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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 3:
now all the rituals of marriage has completed gauri is sitting in her room and waiting for pratham.
pratham enters into the room and sit besides gauri and looks in her eyes . gauri feels shy and just downs her eyelashes. pratham come more closer to gauri and take her left hand in his hand.pratham don't say anything and coming more close to just kiss on her cheek suddenly there is knock on door and gauri wakes up from her dream and now in realit pratham enters into the room.actually it was her dream.now pratham slowly slowly come towards the gauri and sits besides her.he wants to say something to her but not able to understand from where to start.but then he said i want to say something to you par samajh nahi aa raha kaise shuru karu. gauri don't respond any thing and sitting be silent.then he said dekhiye main aapko shaadi se pehle hi sab bata dena chahta tha ye sab lekin mauka hi nahi mila aur phir hammari shaadi bhi itni jaldi ho gayi ki kuch samajhne ka mauka hi nahi mila.actually main abhi shaadi ke liye ready nahi tha par apne ghar walo ki khushi ke liye mujhe ye shaadi karni padi.main aapko koi dhokha nahi dena chahta tha isliye maine bahut koshish ki aap se baat kar ke aapko sab baatane ki .lekin mauka hi nahi mila.aapke saath life shuru karne se pehle i need some time.I hope aap meri baat samajh rahi hai. lekin main aapko vishwas dilata hu ki aapko is ghar mein koi pareshaani nahi hogi. aap jaise chahe waise rah sakti hai.agar kabhi bhi aapko kisi bhi jarrorat ho to aap muje bata sakti hai. duniya walo ke liye bhale hi hum pati patni hai lekin main kabhi aap par apne pati hone ka haq nahi jataunga aur umeed karta hu aap bhi aisa hi karengi.then he stands up from bed and said raat bahut ho gayi hai .ab hummein so jana chahiye aap bhi bahut thak gayi hogi . gudnight. pratham said all this and sleeps on right side of bed while gauri is sitting like a statute after hearing all this and going to cry because usne jo sapne apni shaadi ko lekar dekhe the wo ek hi pal mein bikhar gaye but still controls herself and then see towards pratham who has slept already. gauri just wakes up and standing towards window and see towards sky and thinks ye sab mere saath hi kyon ho raha hai.koi baat nahi bhagwan agar aap ki yahi marji hai to yahi sahi and the she also sleeps.

actually pratham is not bad but he just want to take some time to understand each other.

next day in morning,gauri is doing pooja in morning as ideal bahu does and give prasad to every body but pratham is missing from there. gayatri asks to gauri that where is pratham then she said mummyji wo to jaldi hi office chale gaye kaha rahe the ek important meeting hai. then gayatri said ye pratham bhi na kabhi nahi badlega kal uski shaadi hui hai aur aaj bahu ko akela chod kar office chala gaya . lagta hai mujhe hi kuch karna hoga.

in evening when pratham come from office gayatri call him in her room and give two tickets of shimla to him and said that ye tum dono ke liye hai. shaadi se pehle bhi tum dono ek dosre se nahi mil paaye aur aaj bhi tum office chale gaye.isliye main chahti hi tum dono kuch din shimla ghum aayo jahan tum dono ko koi disturb na kar sake.
pratham: maa main abhi main nahi ja sakta main abhi ek bahut hi important project par kaam kar raha hu. waise bhi shaadi ki tayaarion ke wajah se main dhyan nahi de paya.
gayatri: wo sab kuch main nahi janti ti jayega to bas jayega,
after saying this she left the room and pratham is tensed and don't understand what to do.

pratham enters in his room with tickets, gauri is already present in room.she sees that pratham is disturbed and she asks kya baat hai aap kuch preshan lag rahe hai.
pratham:haa wo maa chahti hai ki hum dono kuch dino ke liye shimla ho aaye aur mujhe abhi ek important project handle karna hai lekin maa to kuch sunne ko tayiar hi nahi.
gauri: agar aap kahe to main mummyji se baat karu.
pratham: nahi .agar aap maa se baat karegi to unhe pata chal jayega humare baare mein. main hi kuch karta hu.
gauri seeing pratham is very disturbed and decided to talk with mummyji.
gauri goes to dadi's room where gayatri is also present.
gayatri: to tum dono apni packing kar li shimla jaane ke liye.
gauri: nahi mummyji
gayatri: jarror pratham ne kuch kaha hoga.
gauri: aisi baat nahi hai mummyji, wo maine hi mana kar diya.main abhi nahi jaana chahti.
gayatri:kyon
gauri: main abhi abhi to yahan aayi hu. kuch din aap logo ke saath bitana chahti hu aapki seva karna chahti hu.waise bhi dadi ki tabiyat kuch thik nahi hai shayad shaadi ke itne saare kaam ki wajah se. to main kuch din un ka khyal rakhna chahti hu.aur waise bhi agar hum chale gaye to unka dhyan dadi ki tabiyat ki taraf rahega.aise mein na wo enjoy kar payenge na main.
dadi: dekha gayatri bahu hummein kitni achhi bahu mili hai jo hummare baare mein itna sochti hai.
gayatri:jaisa tumhe thik lage .

pratham is listening all this from outside the room.

gauri enters in her room .pratham also comes and say thanx to her.
gauri:thanx kisliye.
pratham: wo abhi maine sab suna jo aap ne maa aur dadi se kaha.
gauri: isme thanx ki koi baat nahi hai. maine jo kuch kaha sach kaha .main sach mein kuch din abhi yahi rehna chahti hu.
pratham is just looking at her.
gauri:raat bahut ho gayi hai aap so jaayie kal aapko jaldi office bhi to jaana hai.
pratham: aap sahi kaha rahi hai and both say gudnite to each other and just smiled.

