hi guys my name is garima. I am big fan of hiten and gauri since kutumb.actually i just read the fan fics
which was recently posted by sunny .all are fabulous . after reading this i searched complete india-forums to read more fan fics on hiten and gauri.i found so many but unfortunately mostly are incomplete.but after reading all this i just decided to write new fan fic on hiten and gauri for all GHT fans. this is my first attempt to write any thing so please forgive me if i write something wrong or hurt any body's feeling.
now i give some brief about my story. so i will tell u it is completely hiten ang gauri story for there fans and i m not going to use so much characters to make it confusing.if i want any character so i introduced it later.so here is the intro for my fan fic characters.
introduction:-
Pratham mittal(hiten tejwani):
a rich , smart , handsome and successful businessman with great sense of business.he is the man every girl will dying for.he is very caring and concerned about his family.he is very down to earth and simple person with the attitude no time for love.in his family he has his father, mother and dadi.
Umesh mittal (pratham's father from kutumb): he is very strict ad religious love his family a lot.
Gayatri mittal (pratham's mother in kutumb): she is very simple and again very religious housewife who is looking for a simple girl for her son pratham.
Dadi(badi dadi from kutumb): she is also very sweet and tensed for pratham's marriage.
Gauri aggarwal(gauri tejwani):
she is very simple ,beautiful girl who just completed her graduate and waiting for her prince charming.but her parent are ready to marry her with suitable guy for her. she do not have any problem in arranged marriage and she believed that whoever selected by her parents will right for her and he is only her prince charming.
shashi aggarwal(gauri's father from kutumb): he is very simple and only worried about her daughter's marriage in good house.
sumitra aggarwal(gauri's mother from kutumb):she is very simple and again very religious housewife.
so these are main character of my fan fic.
now here is the story.
part 1:-
in pratham's house, there is a morning pooja going on. everybody is present there including pratham. her mother is doing arti. after puja finished she give prasad to everybody.then everybody sitted on dining table for break fast.his mother asked to pratham.
gayatri:to kya socha tumne.
pratham: kis baare mein
gayatri: are itni jaldi bhul gaya kal hi to tujh se baat ki thi shaadi ke baare mein.
pratham: maa maine kaha na abhi mujhe shaadi nahi karni hai abhi nujhe apne kaam par dhyaan dena.
gayatri: ye baat tu peechle do saal se kaha raha hai. beta kaam to chalta hi rehta hai par shaadi bhi to jaroori hai. agar tune koi ladki pasand kar rakhi hai to bata de hum us se mil lete hai.
pratham: maa aisa kuch bhi nahi hai aur waise bhi mere paas pyaar jaisi faltu bakwaas ke liye time nahi hai. mere paas aur bhi important kaam hai karne ke liye.accha maa abhi main chalta hu main office ke liye late ho raha hu. i have am urgent meeting in office.
he takes blessings from everybody and go for his office with babuji.
on dining table pratham's mother show her concern to her mother in law regarding pratham's marriage.dadi says tum chinta mat karo main aaj hi pandit ji ko bula kar kisi acche riishte ke baare mein baat karti hu.
in gauri's house, also the same scene going on her parents are worried for her marriage and decided to talk to panditji for good rishta about her.gauri is listening all this and feel tensed that her parents care so much about her marriage and about her sasural so she will not feel any discomfort in her sasural.
in pratham's house,panditji come with photos of some girls and shown them to pratham's mother an dadi.he explaining about every girl and now show pic of gauri to them.in that pic gauri is wearing light green colour saree with minimal makeup on her face.she is luking very gorgeous with simple looks. he said bahut hi pyaari bacchi hai.abhi abhi graduation ki hai , kal hi iske pitaji mere paas aaye the iske liye accha sa rishte ke liye agar aap kahe to main baat aage chalau.par ha ye log haisyat mein aaple barabar to nahi hai par bahut hi imaandaar log hai.pratham's mother said panditji hummein dahej ka koi laalach nahi hai hum to bas ek lakshmi doondh rahe hai jo is ghar ko aur hummare pratham ko sambhal le. pratham's mother and daadi both liked gauri and decided to talk with pratham in evening.
in evening when pratham and babuji come from office first gayatri and daadi talk with umesh about gauri and her family. umesh said that he does not have any problem but we have to speak with pratham first as his consent is must. gayatri said u don't worry us se main baat kar lungi.
gayatri goes in pratham's room and show pic of gauri to him but he even don't look at pic and said.
pratham: maa maine aap se pehle bhi kaha hai mujhe shaadi nahi karni hai.
gayatri: beta ek baar photo to dekh le.
when her mother insisted he gives look at picture. his mother asked kaisi lagi he did not response but he really not interested in marriage at all but still his mother insisted he said thik hai. his mother said agar tujhe pasand hai to baat aage chalau.he again said no and go out of the room.his mother said all scenario to her husband.now umesh talk with pratham and convince him to meet gauri once.now pratham is not able to deny as his babuji first time said anything pratham to do.
next morning on dining table gayatri said that she has talked with panditji and arranged the meeting for them on gauri's house on tomorrow evening.pratham said that is not possible because today he is going out of town and will come tomorrow evening only. her mother asked by when. he said around 5-6 pm. she said don't worry uske baad aa jana ab maine pandit ji se baat kar li hai ab mana karna theek nahi.warna ladki wale kya sochenge.he said all right as you said.
next:gauri's meeting with pratham's parents.
Edited by garimait - 12 years ago