FF:Shameless Thread #6: Ch38 Water, pg1!! - Page 110

AMMAIZZING:)

superb...mind blowing update really a roller coaster ride

continue soon

I hav nooo words it was an minblowing part n , miss dem alottt luvvv dis ff n luvvv arshi

Firstly I'm sooo sorry for the late comment !! It's just that from the past two days my relatives have been there and my mom is also not well so didn't get time at all to comment !!!! Sorry !!

The update was brilliant !!! I read it many times before commenting !!!!! Brilliantly written !!!!!

Arnav's fear, emotions and love for his wife and child and worry that they are fine or not !!!!! The detective was in cahoots with Roy/Alice !!!!!! I had an inkling about the same but didn't pay attention to it much !!!!! Go Arnav !!!!! Loved how you wrote about his fury at the detective and how he hit the detective !! He found the detectives phone !!!!!
All I can say is AMAN I love you !!!!!! He put his life in danger just to save khushi and Arnav !!!!! I'am still hoping he's alive !!! His last message made me cry 😭 !!!!
Finally Arnav is there !!!!!!!

Hats off to you for writing so beautifully about khushi's fear and her motherly instinct of protecting her baby no matter what !!!
And also for the character if royal/Alice !!! I have never read about such a character in any books or FF's( and I have a read quite a lot of them) !!!!! The part where he pours the blood all over himself is sooo creepy and disgusting to even think about !!! Finally she found a way to escape !!!!! So she tricked him and escaped in another car !!!!!!
Omg !!! The car went into the lake !!!! Her worry for the baby and then saving herself !!!! Alas royal is also in the lake !!!!
Arnav !!!!! He saved her !!!!! But Alice again returned !!!
They hugged and are finally together !!!!! ❤️
Dia !!!! Brilliant how Arnav used the roy/alive thing as a means of killing Diana !!!!! Atleast one villain out of the way !!!

I had goosebumps during the remaining part !!!! You have written it superbly !!!!!! So the injection had contained spider venom !!! Thankfully khushi had had the antidote that day !!!

She knew how to stop his madness and put herself at risk !!! This part was amazingly written !!! The way you differentiated between royal and Alice while writing about only one person and how khushi used their weaknesses against them !!!!
Finally everything is alright in their world !!!!

I have to applaud you for your awesome and marvelous writing skills !!!!! 👏 👏
Reallly sad that it's ending !!!!! I hope aman is alive !!! Thnakgod the baby is fine !!!! Thnx for the pm !!! Again sorry for the late comment !!!! Hope I didn't miss anything !!
Can't wait to read the next part !!!

Again an amazing, awesome, super-duper, mind blowing, mind boggling, fantastic, fantabulous n wat not update 😆😆 Believe me I always wanted the end of Alice, they way you wrote. I was so happy to read that, glad to know my 1% of brain thinks like you 😃 I am honored.. hehehe! Hope Aman is safe n so excited to know this liyana.. due to her, arshi's life was a nightmare!

Loved it.. Khushi fought really hard.. Glad Arnav found her amidst all odds.. Alice is no more... Waiting for the next part.. :)

Awesome!!!! Thank you for not having a cliffhanger. I almost got heart attack reading what's gonna happen.
Roy is a physho, but I truly admire your thought and ability to pull this off in written. You rock!!!
I am just speechless.
Totally totally awesome...
Loved it.

Can't believe its ending soon but it's been great journey. MG and Shameless of so different genre, you are an amazing writer. Keep writing

Can't wait for next

wooow...finally the problems in arshi's life is over...very nice update...khushi handled the situation very well...

M alwaz running out of words after reading ur wrk
awsome part dear