JUST A STORY [A MOHARIKA FF]

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JAYASHREE

@jayvenk

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#621

jhum having a tough time writing NOW.. crying while writing, i am getting too involved with my characters, 😭

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@Patrarekha

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#622

Originally posted by: jayvenk
jhum having a tough time writing NOW.. crying while writing, i am getting too involved with my characters, 😭

let us share your tears by posting the piece

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Diala

@Diala

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#623

What is a love story without some poetry...nice placing of the words Jaya.
Palm tree is a nice euphamism...panamaram is palm tree right? That used to be the general way I have heard really tall guys getting described as...minus the cuteness factor you have added to it ;)

Edited by speedgal - 12 years ago

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Tinacool

@Tinacool

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#624

Fab updates. Reciting love poems and having common interest in poetries. I quite liked that part. Sometimes I feel it is always nice to love older men because they have a world of knowledge and better equipped to love a woman just like Adi.

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Karunima

@Karunima

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#625

I read few updates together and was satisfied. Finally the good looking doc proposed and asked for the pretty young girl Shyla. Felt happy and nice that there where no objections from any side. But life itself objected to the sweet union. The poetry love was cute.

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sindhupv

@sindhupv

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#626

All good. So things going smoothly so far for Adla in the flashback. I hope we get some very romantic moments between them soon. That would be really nice. 😉

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Sindhu_us

@Sindhu_us

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#627

All the updates have been good so far. I like that Adrit will be there to take care of Shyla. He is solid as a rock. Just what we look for in a husband. I like their sweet slowly consuming love story. They are the cutest couple in the whole world because their love is so sweet. 😊

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sweetsandhya

@sweetsandhya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#628

So they are an official couple now acknowledged by family and friends. That was easier than thought. Good there are no family villains who drive the couple apart but fate will.

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Nishajos

@Nishajos

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#629

Jaishree awesome updates. Loving the progress in the story. It is going well. Waiting for the next update from you. 😃

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Gopiii

@Gopiii

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#630

Jaya so finally Adi and Shylu are together. Now when is he taking her out on a formal date. I hope we get some mouth watering moments between the two. I want to see the how the doc expresses his passion to his little girlfriend. Am excited.