Dil Hai Tumhara: Taarey ff part5 pg13 7jan - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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welcome 2 I-F di🤗
n teaser is really intresting 😊
plz continue soon😊
n plz plz plz pm me😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey dea welcome to forum🤗
nic concept update soon😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow amazing concept plz update soon
taani ke kyunki ka jaldi jawab do
waiting
plz PM me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guyz im new isliye hume samaz nai aa raha hai ki part update kaha se karu post reply se ya phir new topic se ya phir pehla post edit kar ke????? Pls help...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Veereyi

Hey guyz im new isliye hume samaz nai aa raha hai ki part update kaha se karu post reply se ya phir new topic se ya phir pehla post edit kar ke????? Pls help...

di abhi aapne jaise comment kiya vaise hi part comment kar do 😊
n agar aap chaho toh us pehale post ko edit bhi kar sakte ho😳
Edited by tarey_forever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hiii firstly welcome to the IF and i am sure you got many friends soon 🤗

and it was awesome plz update it 👏👏

and ya one more thing if you want any help so pm me and to any other taareyians i am sure they always ready for your help warna mai toh hu hi 😆😆

btw i am yashi😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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welcome to taarey dream land dear🤗...loved it...update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 1
Rey is the rehearsal hall thinking bout avp's challenge, swayams no fr teaching d team basketball. He then closes his eyes n a small drop of tear escapes from his eyes...he brings d pic of radha n krishna in front of his eyes and says 'hey krishnaji maine taani ko aapka naam lete dekha hai aur aajkal to swayam bhi majnu se aapka bhakt ban gaya hai aur aaj main bhi aapse kuch mang raha hu...pls pls help me Im feeling all alone now jaise a body without soul aisa lqg raha hai ki mere sath koi nahi hai joh mujhe samajhta hai swayam bhi nahi i no ki uski apni vajah hai lekin aab main kya karunga avp ka challenge main kaise jeetunga???? Kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai...kehne ko toh mere saath mere saare dost hai joh mujhe support kar rahe hai phir bhi lag raha hai ki main akela hun aisa koi nahi hai jiske saamne mai apni feelings, dard aur dar ko bayan kar saku...sharon ko nahi pata sakta jyunki mujhse jyada swayam ko uski jaroorat hai...god kya apne mujhe aur meri feelings ko samajhne wala aur mujhe sambhalne wala iss badi si duniya main koi nahi banaya????

Saying this he is about to open his eyes when...
When he sees d radha krishna picture fade n a girl with a beautiful face bt sadness on it n watery eyes in which he cud c love n care fr him even though d picture was nt clear... She said aisa nahi hai rey mai hoon na main aapko samajhti hoon lekin kabhi bhi aapne mujhe aapko sambhalne ka aapke dard ko mera banane ka mauka hi nahi diya...

Slowly d faded picture becomes more clear n its none other dan taani...

Rey jumps up wid a smile thinking dat der is some one who understands loves n cares fr him bt suddenly his smile dissappears...

Rey- ye kaise ho sakta hai... I no ki taani pehle mujhse pyaar karti thi par mai gadha aur ullu ka pattha tha jo use samajh nahi paya par kya vo ab bhi mujhse pyaar karti hai...
Par ye kaise ho sakta hai agar vo abhi bhi mere liye feel krti hai aur hamesha mujhse pyaar karti thi to vo shivam ke sath kyun thi aur ab ab vo mere against hai, mujhse kabhi bhi thik se baat nahi karti...baat baat pe ladti hsi ladaku kahi ki
(suddenly realises wat he has said)
Nahi nahi meri taani ladakoo nahi hai vo to kitni cute n samajhdar hai mai hi usase ladta rehta hoon
( now rey inner voice i mean atma hops out sane as in the show wen rey is packing hes clothes in d bag)

Angel(reys atma/inner voice)- aahaan meri dushman taani, meri enmy taani, ladakoo taani , meri samajhdaar n cute taani kab se ban gaye haan bolo blolo...answer me mr. Reyaansh singhaniya

Rey- vo ... Vo tumhee kya karna hai point ye hai ki vo ladaako nahi hai got it

Angel- i got it par agar point. Ki baat hai den suno tum kehte ho ki vo tumhari dushman hai to its clear ki u hate her...

Rey- i dont hate her i lo... I mean i like her...dats it

A- like ya love ha ????

R- main use sirf like karta hun ok n btw isse koi farak nahi padata hai coz sach toh yahi hai ki vo shivam ke sath relwtion main thi aur iska ye matlab hai ki vo mujhse pyaar nahi kwrti

A- aisa nahi haiagar aisa hotq to vo monitor room main tujhse nahi kehti ki 'aap ye humesha bhool jaatw hai ku main aapko samajhti hoon'

Rey gets happy n says yes ur rite ...u r rite ...NAHI u r not rite

A- abe ab kya hua
R - phir vo mujhse ladayi kyun karti hai vo jaanti hai ki main ladakoo hu toh vo mujhe understand karne ke bajay ladtii kyun hai???

(sharon is overhearing all this she nos that both love each other bt cing the mahaan love guru reys confusion she hits her head on the rehearsal hall door n d door moves rey cums out of his covo with d angel)

R- whos it???? Shayad hawa hogi
( he turns backn cs dat his angel is gayab makes a sad face)
R- aab mujhe kaise pata chalega ki vo mujhse ladti kyun hai!?!??

Voice(not angel) - are buddhu vo tumse ladti hai kyunki vo tumse pyaar karti hai...
(rey thinks it is d angel so asks pyaar karti hai is liye ladti hai ...aise kbhi hota hai kya???

Voice - ha hota hai kunki hum sabse jyada pyaar karte hai usise sabse jyada ladte hai...

Rey- i think ur rite ( looks up n finds dat his angel is nt der nvundetstands dat sum1 else said this) he starts searching bt cnt find any 1 )
R- kaun hai yaha pe?????

Precap:
R- OMG I love her ...i am in love wid taani

End of part1
guys pata hai boring tha par im sry ... I no u all were expecting me 2 show d teaser in this part bt sry gyuz ill b putting it in. Part 3...n pls dont hate me fr this update
Edited by Veereyi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Res ..
Unres..
I dunno from where shud I start.. But seriously.. AWESOMR START!!! Loved the fact ki Rey khud se apni feelings for taani ke liye argue kar raha hai.. nd Sharon sun leti hai.. wow!!! Loving it dearo.. please continue soon .. N boring bolne ki himmat mat karna.. Kitna interesting hai!! Pm me when u update!!
Edited by Shivangi_Taarey - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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teaser:
hey.. welcome to IF.. here's a jhappi for u.. 🤗
n ur FF is not at all boring.. it's really interesting... u gotta update soon n pm me.. please pm me... n UPDATE SOON!!
Chap 1:
wow.. that was amazing.. just loved it... n why u saying that ur FF's not good.. it's damn gud... really.. PLEASE UPDATE FAST N PM ME... i can't afford to lose reading this FF... pls pls pls dear.. pm me when u update!!!
Edited by ShReya_TaaRey - 13 years ago

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