I AM WITH YOU: NEWTR STORY. prt4 updtd 4 jan pg 22 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Megha pleaseee update yaar i am waiting eagerly pleaseee update update update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow.its interesting.taani don't worry ur prince is on the way.I eagerly waiting.plz update...
Edited by asmamember - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesme
Luvd it
Plz pm me wen u update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@sapna, asma, krish, ria...thank you everyone for appreciating my story.
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@dinu, sonakshi, ayesha...thank you everyone...
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Originally posted by: Sam_krazy

Really nice start...pm me wen u update 😊



thank you😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you everyone for your overwhelming response for this story... love you all very much😊
Edited by meghasingh - 12 years ago
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Hello friends here's the second part...hope you enjoy...

PART 2

"Nn…nn…nooo..noo… please leave me…" she screamed while crying as the guy twisted her hand and caressed her face reaching to shoulders, touching her all along.

"Come on sexy… it's good to share things… don't you know it… and you must share these full juicy lips, your curves, your sweetness, your saltiness to us too…" he said with an evil smirk followed up by evil laughter of others.

"No..no…ple…pleas…please ll…lea….leave me…"Taani said crying hysterically.

"Oh really… so when did we said that we're going to take you away forever…?? Just tonight babes… come on… " he said as he moved his hand on her face, taking her hair in his fist and pulling her in a kiss.

Suddenly someone pulled Taani towards himself…

Another guy, one of them… clutched her hair tightly which made Taani scream in pain… "And now last time, cooperate with us… it will be better for you…"

Taani was now numb with fear… she didn't knew what to do… she wished hard that she could kill herself right then before she witness worse scene than this… tears were still flowing from her eyes, she could feel her senses going down, her voice had almost lost her assistance…

Suddenly a car stopped there and someone stepped out.

"Wow… how intelligent you guys are…" the guy said to them.

When Taani looked at him, she felt as if she had seen a morning after a thousand year long night… her heart felt a satisfaction.

"Look… if you want your safety then just get lost from here…" one of them said to him.

"I'll go but what if someone else came… or police patrol… then…" he replied.

"Don't you dare to do such a mistake… otherwise won't be good for you…" one of them barked angrily.

"Really… as if I'm scared of you… let's make a deal… look it's not safe here… let it happen in my car and in return just let me taste this beautiful masterpiece…" he said and looked at Taani.

Taani…in her nastiest nightmare had not imagined this… she wanted it to be a dream…she was just trying to fix this puzzle…

On the other hand guys looked at each other and nodded positively.

Taani's wrist was grabbed by Rey's hand, but she couldn't even protest a word. If he could do this… no…she didn't wanted to be alive for a moment… Why… why… why every time life screws up her so badly…??

She felt herself pushed in the car as Rey locked her in the car, but then rey stepped out and locked the car from outside.

"What…what are you doing…?" one of the guy asked surprised.

"You f**king bas***d… how dare you even touch her…?? You sick creatures… you guys are alive right now because till now she was with you… but now you are so gonna regret your lives…" Rey roared, with clearly his eyes burning with anger, pain and rage. How dare someone misbehave with Taani…his Taani, how could someone even think about hurt her.

On the other hand, when Taani saw this, she was touched… "even if he didn't loved her, still he care about me so much…" ignorant of the fact that now she was the one, who could make him do anything, he was so affected by her.

But Rey…he could be in problem… " Rey… rey…"she shouted and yelled "Please..please rey… don't…you'll hurt yourself… Rey…" but rey ignored her voice.

What he remembered then was just Taani's tears, her screams, her pain and agony, her helplessness… he could neither think nor help himself till he didn't make those sick bas***ds realize what is the consequence of hurting his Taani. He was like a wounded lion, whose hunger, pain wouldn't end till he rips off those guys flesh from their skeletons. His anger oozing out, he boiling with rage… he was gonna show those guys hell in their lifetime.

All of them circled him around, but how could someone face a hurt lion…?... He was no less than a sever monster for them…

"How even you dared to look at her?…" he said as he punched, knocked out, kicked, thrashed everyone around.

"You know what… you don't know who my father is? You don't know… what can happen to you…" a guy said as he strike Rey with a wooden stick. Although he managed to save his head, but it ended up on his back.

Rey snatched the stick from his hand and gave him a hard punch on his nose and then a kick in stomach… "and do you know who I am… Reyansh Singhania… so stop blabbering here who you are… you are nothing but sick jerks who don't even deserve to be a human being…"

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it's awesome my rey
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