ff(hiten and gauri):ek dooje ke liye

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi guys my name is garima. I am big fan of hiten and gauri since kutumb.actually i just read the fan fics

which was recently posted by sunny .all are fabulous . after reading this i searched complete india-forums to read more fan fics on hiten and gauri.i found so many but unfortunately mostly are incomplete.but after reading all this i just decided to write new fan fic on hiten and gauri for all GHT fans. this is my first attempt to write any thing so please forgive me if i write something wrong or hurt any body's feeling.

now i give some brief about my story. so i will tell u it is completely hiten ang gauri story for there fans and i m not going to use so much characters to make it confusing.if i want any character so i introduced it later.so here is the intro for my fan fic characters.

introduction:-
Pratham mittal(hiten tejwani):
Hiten Tejwani
a rich , smart , handsome and successful businessman with great sense of business.he is the man every girl will dying for.he is very caring and concerned about his family.he is very down to earth and simple person with the attitude no time for love.in his family he has his father, mother and dadi.
Umesh mittal (pratham's father from kutumb): he is very strict ad religious love his family a lot.

Gayatri mittal (pratham's mother in kutumb): she is very simple and again very religious housewife who is looking for a simple girl for her son pratham.

Dadi(badi dadi from kutumb): she is also very sweet and tensed for pratham's marriage.

Gauri aggarwal(gauri tejwani):
Gauri Tejwani
she is very simple ,beautiful girl who just completed her graduate and waiting for her prince charming.but her parent are ready to marry her with suitable guy for her. she do not have any problem in arranged marriage and she believed that whoever selected by her parents will right for her and he is only her prince charming.

shashi aggarwal(gauri's father from kutumb): he is very simple and only worried about her daughter's marriage in good house.

sumitra aggarwal(gauri's mother from kutumb):she is very simple and again very religious housewife.

so these are main character of my fan fic.

now here is the story.

part 1:-
in pratham's house, there is a morning pooja going on. everybody is present there including pratham. her mother is doing arti. after puja finished she give prasad to everybody.then everybody sitted on dining table for break fast.his mother asked to pratham.
gayatri:to kya socha tumne.
pratham: kis baare mein
gayatri: are itni jaldi bhul gaya kal hi to tujh se baat ki thi shaadi ke baare mein.
pratham: maa maine kaha na abhi mujhe shaadi nahi karni hai abhi nujhe apne kaam par dhyaan dena.
gayatri: ye baat tu peechle do saal se kaha raha hai. beta kaam to chalta hi rehta hai par shaadi bhi to jaroori hai. agar tune koi ladki pasand kar rakhi hai to bata de hum us se mil lete hai.
pratham: maa aisa kuch bhi nahi hai aur waise bhi mere paas pyaar jaisi faltu bakwaas ke liye time nahi hai. mere paas aur bhi important kaam hai karne ke liye.accha maa abhi main chalta hu main office ke liye late ho raha hu. i have am urgent meeting in office.
he takes blessings from everybody and go for his office with babuji.
on dining table pratham's mother show her concern to her mother in law regarding pratham's marriage.dadi says tum chinta mat karo main aaj hi pandit ji ko bula kar kisi acche riishte ke baare mein baat karti hu.

in gauri's house, also the same scene going on her parents are worried for her marriage and decided to talk to panditji for good rishta about her.gauri is listening all this and feel tensed that her parents care so much about her marriage and about her sasural so she will not feel any discomfort in her sasural.

in pratham's house,panditji come with photos of some girls and shown them to pratham's mother an dadi.he explaining about every girl and now show pic of gauri to them.in that pic gauri is wearing light green colour saree with minimal makeup on her face.she is luking very gorgeous with simple looks. he said bahut hi pyaari bacchi hai.abhi abhi graduation ki hai , kal hi iske pitaji mere paas aaye the iske liye accha sa rishte ke liye agar aap kahe to main baat aage chalau.par ha ye log haisyat mein aaple barabar to nahi hai par bahut hi imaandaar log hai.pratham's mother said panditji hummein dahej ka koi laalach nahi hai hum to bas ek lakshmi doondh rahe hai jo is ghar ko aur hummare pratham ko sambhal le. pratham's mother and daadi both liked gauri and decided to talk with pratham in evening.
in evening when pratham and babuji come from office first gayatri and daadi talk with umesh about gauri and her family. umesh said that he does not have any problem but we have to speak with pratham first as his consent is must. gayatri said u don't worry us se main baat kar lungi.
gayatri goes in pratham's room and show pic of gauri to him but he even don't look at pic and said.
pratham: maa maine aap se pehle bhi kaha hai mujhe shaadi nahi karni hai.
gayatri: beta ek baar photo to dekh le.
when her mother insisted he gives look at picture. his mother asked kaisi lagi he did not response but he really not interested in marriage at all but still his mother insisted he said thik hai. his mother said agar tujhe pasand hai to baat aage chalau.he again said no and go out of the room.his mother said all scenario to her husband.now umesh talk with pratham and convince him to meet gauri once.now pratham is not able to deny as his babuji first time said anything pratham to do.
next morning on dining table gayatri said that she has talked with panditji and arranged the meeting for them on gauri's house on tomorrow evening.pratham said that is not possible because today he is going out of town and will come tomorrow evening only. her mother asked by when. he said around 5-6 pm. she said don't worry uske baad aa jana ab maine pandit ji se baat kar li hai ab mana karna theek nahi.warna ladki wale kya sochenge.he said all right as you said.

