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Posted: 12 years ago
So sweet and thoughtful of Dr.A to gift a mobile to Shyla. I was scared when he said I will join u guys that he had intentions of making out with Shyla at her parents home. But I forgot that Doc is a thorough gentleman and a very decent guy to do something like that. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: consuela

Krsna wanting to become a lesbian for Shylu. In our show Ravan depicting some homo tendencies yeh kya ho raha hai bhai. Hum normal log kahaan jaaye. 😉


Hahaha Consu... I'm normal only...😆
Since Shlyu is a fictional character, you can understand that my fantasy will also remain a fiction 🤣

By the way, I can switch to Dr. A🤪🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jaya..maybe too much jhanjhat in publishing (maybe online ??)...but you might want to send it over to the production house and ask them to start shooting 😉 ! You have the script, dialogues, even casting figured out. No censoring though 😃 !

Seriously, awesome style and storyline.
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Posted: 12 years ago
really nice upds jaya!!
- sorry for the late reply..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Super update of a super couple. Adrit and Shylu so cute Dr. A love this couple. Now till she gets well they can love via texting. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jaya new update was good the meeting of the foursome. Looking forward to the next meeting. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
CONFESSIONS AND DECISIONS

Naren and Adrit sat sipping wine and gazing at the moon.

I kissed her, Adrit said softly,

Naren almost choked on his drink..

Ridhi screamed.

You did, awww tell us more..

She sat in front of Adrit, awww awww she went.

Naren had got up, on your first date or sort of date you propose, and on the second you kiss,

Awww went Ridhi again.

Ridhi stop gushing, he deserves a slap.

Adi sat there smiling.

What are you smiling about Adi, planning to make love to her on the third?

Adrit sat up eagerly, Naren boxed him, and that Dr.A was not a suggestion!!

How was the kiss? that was Rdihi still in her dream land.

Ridhi stop drooling, we don't need details.

Oh shut up Naren, all I got was a peck on my cheek on our 10th date, she complained.

Oh really, who went screaming blue murder, when I put my hand around her on the first date.

Ridhi giggled, well I was scared, and' she stood on her tip toes to kiss Naren on his lips.

But aren't these two really cute. She sank back next to Adrit.

You know what..

What , went both the guys?

We should all go for a long drive along with Shylu.

Pack a picnic and zoom.

It will be so much fun, clapping her hands.

Adrit was nodding with approval written all over his face.

NO , Adrit stop nodding, Ridhi, stop giving him ideas!!

Ridhi and Adrit looked at him, NO??

NO, I might sound old fashioned, but talking to Shylu's parent should be the priority.

Do remember this is a small town, Adi, any wrong step might end with Shylu getting hurt.

Naren, I wouldn't ever, ever ever do anything to hurt my La. I should have taken things a little more slow, but, he grinned sheepishly, I am in love, I feel crazy.

Crazy! No you are downright nuts Adrit.

But you are right Naren, have to talk soon.

They sat discussing about how to approach Mr.Himant, about love, about La, about life long into the night.


Shyla's ankle was healing well.

Ridhi was almost always with her. They enjoyed each other's company.

Naren teased La and Dr.A mercilessly.

Adrit fell more and more in love with his La.

They were planning to talk to her parents on Sunday.


It was early on Sunday morning, Shyla lay awake, She felt so much in love with Adrit, she was living in a fairy land the last few days. She was lost in his love. But she knew she had to come down to earth, and make important decisions.

She had always dreamed of specializing in the field of art. Will he understand?

And something else was also worrying her.

She needed to think clearly without Dr.A walking into her thoughts every two seconds.

There was one place that always helped her to concentrate.

She gingerly put her foot down, testing her ankle. Pulling on a shawl, she slowly tiptoed out of the house. She was soon inside her boat, kicking the motor to life. She was speeding to her Dolphins.

Adrit stood in the patio sipping his coffee. He watched as a boat speeded across the water at a distance. The people here were early raisers. Something on the boat caught his eye.

He cursed, what the hell was she thinking.

Impatiently he dialed his number. Common La, pick it up.

Shyla heard the ringing, knowing it was him.

She hesitated,

Hi, good morning,

What do you think you are doing? His voice sounded different, angry almost.

What?

La why are you on a boat, instead of resting in bed.

How did you'. oh you saw me..

Yes young lady and you better have a good explanation.

Dr.A. I just needed to think.

Think? About what?

She was silent..

La, answer me.

You,, she said softly, Me,

You are having doubts,

NO, no doubts.

Dr.A I just needed to be alone.

Why did you not tell me something is worrying you, he sounded so angry.

Dr.A, her voice quivered, don't be angry.

No, No, baby, his voice immediately went soft, No, I am not angry with you, I am angry that I did not see that you were troubled.

Adi, I am not troubled, just needed to think straight, without you dimpling in it.

He laughed , sweetheart, then go ahead and do your thinking,

But promise me you won't be gone long.

Promise.

Hey you called me Adi,

I did, see I am not thinking straight Dr. A, she giggled.

Now that is better, he sounded relieved.

He blew her a kiss, before disconnecting.

She sped on.

He sat down to watch for her return.

He should have sensed that something was bothering her.

The dolphins will clear her head,

He sat back to keep vigil.

It was more than 2 hours before he saw her speed back.

He picked up the mobile to call, then put it down. He decided to talk to her face to face.

His mobile beeped ,

a 😊 looked at him.

Love you he texted back,

He got a ❤️ in return.


Edited by jayvenk - 12 years ago
Patrarekha thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
i am confused..need explanation..well naren spoke my mind though😆
but plz ud quickly abt shyla..am really confused
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Posted: 12 years ago
that line was specially for u ARu 😃. I deleted it, then put it back 😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
I like Doc A's concern and deep lone for Shyla. I don't think he needs any help from Naren and Riddhi he has managed everything well. It is good when things happen spontaneously in a relationship feels more natural. I have liked that part very much in this story. Situations have happened very smoothly. But I liked the fact that he cared to ask her out only after talking to her parents which is a sign of a very decent guy. 😉

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