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Posted: 12 years ago
What an update, I just came across this fan fiction and let me tell u this u have made me read all chapters till the last one at one go. All I can say your an amazing writer and do keep up the good job of entertaining us, God Bless You .

And one more thing can't wait for the next update.
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An Update Before its 2013!! PLEASE?!!!
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plz update this as a new year gift

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please update soon...i am eagerly (and impatiently) waiting... really can't wait to find out what happens next
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please update soon...i am eagerly (and impatiently) waiting...i can't wait to find out what happens next
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Abhi aur kitna intezaar karna padega..?
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Hey Shradds
sorry I haven't been commenting 🤔
but I've decided to make up for it by commenting on every single chapter from the start
so be prepared 😃
your work is so amazing so I've decided to do the same thing on The Imperfect Husband and Can You Forget The Past
so here it goes 😊

Chapter 1
so payal likes akaash
khushi went to see arnav to persuade him not to marry payal
arnav has proposed marriage to khushi
brilliant start 👏

Chapter 2
"Khushi I'm marrying you, not adopting you."
loved this line so sweet but couldn't help but laugh 😆
"You HAVE to complete college dear. Arnav Singh Raizada's wife cannot be a college dropout."
i could just imagine his face on this line
Besides you are exactly like the Prince Charming I always dreamt of, just a bit older, but that is fine
this is exactly how I thinks about arnav

Chapter 3

They could start the relationship once Khushi was a bit older & ready for it. It wouldn't be difficult staying distant from her until then.

yeah like arnav is gonna be able to stay away from khushi pfft

"Chote...? You are in LOVE?" Asked a wide eyed Anjali completely shocked.

"Oh please Di, don't start with this 'Love' stuff. I like her & would prefer marrying her than Payal. That's all." He said embarrassed.

😆 trust anjali to think that he's in love that's why he wants to marry khushi

"Khushi! Such a beautiful name! Is she as beautiful?" She asked curiously.

beautiful is a understatement

For a moment Khushi's face floated in front of Arnav's eyes. Her innocent eyes filled with wonder, her rosy lips eager to break into a smile every moment, the soft blush creeping on her cheeks... "Beautiful...? Like you wouldn't BELIEVE..." He said lost.

aww how sweet the description is brilliant he's already lost 😆


Chapter 4

Payal was a sweet girl but now that Anjali had met Khushi, she knew that she would definitely be a better choice. She was sure that marriage with Khushi would be the best thing that would happen to her brother.

i knew anjali was always smart

"Well my dear... My wife has to love ME... Only ME..." He said with a steely glint in his eyes.

yeah you tell her arnav 👏


Chapter 5

You have some answering to do Mr. Raizada. Khushi thought to herself.

khushi trying to get arnswers from arnav this is gonna be good

"That's Ok Khushi." He said. "So... did you like it?"

"W-W-WHAT?" Her eyes shot up in shock to meet his. Hey Devi Maiya! What is he asking? Her cheeks turned even red if that was possible.

"The room, Khushi..." He gestured around him and smirked at her obvious misunderstanding.

"Oh... t-t-the room..." She stammered going back to staring at her feet. "Yes, it is very nice."

"Really?" He asked in mock surprise. "I thought you liked only the flooring."

"Huh...? The flooring?" She looked up at him confused.

"Yeah, since that is what you've been staring at for quite some time now." He said smirking at her.

this bit was brilliant 🤣

"ArnavJI?" he repeated laughing now that she had left. No one called him Arnavjibut it sounded sweet, different, coming from Khushi, something unique, after all she was going to be his wife.

well obviously khushi said it

She tried hard but couldn't get herself to stop thinking about his image. His tan skin, broad, strong shoulders, wide chest...

i cant stop thinking about his body either

I have to do something real soon. He thought. He didn't want her to feel nervous or scared around him.

how sweet

But now she can't say anything. This is mine." She said possessively.

loved it


Chapter 6

To say that Arnav looked angry would have been the understatement of the century. He was looking at Nishant with a murderous glare like Khushi had never seen before.

"A-A- Arnavji? Khushi managed to say after taking in a couple of deep breaths.

The look that he gave her sent chills down her spine and her knees buckled.

poor khushi seeing arnav angry like that for the first time, arnavs anger can make anybody's knees buckle

"No Khushi," he interrupted. "When I take you out on our 1st date, it will be with your parents' approval."

"You will take me out?" She asked a bit sceptically.

"Of course dear. Soon; very soon." He answered wondering why she looked so doubtful.

