FF:Shameless Thread #6: Ch38 Water, pg1!! - Page 108

Awesome really awesome update. Loved it. At last both of them are safe. just hopes aman is safe. Thanks for the pm.

What an intriguing update it was Tina...really gripping till the last line...phew atlast both Arnav & Khushi r safe...was really worried till the end of the update wondering if any of the duo will b hurt especially when it was revealed that the lead detective too was hand in hand with Roy ... btw, is Aman fine...Please don't kill him...he was the only helping hand for them all along...waiting for next update

hey tina thxx fr update...

this was reallly tooo good...

The update was fantastic 🤗

Please, let them be okay. Please, let them be okay.

It's okay baby. Mama's here. I will save you. I won't let anything happen to you

All the while Arnav praying for Khushi & his child's safety & Khushi ensuring her baby within her that mama will definitely save him/her was admirable

Khushi breaking all the lights was awesome. Alice dumping a barrel of blood over himself was sickening & scary ...what else can be expected out of such a sickly double faced beast

Atlast even the Detective had been under the control of the Rainas...it couldn't go more bad than this, danger had been hanging around Arnav's neck like the air around him - the killers in the disguise of his friends, the Rainas...one lusting over him and the other two wanting to kill his love for their own mad reasons and the detectives misleading him all the time.

He shook his head. "Your legal name is Royal Raina. Nothing can change that."

Alice's eyes rounded with rage. "I am Alice! I am in control!"

"Dead. Dead. Arnav and Khushi are so dead." Alice sang the words off-key as she stepped into the moonlit bay, her eyes glazed with hatred.

"Let her go, Royal," he said, his voice ice-cold, "Settle this with me."

Arnav quickly acting while the second grade detective spoke to the head showed his astuteness. Similarly Arnav distracting Alice addressing her as Roy & kindling her anger was a wonderful trick

Trust me, her eyes seemed to say.

He fell to his knees, shaking. "Mother? You really accept me?"

She was finally beginning to understand a bit of his madness.

"Truly Mother? You love me?"

Khushi's act of distracting Alice using Roy's weakness as a bait was an appreciative move 👏

Khushi's daring act of distracting Roy & rashly driving another car through the glass wall sounded dangerously thrilling

Aman Mathur: Shit, I'm in the psycho's car. He noticed me following. I convinced him I'm on his side though. He's wearing a dress and makeup, completely insane.

Off all the lines, this one is particularly wonderful... I just can't stop myself from reading it again & again 😊

Aman Mathur: Answer me! We need help! Mrs. Boss is trapped. Help us!

Aman Mathur: Help her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aman Mathur: I cansn'dt typge. Mrsss bosss

Aman's such an adorable character. He was ready to sacrifice his life for the sake of his Boss. Last update, I was confused as to why Aman didn't inform Arnav but the messages clearly points out how he was dying to inform Arnav at every moment possible. But alas that deceitful detective made things worse for him

The underwater fight was astounding. The car submerging into water forcing Khushi to swim to the surface, Roy pulling her back into the water, trailing his tongue along her collarbone, struggling to free herself from the clutches from that heavy beast, Arnav appearing into picture & fighting, Alice biting Arnav like an animal, Khushi panicking which made Alice rush towards her, Arnav dragging Roy back & trying to shoot him, Arnav rushing to save Khushi to the shore when he found her struggling to breathe...this part was framed in such a way that I was seated frozen on my chair like I do while watching a thriller movie climaxing

The sequences were lined out perfectly..... A sudden high-pitched laugh, Dia springing out unexpectedly & pressing a knife on Khushi's throat, Alice singing off-key, Arnav addressing Alice as Royal intently aiming to buy some time & turning Alice's rage on her sister , Khushi ducking at the right time picking up her husband's hint, Arnav pulling the trigger on reading the frightful inscription without letting fear overtake him, Khushi making a clever move of speaking like Liyana while Roy was blabbering about the venom - this part was constructed in a manner that focused on brilliant action vs beastly insanity

"Royal? It is Mother. You won't let Alice hurt me, will you? You must help Mother, Royal, you must.."

The inner fight between Roy & Alice was awesome. A fight over dominance leading to death was well portrayed ( Khushi's idea scored a point). Finally Roy stabbing himself was a relief

Wonder what happened to Aman & the baby, cause Khushi felt pain in her abdomen following the car crash into the lake???????????????? Then came the precap stating that the baby is fine, but still Aman????????????????

The title of the precap "Liyana" sounds like another flashback waiting to be revealed....reasons for the transformation of 3 sick, stupid & mad beasts

Was wondering why Liyana left her 3 children? Was it because she couldn't handle them she left?

Wooowww superb...luved the transformation of alice to roy nd back to Alice...as usually totally epic...

Oooh... emmm. Geee...
Holly Peanuts...!!!!! What a roller thriller coaster ride..!!!
Thoseee, thoseee detectives. They were ROUGES...!!!! :O
My intelligent, brave , smart, beautiful khushi. She escaped. And my charming, manly, masculine, strong arnav.. ge saved her. !!! :')
The end of royal raina and Alice..forever.. the end if dia..!!!
And the best part,,
The baby z safe.. :').. Awww, Ily Tina, for gvng such an awesome chap and precap...:D <3
Sooo, the much awaited liyana,, finally z to make an entry..
Can't can't can't wait.. :D :D
Awesome chap, update soon. !!! :D

This whole thing was commendable! 👏

Gosh you write so well!

As I say Its been a roller coaster ride and I'd never want it to end but as they say "All good things come to an end", implies here too!

Best FF and Best story!
I am eagerly waiting for the last chapter and the epilogue!

PM ME SOON DEAR!
Love and hugs 🤗