next: some more good moments between pratham and gauri.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
i have posted the third part. i hope u will enjoy it and lot more to come. please give your valuable comments and suggestion.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You are doing a great job Garima...Liked the pace of the story...Waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
nice part garima,thanks😊... i like how u showed gauri's understanding nature
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update garima.. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice part plz pm me when u r updating it so dat i can know when u posted
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
part 4:-

now some days have passed to their marriage .everybody in house like gauri very much. she is ideal bahu in all the way.but still there is a gap in between pratham and gauri's relationship.
tonight there is a party.the party is organised by mr. mehta who is business associate of mittal's .this party of getting new project.pratham tell everybody regarding this party and everybody are happy. pratham tell everybody to come in party but babuji said hum log wahan aakar kya karenge. tum aur gauri chale jaana.
gayatri says haa pratham tumhaare babuji sahi kaha rahe hai waise bhi jab se tumhaari shaadi hui hai tum dono ek saath kahi bahar nahi gaye ho.pratham says thik hai maa jaisa aap kahe.

in evening gauri is getting ready for party.she wearing cream colour saree with matching earrings and bengals with minimal makeup.she is looking stunning in this look.while pratham is wearing black suit and looking hand some as ever.both are ready to leave the party while maa is doing evening's prayer.
gayatri just completed her pooja and come in hall where pratham and gauri is standing.
pratham: accha maa hum party ke liye nikalte hai.and both is going to leave
gayatri :gauri ek minute.
gauri:kya hua mummyji
gayatri: lagta hai jaldi jaldi mein tum sindoor lagana bhool gayi.
gauri: i am sorry mummyji main abhi laga kar aati hu.
gayatri: arre kahin ki jarrorat nahi hai meri pooja ki thaali mein sindoor hai.pratham tumhe lagadega. ab khada khada dekh kya raha hai.
pratham takes sindoor from thaali and put in gauri's forehead.gauri just closed her eyes while pratham is puttting sindoor.
gayatri also puts kala tikka to gauri and said aaj tum bahut sundar lag rahi ho. kisi ki nazar na lage meri bahu ko. then gauri takes aashirwaad from maa and then both leave for party.
In party everybody welcomes pratham and congratulate for getting new project and for his marriage. his friends says that bhabhi is too lucky for him because after marriage he gets this important project.
after sometime pratham is busy in taking with his business colleagues while gauri is sitting lonely and seeing pratham .she is feeling very ored in this party.
suddenly there is an announcement by mr. mehta.
mr. mehta: ladies and gentlemen. please give attention. jaisa ki aap sabhi jaante hai ki aaj ki ye party hymmein ek naya project milne ki khushi mein hai. par ek aur important wajah hai is party ki wo hai mr. pratham mittal ki marriage. aaj mr. and mrs. pratham mittal the newly wedded couple hummare beech hai to main chahunga ki wo dono is special gaane pe dance kare aur aap sab bhi unka saath de.
pratham feels little hesitation to dance with gauri and same with gauri but everybody force them to dance. pratham goes near gauri and asks may i dance with you. gauri just started looking in his eyes and nodded her head in yes. hes takes her hand in hand and comes on dance floor. everybody is standing in round circle and clapping for them. pratham feels hesitation but put his right hand on her waist and gauri also puts her left hand on his shoulder and hold each other hand. now the song is playing(do dil mil rahe hai magar chupke chupke).
they start dancing but not looking in each other's eyes as they are very nervous because very first time they are so close to each other.after dancing for a while its impossible for gauri to dance and she just walks away from there. pratham understands and he too also come down from dance floor. everybody claps for them. and give compliments that you both are looking very good and you are made for each other couple. Pratham is listening all this and seeing towards gauri who is sitting lonely again.

Pratham come towards gauri and says i think kaafi der ho gayi.hummein ab chalna chahiye.gauri nodded her head in yes and both leaves the party.

while driving both are thinking about each other when they were dancing together in party but don't say anything to each other. there is pin drop silence between them. suddenly the car stops. there is a problem in car. Pratham come out of the car and checks. he tells to gauri that he needs some water. so he is going to check if water is available in. near and tells her to sit n car. Pratham leaves.Gauri is sitting lonely in car .she is feeling suffocation in car so she come outside. after some time two or three goons passes from there and sees Gauri standing alone. they came near to her. gauri is very scared to see them and started to walk from there but one goon stops her way and just started to misbehave with her but now Pratham comes . they saw him and just go from there. gauri is very scared and hugs Pratham . Pratham shock to see this but understands gauri's situation that she is scared now and he also huge her and saying her to relax.after some time gauri gets consciousness and separate herself from him. gauri sees patham .pratham aske her all you alright. she nodded her head. Pratham tells sorry to her.
Pratham: i am sorry mujhe aise itni raat ko yahan aapko akela nahi rukne dena chahiye tha. i am really very sorry. Gauri is going to cry she is still very scared of that incident. Pratham understands that and they leave from there .

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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
I have posted the fourth part and sorry for being late. I will update the next part soon. please give your suggestions and comments.and I would also like to tell if u want to share any idea regarding story so please PM me . I will include it in my story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks for updating garima,n no need to be sorry,take your own time😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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tht was simply fab
i am huge fan of hiten n gauri tooo right frm kutimb days
loved it
continue soon n do pm me

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