arhi os : the be(s)t proposal

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Posted: 12 years ago

hi if-ians..i was a silent reader of if forum for a long time and created a account days back.now i couldnt hold myself frm posting a os.i bhav written it long back as a gift fr my frenz bday n now i wish i could post t here..hop u like t...plz giv mi comments whethr t s gud or bad..i kno t ll b worst since ds s my frst wrk..bt i hop i get some response..i post a part of my os if i gt responses ill post t fully..

keeping finhers crossed...

THE BE(S)T PROPOSAL

It was a fine day morning wen the sun rays made KHUSHI wake up from her deep sleep.she was content were she was,wrapped protectively around her husband's hand.Thinking of which a smile crept up on her lips..
This has became a routine for both Arnav singh raizada n Khushi singh raizada to wake up in each other arms for past one month..
Khushi snuggles into her husband arms remembers whatever had happened 1 month ago..
1 month ago
Arnav was saved from kidnapperes by none other than khushi ,and the snake shyam who was behind whole ficaso was handed over to the police for kidnapping the mighty ASR and spoiling his di's life. Anjali had a shock of her life hearing all the news about her so called husband, had a miscarriage.knowing the truth that Khushi aved Arnav's life made Anjali more closer to khushi.she got a new friend in the form of Khushi but it was had for her to recover from the loss of her unborn RAJKUMARI.
Arnav and khushi understood the feelings for bth of them after the kidnap ficaso.they realized the love for each other..Anjali made sure that they had a proper marriage.it was exactly one month ago.

Mami totally changed n pouring her love towards both Payal and Khushi..Nani ws happy wid the turnover in Arnav's attitude but worryd for her beloved anjali's state.

Everyone's life had turned in a gud way but anjali had a worst tym goin thru the news of hr lost baby.she avoided coming out of her room..she made least conversations with others. n d smile which alwys adorned her face was now miles away'bt she made a fake one so that no one will worry fr her. but nothing can skip her chottey's n Bhabhi khushi's eyes..they bth very well knew dat their di who was life of all wasn't happy..
On their SR,
It ws their marriage day night n bth knew that even though they shared the same room for past months today is going to be different ..
Khushi ws sitting in d middle of their bed wid legs drawn to her chest ,face covered wid ghoongat..she had her heart go DHAK DHAK in she know the reason of it.
Arnav ws entering the room with slow strides which has caused her heart go dhak dhak..he entered the room and rooted to the place to see his love beautifully adorning his oops their bed.he came and sat near khushi n lifted her ghoongat.their eyes met.she couldnot meet his gaze..
She can't hold the deep stare of her husband ,shiftin her gaze towards her toe while a blush crept up her cheeks.he took her chin in his hand n made her look at him.the next action made her fall from him more. He kissed her forehead.that one kiss said the love of him for her.thgen he kissed her eyes,nose lowering himself towads her lips.
When he was to pursue he heard a mild whisper and he knows dat it was frm his dearie wife..stil her chin n his hand he looked at her n she was fumbling hard 2 make up words..
KHUSHI:wo wo arnavji,
ARNAV:haan khushi say mi..
KHUSHI:arnavji,il say one thing n you shudn't take me wrong?
ARNAV:khushi u have all ryts 2 say anything to me'dont be afraid and say me what his going through ur mind.
KHUSHI:arnavji,I dont want anything to happen between us today n khushi watched arnav face expression getting changed.. she knows that he has taken her in a wrong way..its not that I dont love u bt..
ARNAV: on hearin this he is getting restless and said den wat khushi.??
KHUSHI:wo anjali di na!!she s so deep in her sorrow n making a fake smile fr ur sake..when she gets a happy life like me n when she have her smile bcoz of her happiness in face den we can take our next step.i don want 2 hav happiness without anjali di having none.it was due to me she lost her happines.its also bcos of me, she is n dis situation..bt arnavji, its nt dat I dont love you..
He was overwhelmed wid her reply..he dint even thougth abt dis..how som1 cud always put som1's happiness before theirs..he knws his khushi s always such way and he s the luckiest person to hav her in his life.
ARNAV:thank u khusi fr coming into my life,understandin me n my di., and dont ever dare 2 open ur mouth 2 say that all ficaso is bcoz of u. I agree with u khushi..whatever you feel is correct until di gets her happiness v dont have 2 have ours..with dat he ws abt 2 get up from the bed to sleep in recliner..Khushi was holdin his hand frm back..
He was confused wd her behavior n ws questionin her wid his eyes..
KHUSHI:if ur gonna sleep ther den wts the difference btwn our previous marriage n this marriage??i just said dat we cud start our life after di had one it doesn't mean that u should sleep ther..i always hav dream of getting love marriage done..so can u be my lover until we start our new life..u know u can hold me,u can kiss me, u can take me as a date,u sleep here in the same bed wid me except that..am I askin more??or am I ryt?I dono arnavji..

