JUST A STORY [A MOHARIKA FF] - Page 35

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Posted: 12 years ago
Jaya cute videos. The swan's representing soul mates in the first video and MR's sketches in the second where cool. Mohit can make a very good doctor. He has the looks and smartness for it. 😉..Mohit looks like the older matured doc I mean Adrit and Shyla the cute bubbly innocent girl. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
ab to unke age bata hi do jaya
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow lovely vms you made it???
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: foram.

wow lovely vms you made it???


Yes foru made it for Adi and La 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aru tina chand thank u girls 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice...!!

Adrit seems a reserved.. quiet and a serious guy..!! not the flirty ones..that why the resistance..and so much of thinking!!

Nice VMs.. !!

Thanks Jaya...!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Excellent work on the vm's Jay. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
NEED FOR COMMUNICATION

It was going to be another week before they returned.

He missed Shyla all the more.

If only she had a mobile!!

He made himself a cup of coffee and went to the balcony.

Naren and Ridhi had gone to finalise some of the details of their upcoming wedding

He picked up his mobile and dialed the land-line, hoping she will pick up the call.

He waited and then disconnected, not sure what he will say.

He dialed again and again disconnected.

He put the mobile down.

As he did so it started ringing.

It was Mr.Himant!!

Oh No!!!

He answered any way, hello..

Hello,,

her voice sounded like music.

[THANK GOD FOR DIAL BACK FACILITY]

Who is this, she asked?

Hi he said,

Dr.A , [HER HEART DID A HIGH JUMP]

Yes, how are you…

I….I am fine ..

how are you, how is Naren Bhaiyya and Nandu.

[HOPE I AM NOT BLABBERING]

When are you returning, the question left her lips before she could stop herself.

[OH GREAT, I AM BLABBERING AND SOUND DESPERATE ALSO]

Sorry you must be having loads to do in Mumbai.

Slow down, slow down shyla, he laughed and no apologies, we have almost finished here, we should be back next week,

[I WOULD LOVE TO RETURN TODAY THOUGH]

Naren is bringing along his fiance, when we return

Oh that is lovely, looking forward to meeting her, she sounded excited.

Which chocolates do you like, she heard him asking.

What??

Tarun was saying you love chocolates, she could feel the smile in his voice

No, you should not be getting anything.

Not for you, will get them for Tarun,

She laughed , how mean.

Are you making a face? She laughed a NO.

You have not yet answered,

Five star, Kit Kat, And Cadbury's Silk she listed, and that gold round wala..

Round gold!!!!

Fero…. Something she said.

Aahh u mean Ferrero Rocher?

Yesss…those are yummy..

Hmmm are you sure that is Tarun's list?

NO... she giggled.

They spoke for some more time about nothing in particular.

But both wanted to say so many things.

Things, their hearts were saying.

Bye she said.

Bye he replied, both reluctant to end the call.

Shyla, you still there,

Yes, she replied softly.

I,, he started..

Yes..

Hmm nothing.. will call again soon, bye now.

Ok she smiled.

Her heart was warm.

She felt light headed and the smile did not seem to want to leave.

He sat playing with the mobile.

The smile on his lips stayed the whole day.


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Posted: 12 years ago
I am also smiling like an idiot reading the update. This is crazy my God what a superb update. I feel light headed after reading it. I can't wait for Adrit to get to Shyla. I can see the stage and scene u have set above in my mind's eye so clearly. Plz update the next sooner. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
you are making me desperate jay

uff i can just feel what they are feeling

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