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shilpa09

@shilpa09

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

omg!!!!!! prologue was fab dear:)👍🏼

i loooved it to core:)😳

concept is really different...i would love to read more...😃

do update soon:)

thanks for pm dear:):):)🤗

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Wow!!
Awesome start!!
Loved it!!
Can't wait for the next part!!
Continue soon & thanks 4 the pm!!

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Aysha

@aysha1989

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Missed your writing in the past few days... It feels as if you didn't write for months... 😳

About the update it was just perfect... the gradual revelation about Raghav and Abhay it's making me want more and more...

Thank you so much for the pm 😊
Take care!

Edited by aysha1989 - 12 years ago

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Preethi

@preethis

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

very interesting first part... loved it.. waiting for next one...

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mary9053

@mary9053

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

bohot acha hai first part but the prob is that u hav updated after a long time...
now dont do this again update as soon as possible!!!

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zahara

@ZAHARA.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Thanks guys! Sorry but I'm a little busy at the moment with exams coming up and University to sort out through. I'll try to update as soon as I can. X

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Aysha

@aysha1989

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

No problem we can wait... Wish you all the best with the exams 😊

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Hey!!! 😊

First of all sorry , i m late. I said yesterday i got through my exams and was really tired that i slept .😉 Anyways, thank you for the PM. 😃

So, you finally updated this one. I know, University and exams , you might be really busy, its okay , u must take your time and update whenever you are free.😊

The Lost Angel, the first chapter made me really curious , because each sentence created a question within me. Like,

Are Raghav and Abhay , human's , i don't feel so .. Abhay smelled blood , and the way they were conversing , i felt something is wrong.

And whats it that they are here in this house??

Who's jhanvi ???

And Abhay and Raghav were enemies but now friends because of someone's fated death!!!😕 Who's death??

Emmm🤔 So many questions ,right😆 Well, m damn curious to know how the story unfold!!! 😛

Amazing Update!!!👏

Continue soon!!!😊

~Dee~😳

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zahara

@ZAHARA.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: deepika1692
Hey!!! 😊

First of all sorry , i m late. I said yesterday i got through my exams and was really tired that i slept .😉 Anyways, thank you for the PM. 😃

So, you finally updated this one. I know, University and exams , you might be really busy, its okay , u must take your time and update whenever you are free.😊

The Lost Angel, the first chapter made me really curious , because each sentence created a question within me. Like,

Are Raghav and Abhay , human's , i don't feel so .. Abhay smelled blood , and the way they were conversing , i felt something is wrong.

And whats it that they are here in this house??

Who's jhanvi ???

And Abhay and Raghav were enemies but now friends because of someone's fated death!!!😕 Who's death??

Emmm🤔 So many questions ,right😆 Well, m damn curious to know how the story unfold!!! 😛

Amazing Update!!!👏
Continue soon!!!😊

~Dee~😳

Hey Deepika! It's okay, I don't mind! Abhay and Raghav had known each other for a years and they're friends now. The story begins when they buy a house, but it's haunted as said in the summary. There are going to be some changes between 2012 and 1885 where Madhubala's story begins. However despite the different in over a century, both stories are happening at the same time if you consider the transference between time over the years. I sound silly don't I? Blame the amount of Doctor Who (British Sci-Fi Show) I watch. Anyway, you'll understand. As for Humans, then...You'll have to wait and read. Some of the characters are not obvious to what they are because being supernatural, it's not exactly what you can see but also what you can feel. Same as some of these characters. Jhanvi is a complicated character because she's one person and then another. Her backstory will be put up when the story gets on.

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Benzaiten

@Minionite

Channel Moderator

+ 45

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Lovely FF Zahara. Thanks for the link! And do PM when you update. 😃

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