she ws goin on blabbering..He was amused by her antics..he came near her n put his fingers on her lips n den oly she realized where she was n wat was she speaking..did she really said dt ??? did she really said it loudly dt she wants him 2 be her lover???her husband 2 be her lover???she ws scolding herself in her mind..

thats it for now..if i get some response il update t ..or il stop posting..

PART 2:BELOW

PART 3:BELOW(LAST PART)

Edited by Rami92 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

i know i'm nt good in writing..atleast two ppl liked t..just thought ll complete this os..so here am going wid d second part of t...criticisms are welcomed...

part 2

Arnav ws seein her face expression changing frm confusion 2 shocked n he knows wtt she must be thinking..

ARNAV:khushi khushi relax.. y r u getting shocked?i already said dt u could always ask wt u wnt n u could say wtever u wnt?! So don get tensed..so my baby wife needs her husband 2 be her lover..then oki..watever is my wife's wish its my duty to fullfill..so from 2day on I am ur lover..deal???

KHUSHI:she ws blushing profusely by his comment ..nhe also said dt she is his baby wife?!!

ARNAV:I always wnted 2 feel wat love wil be?hw it will make us feel?after mom's death I came into the shell wich u have cracked and entered my heart..it's always be you khushi who can make me feel who am really is!will u let me feel dat khushi??will u be my dear lover..??

KHUSHI:she ws happie 2 hear dat n said yes arnavji..

N dey bth slept on deir side in the nyt wen dey woke up bth wer entwined 2gether..khushi ws startled n ws abt 2 getup wen he pulled her 2wrds him n kissed n her cheeks n forehead sayin "good morning my lady love"..n she replied sayin good morning arnavji..

N he cutely pouted asking wont u give ur lover a good morning kizzy n she ws reluncant at first n seeing him cutely pout she kissed in his cheeks and pulled his cheeks and ran to the washroom shyly.

So he use 2 kiss her b4 goin 2 office , comin aftr office ,in d mrng and in the nyt…dis has became the new found loverz routine for a month.. sleepin n each othrz arms n startin d day with deir kiss..arnav was totally changed and everone loved the change in him…

PRESENT

She ws still n his arms cherishin deir 1 mnth life n suddenly she rememberd dat she has 2 be angry on him n mentally scolded herslf for bein in this position wid him n was about 2 getup when he pulled her back n kissed n her nose tip sayin "good morning babieee…happie 1 month anniversary"

she wriggled herslf from his grip turning her face away from him not uttering a single word..he understood dat his wife s still angry with him fr wt hs happened yesterday..He knows he hs 2 try hard 2 pacify her..so he again strtd manofyin her saying "dear am really sorry baby..i didnot mean .."

Before he cud complete dat sentence he heard a loud bang on d bathroom door sayin him indirectly that she doesn't want 2 hear him..

In bathroom..

She knows very well that once she hear his manofying voice she will melt, dats y she banged the door hard..

She started 2 shower thinkin wat has happened yesterday..

YESTERDAY

She took his hankey,wallet,mobile and his briefcase handing them over to him she said..