He was rewarded with a dazzling smile. "Thank you Arnavji. I thought you'd never ask..."

cant wait for there first date


Chapter 7

How soon would be soon in Arnavji's dictionary? Khushi wondered three days after Arnav had promised that he would be taking her out 'soon'.

loved this line arnavji's dictionary

"But as your fiance I do get some privileges, you know?"

who wouldnt want to give him privileges

"But honestly, I am a bit disheartened... you didn't recognise my voice."

"And how was I supposed to do that?" Khushi pouted. "You never call me, I don't have your number and we have met all but three times so far.

sooo sweeet

"Oh honestly... Arnavji?" Khushi said exasperatedly. "You think I would go for a stupid movie rather than with you? I agreed for the movie in the first place because I'd given up hope that you'd be taking me out this week as well."

aww how cute


Chapter 8a

Arnav stared at her mesmerised. She looked ethereal in the white dress and delicate jewelry. Her hair let loose had been pulled up to the front on her left shoulder. He longed to run his fingers down the silken tresses. She truly looked a picture of unreal perfection.

aww

"Did you say that you booked the entire restaurant for the two of us?"

"Yeah why?" He asked surprised.

"You mean JUST the two of us? No one else?" She asked again

trust arnav to book the whole restaurant

"Can't? No, cannot be. My fiance can't DANCE?" She said almost to herself.

🤣 that would definitely be my reaction

This must be the first time that I, Arnav Singh Raizada is feeling nervous with a girl. It was crazy.

see only khushi could make you feel like that


Chapter 8b

He leaned forward looking in her eyes and lifted one hand to brush his fingertips down her cheek. "My beautiful fiancee, when YOU will dress up as my bride I'm sure no one will look at her." He answered his voice dripping naughtiness.

uff so sweet

He had always been a man of few words but after meeting Khushi, it had started to seem that he was at a total loss of words.

lol that seems to be everyone's case when around khushi

He shook his head in disapproval, "Don't have to thank me Khushi, ever."

he just gets better and better

"Good night Khushi." He said but didn't release her hand.

aww he didn't eave her hand

"Missing me already?" He asked answering the phone.

Khushi could almost see him smirk and blushed, "No... I... Actually I... Ummm..."

loved it


Chapter 9

"I won't be sleeping in his arms." Khushi couldn't help but imagine Arnav instead of Payal in the bed and shuddered, her cheeks reddening.

who in there right mind wouldn't want to sleep in arnav's arms

Khushi replied tossing her hair back and looking straight into Lavanya's eyes. "It's not fancy, it's FIANCEE."

Lavanya stopped in her tracks, stunned for a moment.

yeah you be stunned loved how khushi said it to her straight

"I'd rather be the LAST one in his life than the FIRST one."

loved this line absolutely amazing


so just finished for the first thread

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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for part c like hell... update soon sweetheart...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just to let you know i had finished commenting on all of thread 2 but my comment got deleted and now im doing it all over again but don't worry your writing is worth it 😊

Thread 2

Chapter 10
"I just cancelled all my meetings, didn't I? So I'm no longer busy." He said smirking at her but felt relieved internally when she smiled finally.
don't you just love it when he uses authority like that
But trust me Khushi, you are not going home until you tell me who has put all this nonsense in your head."
love his confidence here
Lavanya...You are so dead. He thought as his jaw clenched.
can't wait to see what he does to lavanya
In fact I would have been surprised if there weren't any. After all you are 29 and so good looking and charming too who wouldn't want to be your girlfriend?"
I would be his girlfriend any day
"No matter what anyone says, you have the right to meet me, talk to me, get mad at me and kiss me whenever and wherever you like, Okay?" He smirked as her blush got deeper and deeper.
uff i would love that right 😊

Chapter 11
His eyes blazed in fury, "DON'T YOU DARE... DON'T YOU DARE INSULT MY KHUSHI!"
aww he said my khushi

Chapter 12
The two of them would not even realise that there were people around them while they were on the phone with each other. Talking to each other at night had become so important that...
aww how sweet
"Khushi, I just... I want you to talk to me." He answered. "Anything. Just talk to me. I don't care what you say. I have a bad headache and medicines are not helping. I want to just hear your voice. That's the only thing that will make me feel better, I know." He said in a rush, clutching his pounding head in one hand. "Please. I know you are busy but just 10 minutes. I'll feel better." He pleaded.
aww overly sweet how he knows that only that will make him feel better
"What's this Rational Conversation that you want to have?" he asked curiously.
hmm im also very curious

