Arhi SS|New Year's Resolutions|LastPart- B&C p130 *complete!*

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

I could "hear" Arnav's "please" jump off my computer. Great update!!

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desisoaps05

@desisoaps05

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

omggg new story from you!! haha just found this :)

That.was.amazing. as usual, i'm left entirely speechless.

I personally loved that part where he let his emotions loose and said "please" and she finally looked at him.

Cannot wait to read what happened when he read her diary. This is really intense though. Its great

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sweetfairy16

@sweetfairy16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Just read all three chapters, great story can't wait for the update!!!

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

awe loved it ...amazing update...continue soon...

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Reem

@TRND86

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

I love how you are including some of the things that happened during the New Years. The whole Akash getting glued to the chair was a hilarious scene. I was half hoping you would include the bed wala scene too. But that would probably not flow with the story you writing. Poor Khushi is so confused now and Arnav! Can this man be less enigmatic? I think it would take a lifetime to understand someone like him. That's why he has Khushi who can figure him out. 😉

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Swetyz

@Swetyz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Nice update...
The plants scene plays such a important role and still omitted in thesoap...
You have written it really beautiful

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frenzyy

@frenzyy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

jus read all the parts in one go.. they met each other as the clock strikes twelve... simply loved it.. plz pm wen u update!

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#168

It was nothing short of brilliant...loved the way you wrote it...

The countdown his tripping her and him wanting her to look at him ...and his saying please and the way he said it was just beautifully. The emotion and plea in his voice could be heard loud and clear...it was so effective !

Loved how he asks her to bring some jalebis to shantivan in the morning...

Cannot Waite for his POV...

Happy new year to you too...looking forward to the next part...thanks for the pm!