KHUSHI:arnavji remember na tomorrow s our 1 month anniversary celebration of becoming lovers.(n a blush crept up her cheeks sayin those wrds..)..so come soon from office vll hav a gala tym..

ARNAV:ya babie I remember n sure willl spend the startin of that spl day 2gether..now wer s my kizzy?

KHUSHI: (though being n 1 month relationship,she always feel shy when she has to kiss him)..u r so bad nt even forgetting once with dat she gav him a small kiss in his cheeks and flew away to kitchen to hide her blush..

dat day she waited for him decoratin their room , settin up a table for 2 ,to hav a dinner but he dint come at al..she tried calling his mobile but it ws switched off..on contacting his office they replied that he had an urgent meetin he went there earlier itself..She ws worryd for him n felt a ache at heart that he dint return 2 enjoy the day..but she brushed all thoughts away n ws waitin fr him..

When he entered their room,she was sleeping in the chair with her heads in the table.he was worried seeing her sleep this way..when he checked watch it was nearly 1:30 am..and he know that she would have been waiting for him and eventually slept in the chair..

He decided not to disturb her but he cannot see her sleeping restlessly in the chair so he picked her up..

As soon as he picked her up she woke up saying arnavji..arnav sensing that she she woke up said shh love , you sleep ..let me place u in the bed..but she got down from his arm and made her way to serve him food..

KHUSHI: Arnavji ,u come and hav ur dinner..seeing him safe she entirely forgot that he dint not make up home for the celebration.

ARNAV:wo wo relax khushi..its 1:30 now and I already had my dinner..have you had your dinner khushi?

then only he realized his room being decorated and the food being untouched.so his love was waiting for him to come home and to have the dinner together..he realized that he should have been here to celebrate their one month celebration.

khushi's eyes welled up and tears were threatning to flow seeing him late for their celebration and he had his dinner to..she don't want to spoil his mood so she was controlling her tears.

KHUSH:yes Arnavji.i already had..her words were failing her.. so she decided its better to sleep.she made her way to the bed saying its time to sleep arnavji..

ARNAV:he realized that she was about to cry.he said khushi am really really sorry..its an important deal so only I wasn't able to cancel the meeting ..since my mob charge was down I wsnt able to call u..

KHUSHI:its oki arnavji come lets sleep.

ARNAV:no, khushi I made mistake ..how could I forget …..?..before he complete the sentence he knows what was he about to say..was he actually about to say dat he forgot?GOSH he knows she would have been angry now!!.

Actually she doesn't want to disappoint him..since she knows he always loves his work.she was abt to console him that she is not angry..when he said the word forgot..she was really angry..

KHUSHI ST:how cud he forget our anniversary?how could he forget that am waiting for him..??don speak to him khushi kumara gupta singh raizada..

She took her pillow and made her way to recliner and didnt mind him asking continuous sorry!!

ARNAV St:oh god arnav wt hav u said..see now ur wifey is really super duper angry on u..jus go and pacify her.oh ho she is moving towards recliner oh no..she s not replying for any of my sorries which means that she is not going to speak to me..what the..?

Arnav was kneeling beside recliner and ws asking sorry..she just gave him a glare and pointed towards the bed and he knows its better to go and sleep so he made his way to the bed.Arnav was just lying in his bed he was missing her.he knew his word forgot made her this angry.he was not able to sleep.sensing disturbance in her he knows that she also have not slept.

Khushi was not able to sleep without his warmth so she made her way to the bed and slept on her side..but ultimately they cuddled into each other like every other day..

PRESENT

She came out of the shower brushing of yesterday memory. He was standing outside the bathroom door and was asking sorry .

She knows that once she looks into his eyes she will forgive him,actually she already forgave him but maintaining her fake anger..so she made her way to the living room without giving ears to his sorries..

Arnav came ready to go to his office..he was looking hopefully at Khushi that she would have forgiven him..but she served him his food without seeing his face.when he was about to open his mouth to ask sorry she excused herself saying that she has got work in the kitchen.no one doubted them that they had an row..