next:gauri's meeting with pratham's parents.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi garima,i am nikita😊 like u i am too a GHT fanšŸ¤—
your ff on pratham gauri is superb,i can actually feel like everything is happening in front of me...specially dialogues are so realšŸ‘šŸ¼...plz keep writing...waiting for the next part😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikita_ght

hi garima,i am nikita😊 like u i am too a GHT fanšŸ¤—
your ff on pratham gauri is superb,i can actually feel like everything is happening in front of me...specially dialogues are so realšŸ‘šŸ¼...plz keep writing...waiting for the next part😃


thank u so much. i will post next part soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey garima,,nice keep it up,,y didnt u add hiten and gauri's pic when u were introducing them ,,dat ll look good,,plzz do
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1sanghamitra

hey garima,,nice keep it up,,y didnt u add hiten and gauri's pic when u were introducing them ,,dat ll look good,,plzz do

thanx for suggestion. i hv added the pic.
Edited by garimait - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 2:-
in gauri's house, panditji come and tell everything about pratham and his family. panditji praise him and his family a lot and tell that he knows mittal family since long ago.agar gauri ki shaadi us ghar mein ho jaati hai to woh bahut khush rahegi.panditji said that they are coming tomorrow to see gauri and he also gives pic of pratham in which he is wearing black business suit and looking very handsome.gauri's parents said hammari taraf se to rishta pakka hai bas gauri aur pratham ek doosre ko pasand kar le.
gauri' mom show pratham's pic to gauri and ask her did she like him or not. gauri feel shy and said jaisa aap ko thik lage and go from there in shyness. her mother said sharma gayi.gauri has a pic of pratham in her hand and thinking about him that how he will be to whom she is going to spent rest of her life.

next day in gauri's house everybody is doing preparation to welcome pratham and his family.after some time pratham's parents and dadi come along with pandit. gauri's parents welcome them.panditji introduce everybody to each other then gauri's parents asked that where is pratham . pratham's father said that he is out of town for business meeting but he can come here at any moment. gauri's father praise pratham that he has so much dedication towards work.now gauri come in light pink saree with her mom.pratham's welcome her and ask gauri about her hobbies she tell that she likes cooking a lot and singing as well.they said chalo accha hai waise bhi hammare pratham ko khane ka bada shok hai.they chit chat with each other for some time and gauri's parents said hummein gauri bahut pasand hai bas ek baar pratham aur gauri ek doosre ko pasand kar le.suddenly babuji's phone ring it is pratham' s call and said there is some problem in hi flight and he is not able to come.umesh told this to everybody and everybody become sad.gauri's mother said koi baat nahi ye dono phir kabhi mil lenge aur mujhe poora yakeen hai pratham humari pasand ko na nahi karega.gauri's father also said koi baat nahi.pratham's dadi give her gold chain as shagun to gauri and finalise the rishta and pandit to find a auspicious mahurat for there wedding.panditji do his calculation and said after 3 days it is ver good day to get married otherwise wait for next 6 months.everybody become tensed that what to do then pratham's mother said ki main gauri ko apne ghar le jaane ke liye aur intejaar nahi kar sakti.gauri's parents also said jaisa aap theek samjhe humein koi problem nahi hai and then there marriage dates fixed after 3 days.

next day in pratham's house they said everything to pratham that they fixed his marriage .pratham said aap aisa kaise kar sakte hai mera wait to karte.pratham's mother said that she is vey beautiful , smart and educated girl. us se behtar ladki tumhe nahi mil sakti . then pratham's father said dekho beta hume jo tumhare liye theek laga humnein kiya agar tumhe pasand nahi to hum unhe mana kar dete hai. prtham feels guilty and said nahi babuji aap mere bade hai aap ne jo mere baare mein soch hoga theek hi soch hoga. mujhe koi problem nahi hai main gauri se shaadi ke liye tayyar hu.

now everybody is in very hurry so decide to skip every function and decide only to do marriage function.

one day before marriage pratham trying to meet gauri but everybody denies that ab shaadi se pehle ladka ladki ek doosre se nahi mil sakte.pratham and gauri not able to meet with each other because circumstances are like this and there parents believe in each other family and another reason nobody wants to do delay in there marriage.

now the D day has come.pratham is wearing cream colour sherwani while gauri is wearing red colour lehenga with heavy gold jewellery and looking like a goddess in this attire.

i will not going thru the marriage rituals.now pratham and gauri is sitting in mandap and panditji tell to stand up for pheras .they completed there pheras .now pratham put sindoor in her forehead and tied the mangalsutra.gauri ans everybody is very happy but pratham is not as much happy because he is doing this marriage just for his family's happiness.now shaadi has completed and they take blessing from there elders. after that bidaai happen and now everybody is present i pratham's house and do the grah pravesh and other rituals.

next:pratham and gauri talk with each other for first time on there wedding night.

garimait thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
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hi guys i posted the next part please read and comments and suggestions are also welcome. if i did any mistake so please sorry its my first time i m writing something.i will post next part soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey garima.. thanks for starting this ff.. liked both the parts.. update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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garima,this one was awesomešŸ˜› ...waiting for their wedding night convo😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikita_ght

garima,this one was awesomešŸ˜› ...waiting for their wedding night convo😳

thanku

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