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Posted: 12 years ago
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Me . .pm me wen u update cz it's fab
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Awsome ..!
Loved it ..!
Plz continew ..!
Update soon ..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice concept and thanks for the pm :)

Nikki <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome...
Wating for the next update...
And thanks for the pm... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its contnun of that story and guys its purly a real story...dnt ask whos story is ...i jst change the names only buts its a pure cmplte story of a gal...


BTWN Death And Love


Tanhaai, tanhaai
Dil ke raaste mein kaisi thokar maine khaayi
Toote khwaab saare, ek maayusi hai chhaayi
Har khushi so gayi, zindagi kho gayi
Tumko jo pyaar kiya maine to sazaa main paayi
Tanhaai, tanhaai, milo hai phaili hui tanhaai



Kriyas pov

Har dhin mujey eysey rothehuvey dekna mera parents ko or mera poora family ko nhi hoga mujey aageybadna hoga'yaa pata hey sabko boolna mushkil hey rey Sharon sab par mujey usey sab side mei rekna hoga or aagey jaana hoga'mei nei kisi ko bi hurt nhi kiya phir dukihoney ka koi bath nhi'

Par phir be vo dhin yaadh arahahey mei or Sharon arohi sab if pey spaming karthey vakthna kithna kushitha'

Ekdoosarey ko chidatheytha'chotti chotti bath keliye bi vol log mujey ithni hasathey par ab vo dhin ..kash vo dhin vapass aya'

Par if I am nt their phir kyu..pathanhi mujey eysa feel horahahey ..that mujey kuch honey valahey'.

Rey '.haa usdhono ney rey key naamsey mujey chidathahey par ab vo log be nhi rey bi'pathanhi ye akey la pan kab tha hey

Flash back

K mom;-bettaaa bettaaa

Kriya;-haa mom

K mom;-neechey aajvo or ye dekko papa ney tumarey liye kya laya hey

Kriya;-merei liye dekko tho

K dad;-betta

Kriya;-haa papa kya huva

K dad;-blood

Kriya;-vo papa kal sey mujey nose bleeding horahahey

K mom;-par tumney humsey nhi bola kyu

Kriya;-mommm I thought

K dad;-jaldhi thayahogavo dr keypass janahey

Kriya;-mommm

Krithi;-dii aap ko janahoga

Kriya;-ok


Dr;-actually kithni din sey ns bleeding horahahey

Kriya;-char din sey

K papa;-kya chardin sey tuney humsey cut by

Dr;-char din sey'ok w8 humey kuch test karnahey

Kriya;-test

Dr;-haa

K papa;-ok

Flash back end

Actually almost they done all test but thir s no vartn in anything finally the blood vas gin too cancer scerch cntr..report came aftr smdays'ya thr s no prob but eysey hi bleeding hota body ko rest karna mushkil hoga jo kuchbi hoga..so they gave only injct as food nthng more ..or I can hav 3 glass of water in oneday nt more thn if I feel hungry ishud hav only bitturgrd jucie..kya meri zindhaye eysabanadhiya univer jiii'mujey ab rey kizaroorrath hey par von hi mei kya karoonga 'koi bi mera pass nhi


Khwaab mein dekha tha ek aanchal
Maine apne haathon mein
Ab toote sapnon ke shishe
Chubte hai in aankhon mein) - 2
Kal koi tha yahin, ab koi bhi nahin
Banke naagin jaise hai saanson mein laheraayi
Tanhaai, tanhaai, palkon pe kitne aansu hai laayi

Rey pov

Kya mei ney koi galathi kii ' vo galath nhi tha kya..mei nei galathi kii kya'.mussey ussey gussa nhi karna tha kya'jo mei nei kiya ussey ab kaisey usdhana hoga'kya karna padey ga'mujey ussey chahiye hameishakeliye 'par mei nei ussey ithna hurt kiya'.universi mujey help karonaa ithna kuch mei ney kiya par vo

Kriyas pov

Rey aapko pathanhi meriliye aap ithna imp hey par aap'jo kuch huva vo acceykeliye kuyi mei jaarahahu hameshakeliye sab ko chodkar univer ji kei pass'mujey pathahey aap move on kardhiya'.i thnk mey aap ko hurt kiya'rey sorry 'I vil love u aftr my deth too