Arnav cannot stand this silence and made his way into kitchen.she was showing his back to him..he came and hugged her from back and was saying"I really did not mean it khushi..i wasnot able to come home am really really sorry khushi. punish me some other way but don t ever by your silence".

To say the truth as soon as he hugged her from behind she wants to turn to him and say that he is forgiven bt trying haed to maintain this fake anger.she loved his pamperings.she was about to say speak with him when they heard a giggles from outside..

Both were shocked to see their whole family hs watching him hugging her from back..but thank god he was speaking low so that they couldnot make out what he was saying..

ANJALI:wo chottey, what r u doin in the kitchen with khushiji?

Arnav was embarrassed n khushi's face turned beet red with her question.arnav replied that he came to drink water.he made his way out saying to no one in particular that he is going to office..

All were happy seeing that their ARNAV is really changing..least did they know they had a fight.

Khushi was deep in her thougth to make her anjali di come out of her shell..and she got an idea so she called payal by her side and explained everything..payal readily accepted her idea.

Nani,mami was sitting in anjali room since anjali rarely comes out of her room..khushi and payal came there with the tray, kept it in the table and startred with their plan..

PAYAL: khushi this is unfair am not going to do that.

KHUSHI:no jiji.u loose the bet so ur going to do whatever I say..

PAYAL:I accept that u won but kissing ur jju in front of everyone in the home.khushi hell with ur idea am not going to do it.

KHUSHI:so jiji u should nt hav dared to play this game with me..

All other three who was witnessing this became curious of wat was happening..so Nani stopped their figth and asked them..

PAYAL:Nani,khushi n me from childhood use to keep some bet and play.if one wins then other has to do wat d winner says.n khushi never once looses n this time also she won n says me to kiss akashji in front of everyone..

Everyone was laughing at khushi's idea.

MAMI:so wat was the play actually bitiya?

KHUSHI:who is making more jilabie's in half an hour..i won mamiji .so better ask ur dil to do what I say.

ANJALI:khushiji u won oki.. bt kissing akash in front of everyone.she broke out laughing thinking about this.

PAYAL:di dont make fun na?am worried here because of this girl's dare and here all are laughing at me.saying this she cutely pouted.

KHUSHI:haa di..no one will win against khushi kumara gupta singh raizada..jiji shud hav been more careful.she knows that I always win then why messing with me.

Khushi knows her plan is going on very well..two mintes and her plan will workout..

ANJALI:khushiji dont dare a raizada..Raizada's can win anyone..

She knew the ego of her sweet husband..if she is not wrong den his di also shud hav some ego..as she thought her plan worked out..

KHUSHI:then oki di.am also a raizada.will play a game and see who wins..if I win then u must do watever I say.if not il do watever u say.

ANJALI:she ws reluctant at first n then agreed.ok wats d play khushiji?

KHUSHI:how about getting your bro in this plan di?as we all know he s such a LAAD GOVERNOR,il make him do something whish he will never do

precap:what's khushi's plan???👏👏

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PART 3(LAST PART)

KHUSHI:how about getting your bro in this plan di?as we all know he s such a LAAD GOVERNOR,il make him do something which he will never do..hmm may be sit ups??wat say di ??

ANJALI:khushiji u made a wrong move..wat do u think of my dear bro?he'll not even say sorry to any1?!him doing situps no chance..ul loose the bet ..

KHUSHI:its oki di..am going to loose to you only na?is the play oki for u?

ANJALI:oki khushiji.but u should not say chottey about our game?

KHUSHI:oki di!!nani,mami ur the umpires..

So everyone was ready for the play.khushi knows very well dat she is going to win this..She thought of calling Arnav and saying that she s not angry anymore, but calling him would make the plan worse.so she decided against it..she knows her husband would anything to manofy her why not situpsJ

AR office:

Arnav was pacing back and forth in his room.he couldnot belive that khushi could be this much angry..she dint even call and ask him whether he took his lunch and medicines..he cannot stand her silence.today is their one month anniversary and she dint even wish him.he has to do something.so he rushed to home to see his wifeJon the way he got jalebi's,salman poster, a sorry card and a cute doll to manofy his wife.he knows that these things could make her smile.he called akash also to home so that no one would question him about his sudden arrival..

