KriYaansh OS - A Midsummer Paris - Page 3

this was awwwsome.

kiri,loved this name...

one of d most adorable os

the 'Are you gay, Reyaansh?' thing was my fav :)

lovely !!

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

haan so coming to this...

that has to be THE most adorable and lovely update ever...

i mean kiri and gay toh totally rocked it...

right from the start...

how kria was hyper abt the lindo thing...

jabki galti khud ki thi...

so loved how u showed both's povs...

that was the best...

and then how rey was anxious and finally asked the question and how kiri shut him off...

pehle hi yeh kar lete toh zyada accha hota... rey just had to put the 2 and 2 together...

voila ... there's the answer...

best part was how rey replied in terms of kria was thinking...

awesome OS di!!!!

Originally posted by: alisha.a.s

awesome os...

loved it...

thnx for pm...

Originally posted by: Hot.Pink.Heels

Too cute! Kria is ek dum pagal but the whole thing was really sweet!

I already told you this a gazillion times but I'll say it again, you are an absolutely awesome writer and hence are able to write such brilliant pieces! Lovely!

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

i so wish kiri must have told that dream to rey in the future...

main soch hi rhi thi uske baare mein ki how se must have told the wild fantasies and how rey wud have reacted to it...

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

OMG!!!! dii dis was tooo cute
kiri i love dis name alot

n kria to bilkul pagal but da way you potrayed her was awsome, amazing
i love da dialouge "are you gay reyaansh" hahahah dis was my fav 😉

n i love da way he proposed her
awwiiieee loved it alot

Originally posted by: -Anky-

not that exciting as you would imagine Vaish!

Originally posted by: NishaP_Arsha

Happy Kriyaansh anniversary 🤗
Amazing os 👏 👏 👏
loved it so much
are u gay reyaansh 😆 😆
beautifully written
cute os
Best of luck for the contest