Chapter 13
"Arnav, are you planning for a honeymoon with all this rush and Khushi being so... I mean she having exams right after that?" Vishal asked looking at Arnav with narrowed eyes.
aha so this is the conversation
"No why would I mind? ARNAVJI wants me to wear them for him." She said as if this left no place for an argument.
aww that was sweet

Chapter 14
Arnav was a bit annoyed at Khushi for wanting to go home with Akash instead of him. "No Khushi, Akash has just returned from a very long journey and needs to rest." Arnav said flatly refusing.
He said but felt strangely reluctant to let Khushi go without him so he made an excuse.
aww he didn't want khushi to go without him

Chapter 15
But these days everything seemed to be incomplete without Khushi's lively chatter. Another thing he couldn't believe was how impatient he was for the wedding to be over already so that he didn't have to wait for dates or reasons and Khushi would be with him all the time.
he feels incomplete without khushi and cant for khushi to be with him all the time

"How do I look?" Khushi asked as Arnav took a step closer.

"Just one thing is missing." He softly replied as she looked up at him questioningly.

He reached for the Dupatta behind her and placed the veil over her head.

"Perfect." He murmured, his eyes expressing a million emotions.

Khushi blushed rosily and lowered her eyes.

that was like a perfect moment so adorable

Time was lost as they stood like that, Arnav holding his Khushi against his heart as he realised for the first time in his life what it felt like to be in Love...

aww he realised he loved her


Chapter 16

"I'll still miss you my baby." Payal said hugging her tighter.

love payal and khushi's bond so sweet and strong

Who wears a Business Suit to a Sangeet ceremony?

Arnav Singh Raizada

"What's the groom's name? It needs to be drawn in your Mehendi." The Artist asked Khushi.

"Arnavji." Khushi replied.

"Oh come on Khushi. Are you going to attach the 'Ji' in the Mehendi too?" Arnav asked laughing.

"Oh no..." She answered. "Just draw... just... Arnav." Khushi spoke shyly to the Artist blushing crazily.

"My god Khushi, I can't believe my ears and once again I wish I could see your blush." Arnav smirked.

"Arnavji... please... stop it..." Khushi said as her cheeks got redder and hotter.

"Darn. There comes the 'Ji' again." Arnav teased her.

"You never had an objection with the 'Ji' before today." Khushi said.

"I don't have any objection. You have the right to address me by any name you like."

"That doesn't stop you from teasing me, does it?" Khushi complained.

"Of course not. That's MY right you see." He replied smirking.

loved loved this bit



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Thread 3

Chapter 17
He turned around and his heart skipped a beat, the guests, the noise and everything else around him faded out all of a sudden. It was just Him and Her.
aww how sweet
the way payal described her feelings and her wish to arnav was brilliant, love the fact that she feels that khushi is her baby and would do anything for her 😭

Chapter 18
grabbed his regular track pants which he wore every day and one of the brand new T-shirts which he never wore to bed but had grudgingly bought owing to his very shy wife, who he was sure would run out of the room yelling if he even tried to sleep next to her shirtless. The engagement incident was yet fresh in his mind.
omg i couldn't stop laughing at this aww but it was sweet that he is going to wear a top so she would be comfortable and not yell the house down 🤣
His jaw dropped to the floor, all sane and logical thoughts chased out of his brain which had gone completely fuzzy. He stared at her shamelessly. She was wearing a night dress comprising of a satin spaghetti top and shorts and to make things worse it was RED. The contrast it made with her much exposed milky skin... God! Was she trying to seduce him? He thought wildly, incapable of looking away. With great difficulty he tore his eyes off the much tempting sight in front of him and turned away to grab a bottle of cold water from the bedside and downed it in one go.
aww poor arnav what self control he's trying to maintain
He was feeling cosy... very cosy. He felt something very soft wrapped around him and instinctively snuggled into the warmth. He wondered if he was dreaming. He hadn't felt so blissful ever. Something smooth and silky was brushing against his face. He decided to go back to sleep, there was no way he was going to distance himself from his feeling anytime soon. He pulled back again a little shocked. She was really there? In his arms? How? But then he noticed... her changed appearance. Certain things that he wasn't used to see her with yet... the Sindoor and the Mangalsutra. And then he remembered. She was his wife now... His... Always...
aww the comfort of his wife's arms he didn't want to let go

Keeping a tight hold on her waist with one hand he cupped her face with the other. "Dear me, Khushi... you are so yummy when you blush..."