RAIZADA MANSION:

It ws 4:30pm,

Arnav made his way into the house with akash.mami,nani,anjali,payal n khushi was sitting in sofa and was talking about their favourite tv show

Everyone was surprised to see them this early..arnav said that they had no work in the office so they came home which answered their looks.he made his way into his room saying that he have an headache and asked khushi to come up to their room with a coffee..

She was worried that she had given him a headache and she rushed into the kitchen prepared coffee and rushed to their room..

As soon as she entered the room she came to know that his headache was a mere drama..because he was comfortably sitting in the bed with the doll in his arms and he holding his ears.beside him there lay her favourite jalebi, salman poster and a sorry card.

She just wnted to run into the arms and kiss his cheeks but that would spoil the plan.so she made a grumpy face n made her way towards the pool showing her back to him..she msged anjali di asking every1 to come to their room to see whats going on..

All were surprised to see the msg and made their way to arhi room..

Arnav walked behind her and was huggin her from back sying babie am really sorry il nt do this again.i swear.ur silent kills me..

With that said he got a punch n his abdomen..he realized he shudnt have said that.

He again said sorry sorry sorry babba il nt again speak this way..plz forgive me.il do whatever u say.you always do situps when I get angry on you so will u forgive me if I do situps?

KHUSHI St:ooo dats t I wanna see!my dear pati you clearly understand me..!and she turned around smiling and nodding her head in a big yes..

ARNAV:thank god!!!atlast I could manofy u!here lemme start with situps n u start counting..

ARNAV st:wat a baby she s..she wants her husband to do situp to manofy her.she has completely changed meTHE ASR doing situps to manofy his wife.she is completely crazy and made a one too.

KHUSHI:8,9,10..

Arnav was shocked to hear the roaring laugther behind him n turned around to see what is happening..

There was the entire family standing unable to suppress their laughter seeing the great ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA doing situps to pacify his wife.he dint get out of his shock when he heard khushi screaming I won I won.he shot a glare towards her side.she knows now she has 2 pacify her hubby.

EVERYONE:ya ya khushi u won..

ARNAV:what the..??can some one explain me what the hell is going on here.

Still some one was laughing..he was irritated an d turned to see who it was..der his di ws clutching hr stomach n laughing truly after a month ago..

Everyone was staring at her in awe..she controlled her laugh and said yes my dear khushi ..

ANJALI:THE GREAT ASR doing situps n frnot of my bhabhi wid dat she again started to smile broadly.

Every1 had tears seeing their princess laughing heartily.

Nani started to explain what had happened in the noon to arnav..

He was happy that his di is laughing after a long tym but angry on khushi for making such a play..anjali stopped smiling n hugged khushi..

KHUSHI:now di its ur dare tym..watever I say your gonna do that.

ANJALI:achha babba..say mi wat I havto do..

KHUSHI:give mi a promise di.she said with a outstretched hands.

ANJALI:what??

KHUSHI:haan di..give mi a promise saying that you will come out of ur shell,you will smile always,you will be bold enough to face the world,you will let the world know you are a true RAIZADA,you will share ur grief with me or to any one of us here, you will forget wateve happened in ur past,you will make both of ur brothers proud by standing up for yourself..

Evry 1 was n awe hearing this..Arnav was shocked to hear his wife asking for such a promise.Arnav was proud of his wife.he never thought her small mind could have this much thoughts abt his di..oops their di!!.

ANJALI:withj tears in her eyes n hugging khushi said promise khushi..promise il do watever you hav askd for.

Seeing this everyone had tears in their eyes..anjali called arnav near her n hugged him..

ANJALI:chottey we got our maa back in form of khushi..see how much she cares for us..she is such a lovely and caring person..

