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Posted: 12 years ago
@ jayvenk... I am speechless and wonder struck! Very beautifully and magically you have weaved the emotions in words which is a rare quality and no wonder you are being praised by all and the sundry.. Believe it or not I became hooked to this FF within 5 mins of reading and now I want more of it...!!

Keep up the good work and of course looking forward for your next update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kaatayani

@ jayvenk... I am speechless and wonder struck! Very beautifully and magically you have weaved the emotions in words which is a rare quality and no wonder you are being praised by all and the sundry.. Believe it or not I became hooked to this FF within 5 mins of reading and now I want more of it...!!


Keep up the good work and of course looking forward for your next update


thank u so much Katyayani.. Love that name
reminds of the shlokam
Katyayani Mahamaye...

I feel humbled that so many like it. 😊😳
thank u once more for reading and appreciation
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ jayvenk.. even I love this name Katyayani.. so no wonder I chose it to be my user name..😊 Since its another name of Durga and we Bengalis are ardent Durga devotees, so it had to be
Edited by kaatayani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kaatayani

@ jayvenk.. even I love this name Katyayani.. so no wonder I chose it to be my user name..😊 Since its another name of Durga and we Bengalis are ardent Durga devotees, so it had to be



u r bengali too??
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Posted: 12 years ago
loads of bengalis her.. and south indians also... yipee
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love the names Katyayani and Kadamvari ! Devi's names are always so beautiful. Wonder why she decided to give me 2 boys now..had nice names picked out and all..
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ Kadamvari, yes I am a Bengali 😊
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SHOPPING TIME ...

It was going to be hectic in Mumbai, the 3 docs had chalked out a programme during the drive itself.

Ridhi was adamant that she wanted to be there to purchase the rings.

You guys will pick up something silly, she concluded.

She wants a simple gold band Ridhi, how difficult can that be?

Ya sure, tell me that after we are at the jewelers.

...

Deciding to meet later in the evening, Naren and Ridhi carried on.

Adrit sank into the Plush sofa and looked around.

This House is soon going to become a Lovely Home Nandu.

Need to make some changes for my La, she loves colours he said looking at the stark white interiors...

He was on the phone calling one of the top interior decorators in town.

He sighed with happiness,

Hope she is feeling better he thought,

As if reading his thoughts her message came through.

Feeling better, in college 😃

Good girl 😛

U Reached?

He looked at the time, Gopu's class!! She is going to lose another mobile.

Yes Amor Mio

What?

Mean, yes My Love Mi Corazon ❤️

😃

If u need something text me.

One dimple.😳

Dimples can only be bartered!!! 😉

😡, Don't like u

I know, now listen to Gopu, will call later, muah

!@#$%😡😡

🤗 Love u angel

...

Oh My God , the two guys gaped at the rings that were being displayed for their selection.

Ok , how are we going to select, they chorused.

Accept that you need my help, chimed Ridhi, watching with amusement at their confusion.

Accepted they muttered.

She sat down happily between them, briskly giving instructions to the salesman.

Soon the hundred was reduced to about 10 pairs of absolutely beautiful gold bands.

Adi, now it is your turn.

Look at them and feel with your heart, and you will find the perfect pair.

His eyes ran over the rings and rested on the last one.

Simple she had said.

Yes, simple and perfect. He picked them up.

[THE RING WILL LOOK LIKE A HALO ON YOUR FINGER PRINCESS]


What else are buying for her Adi, Ridhi was questioning him.

Adrit had a question mark written on his face?

What else?

Ridhi had that "men are useless" look.

RidhiSweetheart why don't you take care of the "What Else" department please, he gave his best puppy face.

Oh all right, I love shopping, she said putting her hand up in the air with glee.

The guys tried to put on equally enthusiastic look rather unsuccessfully.

Tag along and keep your Cards ready, came the order.

They groaned and fell behind her.

Is she buying for the whole town, Adi whispered to Naren, as he watched the bags piling up.

I think it is for two towns, Naren whispered back.

Will the two of you stop whispering and make the payment.

Yo Mam' , as they hurriedly fished out the cards.

They paid up dutifully, picked up the bags and started towards the exit.

Guy's where do you think you are going?

WE are not finished, she had a big satisfied smile.

Now to the men's dept..

Eeeh, Men's?

Whatever for?

Engagement, remember, Ridhi said mockingly!!

Our hero has to be all dressed up, she said looking towards Adrit.

Hey I am planning to wear a nice shirt '..

Hummph went Ridhi even before he completed, shirt' Men'. She muttered something they could not quite understand.

She walked ahead, forcing them follow her.

Naren, I have to get all dressed, ?

Err well it is your engagement, not your nuptials.. he guffawed , you will have to be'"all dressed"

Vaaary funny Naren..ha ha.. as they settled for what seemed like a long session of selecting the right outfit.

Many were rejected, many selected. They laughed and teased till they all agreed on the one.

Ridhi don't know what I would have done with you sweety, he gave her a big hug.

Adrit returned with all the purchases, dialed La's number, she had told him they were going shopping too.

Wonder how she is faring?

...


Shyla sat munching a chocolate, argued with Tarun, giggled along with Viji, even as her Mumma, aunts and whole lot of ladies sat in the shop selecting sarees.

Shylu, how about coming over here and helping us select, it is your engagement dear.

Halfheartedly she got up, Ma, can't I just wear a Salwar suit, she asked for the nth time.

There was a chorus of NO

Sitting down she made an effort, too many sarees and her mother did not seem to agree to any of the ones she chose.

Shylu it is for your engagement, not for daily wear.

Then mama, why don't you select one for me.

She got an ear full for that suggestion.

Her mobile rang.

Dr.A, She looked towards Vishak, who understood.

Bhaiyya Adrit heard Vishak's voice,

Where is your Di?

Getting scolded by everyone,

Now what did she do.

She does not want to wear a saree for the engagement.

Hmmm, really,

And she has been eating chocolates and chasing Tarun all over the shop instead of helping Mami, Vishak explained.

Give me phone Vishak, Tarun was trying to grab the mobile.

NO Tarun, wait..

If you don't give I will tell everyone who is calling.,

Adrit grinned, the brat.

Bhaiyya, when are you coming back. What are you getting for me? A series of questions followed.

After answering patiently,

Tarun can you call your Di? Please.

Bhaiyya, she cannot get up now, he then launched into a running commentary,

Mami is putting different sarees on her,

Di is making different faces for each of them.

She is trying to run with all the sarees on her, Tarun said laughing out loud.

Viji Di is teasing her and running behind her.

Oops'

What happened Tarun, he was thoroughly enjoying the narration

She tripped and almost fell,

Mami has put her in a chair, and told her not to move.

Oh Ho Bhaiyya.

Now what Tarun asked an amused Adrit.

She is searching for chocolates, which I took from her bag he giggled.

I am getting really angry looks, not sure why ,Tarun was all innocence.

She is trying to get up, getting a glare from Mami.

Adi heard a sharp Shylu, sit down,

He was laughing at all the commotion.

[PRINCESS ENJOY YOURSELF]

Tarun tell your Di will call her later.

Ok bhaiyya.


Edited by jayvenk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice and sweet update Jaya. So we will get an elaborate engagement. Good luck penning that down. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
A very happy and cute update😊..loved it😃..the shopping time😆,Tarun's running commentary🤣,Shylu's angry looks to Tarun..😡😆,and of course Adla's msg convo😳..loved it..loved it..can't wait for the engagement update..

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