Her eyes widened at his choice of words but she didn't dare to look in to his eyes. He leant forward and gave a lengthy kiss on her cheek.
how i love his teasing 😊
I'm your Husband and anyways you have to give me a good morning kiss every morning, that's customary. So go on."
aww

Chapter 19
Arnav while making Khushi feel comfortable in their room also ensured that he got good night kisses in addition to the good morning ones.
love arnav's comforting side also his teasing one

He quickly put an arm around Khushi's waist and pulled her close to him. "Lavanya... My wife, Khushi." To his great amazement instead of blushing, Khushi returned Arnav's hug almost possessively.

"How are you Lavanyaji?" She smiled and asked sweetly.

Lavanya too looked stunned, "I'm fine Khushi. How are..."

"It's Mrs. Raizada actually." Khushi cut her off, her voice getting sweeter with every syllable. "Only my friends and loved ones call me by my name."

It took all the self-control Arnav ever had to not let his jaw drop, looking at the contrast of Khushi's fiery eyes and sweet smile.

"Uh... y-yes of course... Mrs. Raizada. I-I a-am so s-sorry." Lavanya stuttered in surprise.

"That's ok. Happens." Khushi gave an obvious fake smile and shrugged.

The tension in the air was so thick, Anjali was sure she could touch it. Before things got out of hand she quickly intervened. "Miss Kashyap, why don't you have something? Refreshments are this way." She directed stiffly.

"Uh... Yes Lavanya, you'll meet everyone from work there." Arnav added.

"Sure, I'll see you guys later." Lavanya answered and made a quick escape.

Arnav saw Khushi frowning at Lavanya's back as she pulled away from him and stepped back.

"I'm sorry Arnavji, I'm generally not rude to people but I just don't like her. Excuse me, Jiji has come, I want to meet her." She said and walked away towards Payal who had just arrived.

Arnav could only stare at Khushi's retreating figure, where had all this possessiveness come from? And he wondered what other surprises his wife had in store for him.

Anjali on the other hand was very pleased with the incident and felt very glad that although very young as compared to her brother, Khushi was a very strong person and knew to hold her ground, claiming what was rightfully hers.

loved the way khushi showed lavanya her place good to see that khushi has a possesive side 👏

"Khushi, what's the point sleeping in two different corners? We always end up waking together." He said cheekily. "You don't have to feel embarrassed. It's quite normal to sleep in your husband's arms."

aww so adorable so sweet so cute


Chapter 20

"Arnavji... Uh... Move... We... need to... ahhh... get up..." Khushi tried to squirm out from under Arnav's weight. But he just shifted himself on her and tightened his grip.

"Don't you dare." He warned.

"B-but Ar-Arnavji..." She tried to shove him to no avail. "Just because there is no one home, doesn't mean that we stay in bed."

But for all the response she expected, Arnav just buried his face deeper against her neck and completely ignored her pleas.

"Okay if you want to sleep, go ahead. It's 10 in the morning. At least let me get up." She grumbled.

At that he lifted his head to look at her with disbelief. "You know Khushi... Sometimes... you completely miss the point." Of course she didn't and he knew that when he saw the blush creep up her neck. "So delicious." He murmured and kissed her neck making her shiver.

aww love there little teasing moments

Arnav being Arnav had taken full advantage of the opportunity to work upon Khushi's shyness of being close to him to the extent that the poor girl almost forgot what it felt like to have some personal space.

lol he's trying to work on her so she becomes less shy

Arnavji had set a comfortable pace for their relationship and she was happy to follow wherever he took her with him.

aww how sweet


Chapter 21

so umm i hate RK 😔

"Mmm... Khushi come back here right now." He opened his arms invitingly.

aww he wants her in his arms

"Are you going to do as I say or not?" He asked in a dangerous tone.

"NO!!!" She folded her arms stubbornly holding her chin high.

"Fine." He said through clenched teeth. "HP... HP... COME HERE RIGHT NOW." He yelled and HP came in running.

"Ji Bhaiya?" He muttered taking in Arnav's furious expression.

"HP... Until Khushi's exams are over, if I see her doing any household work, YOU will be fired." He warned as HP trembled in fear.

Khushi was shocked and clutched his arm. "Nooo... Arnavji... you can't do that."

"Oh yes I can." He glared down at her. "Now it's up to you whether HP loses his job or not."

"But..."

"The discussion is OVER." He declared interrupting her. "HP you can get back to work now."

Poor HP left the room after giving Khushi a helpless, pleading look.

poor HP smart arnav using that tactic to make sure khushi doesn't do work

Arnav was a little disappointed. He had gotten used to Khushi running into his arms the moment he returned from work and today she had barely spared a glance at him.

aww how sweet

aww poor khushi feeling embarrassed poor thing not used to all of that 😔

the way arnav told her to ignore was good

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