(Kyoon aisi umeed ki maine
Jo aise naakaam hui
Door banaayi thi manzil
To raste mein hi shaam hui) - 2
Ab kahan jaaoon main, kisko samjhaaoon main
Kya maine chaaha tha aur kyoon kismat mein aayi

Sharon pov

Mei nei jo kuch bi kiya vo sahi hey'kriya meri layak nhi'vo jootey hey'vo mujey hurt kiya..usko mujey vishwas nhi 'vo ekdham bakwass hey'usko mei pasandh nhi..vo meri koi be nhi

Apko sach mei aisa lgta hai ki maine apko kuch bi nhi samja

Meri badi maa ke baad aap hi sbse close mere..

N apki jagah koi nhi lega kbhi.. Maine apko jitna hurt kiya utna koi nhi karega..isliye i think apko muje chod kar aarohi ko vo jaga deni chahiye She is very much excelent den me n will remain wid u forever..unlike me n ok i'm vry bad more den anyoneI'm nt saying abt u i say apko lagta hai ki mei apko apni sis nhi manti,as u said i don't cnsidrd u anyone in mah lyf

Kriyas pov

Sharon tumey patha hw I luv u as my sis more than my real sis par tumney sab ko ek ?n markithara make kiya or stop kiya..i tried a lot 2 4gt u but noo I cnt 'par mujey move one karnahey..har dhin tumarey barey mei sochthithi par kya karu koiphayadha nhi if I hurt you sorry and I new I vnt be thr more to hurt u becoz I am gng to place vr their vil no one for me and if u tried to find me also u vnt get..par Sharon still I luv u as a sis tc of ur self


Tanhaai, tanhaai, jaise andhero ki ho gehraayi
Dil ke raaste mein kaisi thokar maine khaayi
Toote khwaab saare, ek maayusi hai chhaayi
Har khushi so gayi, zindagi kho gayi
Tumko jo pyaar kiya maine to sazaa main paayi
Tanhaai, tanhaai, milo hai phaili hui tanhaai - 2
Tanhaai, tanhaai, tanhaai, tanhaai

Aarohi pov

Dii mujey aapko pasandh hey or Sharon ko bi mujey kuch nhi patha kyaroo 'mei dhono ki beech phas gaye'mujey dhono ko bi support karna hey'dii r sharon mei dhono ko pasandh karthi hu ..mujey dno chahiye

Kriyas pov

Aarohi I gonna miss u badly pathanhi zindhagi mujey kaisey mod par lekkar agaye'par aarohi tumey mujey promis karnapdaeyga tum kabi bi mujey hate nhi karogi'or vil luv aarohi till my soul reach to univers jiii..meri pyari behan

Ab mujey ye kahani mey ek dii hey uska nam neha'vo thi humsab sey bedi hey har cheez mei ussey share karthahu'dii itoo gonna misss u a lot 'I pray to god gd gvs all blessing to u..and take care of my kiddos Sharon and arohi''..

After 1 years(ths part is nt real)

Reys pov

Kripa utooo..kripaaa..haa kripa mera or kriya ki betti'kriya humney chodkar hameyshakeliye gaye uska univers jiikey pass kaash vo yeha hothi uski betti ko dekney'.nt only humari aarohi or arjun ok twin bacchey or Sharon or swayam ko ek ladka kithni happy family par merit ho ye sab meri vajasey '''''' kash vo yeha hothi meri or mera baccheyki sath


and guys ths gal is nt dead she s alive...do u guys vant to no nw wer s ths gal and vat she dng and val all she s suffrng

Edited by karthikasekhar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

unres

nice but sad 1
Edited by anjalijayan - 12 years ago
NishKP thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update
loved it
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Awsome update. . . .
Bahut sad tha. . . . .
Bt,kriya ki death. . . .
Not fair. . . . . .
Main lead ko hi maar diya. . . . . .
Chalo nxt part jaldi update krna. . . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsm update yr...
sad tha but bahut acha tha

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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Sorry to sharon luvrs but the sharon charactr was mine in real as i know wht i had will not recovr anyhow..so sorry to all of u,sorry se bi kuch nhi hoga..

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