FF:Shameless Thread #6: Ch38 Water, pg1!!

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anupama

@ak_maggi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1081

Wowww!! wat an endinf to tht devil!! superb work Tina👏

Hats off to ur imagination.. so intricate... wel etched story.. No loopholes watsoever...from start tp end.. so well planned... n in real sense a Romantic thriller..!!!

I cud imagine evry part of tht sick man n Khushi n Arnav s restlessness .. My heart rate doublin here n thre...

my fav part was how Khushi handled it... she is no abala nari isnt she! n d moment when Arnav was mentioned she got strength... she wanted a future wid him.. a desire n love so strong tht u wanna live to make ur love s dream fulfilled! Loved her portarayal!

Lovely job Tina.. I wish this story cud be made on tv...😃

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1082

Tina as always I was reading it n I was so scared...ESP d pic of Roy...aman was gud...wish he is alive...god m so scared n don't knw whether I will b able to sleep...u r queen of thrillers dear...

M still trying to breathe normally coz I was so excited, anxious, scared, horrified...I felt I was khushi n I have to save myself n baby from dat psycho...

Can't explain in words wht m feeling...d best ever thriller...thnx

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Taraqs

@Taraqs

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#1083

OMG TINA!!!!! I don't know what to say... FANTASTIC, just FANTASTIC!!!!! 👏👏 I still can't believe that Roy was sooo messed up... Was it because of how his mother treated him when he was a child???? And where did his second being come from, ALICE????? So much suspense still left in the story...

Anyway, I hope nothing happened to arshi baby... And aman, poor guy, please save him somehow😭

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#1084

LOVED IT

PLZ DNT KILL AMAN

AWESOME

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Muniza.Ahmed

@Muniza.Ahmed

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#1085

superrr amaazzzinggg
mind blowwwinggg
thrillerrr :D

loved it omg love love loveddd it !!

this was some kind of stuff i was hoping to see :D

you truly rockkk tinaaa!!

The first part where roy scared khushi to death - oops no Alice scared khushi to death oh mannn you have written it sooo beautifully. :D
that 3-2-1 huddle was something surely deserved for this suspense!

The bloody roy-al-ice! OMG such a horrible leech!
acha hua he killed himself, ajeeb psychooo tha yaar!
but the inner fight of himself, what amaaazing execution ;) thumbs up dearrr! :D

Love the way aman stood truue to his boss and arnav finally reached out for her help, i was not expecting khushi to be so brave ahaha :D and that mirror thing hahaha that was a surprise element too!

Last last last thinggg... Khushi showing concern as a mother to roy, this fearless khushi i have been looking for and her past, i was damn sure there's something cooking up and whatever people/arnav said about her behavior/character initially wasnt the real story i had this feeling and YAYYYAYYYEEE :D i was righttt!

This chapter was truly the bone of this ff and finally it's updated! shukaaarrr! :D felt so good after reading this one! excellent superb mind blowing update! :D

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cherry227

@cherry227

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1086

I got goosebumps! Fabulous writing Tina :)))

Awesome climax...

All the raina kids r deranged... I wonder why! Was liyana a bad mother? Roy chose Khushi just coz she looked like his mother? Why he called her shameless though???