ARNAV:haan di ur so true..he cannot stop admiring his wife..

So atlast every one was happy that anjali has promised to forget hr past..to make the situation light mamiji said now payal bitiya hw abt u doing ur dare?

Payal was shocked to hear this and said sasu ma I never had any bet with khushi this was all a drama..but every1 ws reluctant to not let her go without doing her dare.so they pushed her 2wrds akash.. payal was abt to kiss him in cheeks but he turned and she pecked him in her lips n ran 2wards her room to mask her shy face..akash mouth ws lyk a big O!!he came and gave a big hug to KHUSHI saying BHABHI you made my day..thank u!!!khushi replied saying ur most welcome jiju!!after sometime everyone gone to their room leaving arhi behind.

KHUSHI:wo arnavji maaf kijiyae..i dono wat else to do to bring back di so oly I played with u.i know she will belive the play oly if ur involved in it.i forgave u in the morning itself..i was just acting for this plan to succeed and also I love being pampered by you..

Arnav was agin amused by his lover oops lover cum wife..he ws quiet to make his plan work.

KHUSHI:speak with me arnavji.i said sorry na..plz say me something ..i cannot stand ur silence.it kills..

B4 she cud complet her sentence arnav shot a glare towards her.she kept her mouth shut.she gave him a puppy dog face holding her ears..

KHUSHI:say me wt I need to do to pacify u?what about situps arnavji?

ARNAV:com with me!!don ask any questions!!!

KHUSHI:where arnavji?

ARNAV:no questions if u want me to forgive u!!

Khushi n arnav came out of room saying that they are going to have a long ride..as soon as khushi sat in car he blindfolded leaving her to shock..when she tried to protest he said "do wt I say"she was shocked to hear his asr tone n kept quiet..

Some random place:

Car came to a halt n he lifted her n his arms n was moving somewhere..when he opened her blindfold she ws shocked to see herself in a garden.when she turned around she registered that it has been decorated with fairy lights and star hangings.. she found arnav missing..when she called out for arnav d lights went off n the whole place ws illuminted with candles'

And in a corner arnav ws standing with a rose bunch walking towards her..

She wasn't able 2 register whats happeneing..he came near her and said..am nt angry on u khushi.i jus wnted 2 giv a surprise..and moreever seems like mrs.raizada loving pampered by me.

He handed the rose bunch to her n kissed her forehead saying "HAPPY ANNIVERSARY KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA SINGH RAIZADA"

She was dumbfounded.she never thought her arnav could be this romantic..her cheeks by noe turned into reddish shade.

Suddenly he ws on his one knee holding her hands in his one hand and ring n the other hand.

ARNAV:khushi,I love you.i wanted to wake up in your arms every morning. i just wanted 2 look into the deep eyes of urs before I sleep every night.i wanted to breath the air that u hav breathed.i wanted every single moment of my life to live with u..i wanted u to teach me wt luv is through out my life'I promise that il not give u any pain..will u khushi kumara gupta singh raizada ?will you do the honour of filling my life with your sweet innocent charms?"I LOVE YOU KHUSHI"with that he put the ring in her hand

At last he has proposed her !!!

KHUSHI:she ws left with no words..she just kneeled and started kissing him madly saying I will arnavji.i love u too arnavji .

ARNAV:sorry for yestrday khushi.i wanted our anniversary to be perfect ..so oly I got you here.this is a place I made for mumma.no one have come here except me.i just wanted you to propose you infront of my mumma. I was here decorating by myself to give u the surprise fr the anniversary..i lied to u sayin I forgot t..i am sorry n he ws holdin his ears..

She cudnt withstand anymore..she ws drowned by his love..she dint let him speak after that sealing his lips wid hers.for the first time in his life THE ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA was left too shocked to respond.🥱🥱

thats it..atlas i completed posting..am sure i was creepy bt cudnt hold myself from givin u d full posts😲😲.leave back ur precious comments..t makes mi happy😲🥱.

Edited by Rami92 - 12 years ago