to go ...

The bits of flashback and diary are really well written..very touching!

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zyanah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#395

Thank you so much for updating early.

God I really like the way things are shaping

Guilt was overwhelming while redemption was nowhere in sight, it was like being swept off a river and dumped into the turbulent seas; drowning was inevitable.-Love these lines

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Sarah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#396

Thank you for the monster mega update,

The update was brilliant and awesome, yet very emotional and touching.

Khushi's diary entries some were funny and some were so sad, especially the part where Khushi said she could not take the silence anymore.

The part where Arnav was sleeping on the cold floor was that his imagination in the past, because he read the diary after she had left.

Awww the Payal and khushi conversation was really sad, Payal did not even get a chance to tell khushi she is pregnant.

Loved the part between Arnav and Akash bonding and speaking about there true feelings, love the way Arnav spoke out truthfully and even apologised to Akash.

So Anjali and Ved are in love and Ved is with khushi at the moment, so that means even Anjali knows where khushi is, I bet Arnav is going to be so angry when he finds out that Anjali knows where khushi is.

An exceptionally well written update and a absolute brilliant read,

Eagerly waiting to read more, especially regarding the envelope,

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 12 years ago