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Deepa jha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1001

Chapter 1
These rumours remind of a similar incident or rather an experiment which my friends did with ME given the fact that I wasn't interested in this thing like khushi :P. Though in my case things turned out to be a hilarious one😆 And here a beautiful tale of love started <3

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Deepa jha

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#1002

Chapter 2

Poor arnav! But in real world, it was not the same. I am keeping the girl as A & the boy as B :P
When the guy's name was being taken along with the girl's, the guy did nothing rather then smiling when other teased him for that! But the girl was a jhansi ki rani & things that followed...we worth LOLing!

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Deepa jha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter three!

The character sketch quite match A. Though A had short temper & is a bit sensitive but yes her suggestions are mature & she is always able to bring a smile on everyone's face till date. And for B, he in no way was such a kind. He is still the notorious person & a joker!

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Deepa jha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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chapter 4

I can't stop laughing on the memory of this chapter! Let me term B's friend as C. Instead of diwali, we had dusshera function but for every general public in the colony! So A had taken part in the dandiya program & was doing it when B arrived with his friend C. B was staring at A & C taking the advantage pushed him inside the dancing crowd. What followed next was poor chap getting hurt from many dandiya's as people were too busy in dancing! And when A noticed, she just laughed!
C had commented on this saying - Ladki hassi toh phassi'
We had had a great time that day!

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Deepa jha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1005

Chapter 5

Well not exactly this but something like this had happened! During December, we too have sports day, exhibition & cultural meet. So the preparation for the same was on full swing. A, B, C & D (A's friend) and few others were in the same group of doing the work. A was completely exhausted cause of the work she had been doing since morning & so she sat on one corner of room, alone, as others were busy in the work. B noticed her absence (we called it so), & he went to her, offering her something to eat & drink seeing her exhausted face! We watched this scene from behind & then teased them to death. That was the day, this teasing thing was started! Memories... :')

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Deepa jha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1006

chapter 6

A's family is also like this. Difference being A is not so free with her mom though her mom understands her well. She is her dad's bestfriend & her younger brother's too. But this duo don't fight. Something I assume weird..

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Deepa jha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1007

I will read & comment on rest tomorrow! Now I am wondering that were you also present there, wearing an invisible cloak & watching all the events? You have penned exactly all those things down😲 just with a lil arshi touch😉

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Deepa jha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1008

Chapter 7

This so much reminds me of our assembly! It still happens. A stands just in front of B's row as she is a prefect & has been assigned the job there. B stares at her. Once we all noticed this, thanks to C! And after that, B became even more shameful😆 A always tried to stay away from him as she did felt a bit shy in his presence, her nervousness said it all but B grabbed every opportunity he got to talk to her!

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Deepa jha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Now I get why I never commented on thread one. I was a newbie at that time as I become active in this forum only when IPK was nearing its end as I started reading fictions than only! I see my name in vote of thanks on chapter 8, though of my old username😛 Since it is about the family, I won't comment much! I will comment on the incidents😉. Those are interesting.

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Deepa jha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1010

P.S. After my last update, one of the readers pointed out that the dialogues were too mature for 8th and 9th graders. It's been a while since I was a thirteen year old😛. However,I've tried to think the way teenagers do; although I admit to have taken some liberty, this being a piece of fiction.😳 Still, I would like to know if anyone else shares that opinion. Post your views...

You have no idea how teenagers are now a days! They talk way maturely(not in a good way) than what you have written here. I am the best example😛