KriYaansh OS - A Midsummer Paris

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Jaanvi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awesome os..really a cute one..loved it :)

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Fida

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Posted: 12 years ago

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superbb os!!

din want it to end at all...

it was soo kriyaanah...!!

thnks 4 such a lovely kr os

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aishwarya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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awesomeee os diii👏

loveddd ittt😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

@-Anky-: Awesum n fantastic OS!!!!😊

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basket_101

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Bonjour encore mon amie 😃

Hello again my friend 😃

I am kind of hyper... I guess in a way it's good... Finally commenting...

SO sorry for such a prolonged period of procrastination 😳

The internet is a distracting place, and that right there, my friend, is my excuse 😆

Anyway.. now getting back to the OS 😛

You already know what I'm gonna say...

I'll say it anyway...

LOVED it 😃

Firstly, I feel sorry for Rey 😆 Though it is true, it is that madness of Kria's which made him love her 😳

But it's just so damn cuteee

And the best part of Rey's frustration had to be this:

Simple, cause Kria Ghai wouldn't let him speak. See, when it came to nicknames, Kria Ghai was a born BaatCutter. She just wouldn't let him SPEAK.

It was so well-written 👏 That was the highlight of the OS for me.. seriously!!!

It's a small line, but it was freakin' awesomeee 😆

And Kria's defense mechanism of calling Rey gay... pooor guy!!!!

😆

but then this part:

He felt her goosebumps rise, and couldn't help feel elated inside. This was so his Kria. Her mind could never comprehend what was going on, yet, her body was impeccably honest with reactions.

Anky.. You are a born writer!

I swear!!

Then of course the end..
Me in the happy-KR-waala-land

😆

I loved it so much! Seriously!

You've done an awesome job :D

LOOOVED it =D

🤗

Anywayyy

Now going to another OS... that I have to comment on... Still 🤣

So see ya there :P
TAKE careee 😃

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छलावा (Chhalawa) ~ A Kriyaansh Three-Shot

Book cover by @ExoticDisaster Thanks a lot for this brilliant book cover Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @SarafWasima in Submit Writing...

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~Love makes Life~ KRIYAANSH DRABBLE SERIES 'completed'

Banner Credit goes to -chamkilli- A girl full of enjoyment lives in a chawl, never tries to get effected by any one, she and her sis live with

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