Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 1)

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Argh, Khushi should have slapped him for making such an assumption. Great update!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

dude you always have trust issues
and wow cant this man be blunt and brutal or what
really trust me she doesnt want your money or you
and if she could take care of the kids herself she would have taken them with her
but unfortunately she cant but then you can provide for them dude but they dont respond well to ya and there is no bonding either
god that was so typical but i guess its to be expected
cant wait for him to fall for her though
while she being aloof of it all
this is gonna be an experience he will never forget ever
awww the twins bond well with their bua but not their mama can ya blame them either
they need warmth and love not ASR
cheers for pm

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Adelanoriega

@Adelanoriega

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Khushi is back at RM ,,,hate ASR ,, great that khushi stays for the babies and can take care of them,,,hope ASR can see khushi's love and not the money

dont make khushi fall for ASR easyly

wonderful update ,,good job and thanks for the pm

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kshows_fangirl

@kshows_fangirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Emotional Blackmail for Khushi. Arnav knows how to use his weapons. Poor Khushi. Eagerly waiting for the fireworks to start. A wonderful update! Waiting for Khushi to prove Arnav wrong!

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indiavizion

@indiavizion

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

its a gr8 story line but dont u think u should take it slow...like in serial it took them almost one year to listen to each other and all...

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A, Anon, Nony, Anamika :)

@Anony_mous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Thank you Guys for your comments. I love them :)

As for some or your queries:

1. As I mentioned in Introduction, in this SS Characters are 'slightly' different from the show. Arnav is more or less with same issues as the show right now. His changes will come in future updates.

2. This Khushi is different. She has no Dhak Dhak and acidity issues in front of ASR.

3. Also they are bound to be more familiar here as they 'know' each other since Anjali and Shyam's marriage ie last 3.5 years now. They might not like each other but are not strangers either.

As for the pace, don't worry it'll be slow. I have just settled them under the same roof for now. I myself am of the opinion that people can't change over night. Feelings take time to develop, strengthen and express.That is why I am also moving the time. It has already been 2 months since Anjali and Shyam's death in the story and will be 5 months by next update. The SS time will go on more in future.

One thing I hate: SEPARATION: So none of that here.

One thing I love: JEALOUS ARNAV so shall write that some time in future.

PLEASE KEEP COMMENTING. MY CONFIDENCE THRIVES ON IT :)

Edited by Anony_mous - 12 years ago

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Dhruvi

@Hearttalks_90s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

hey its really a different story... pls pm me wen u update next 😊

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Nikita

@nikita_88

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

This is an interesting story...love the concept...

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sargamfriends

@sargamfriends

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

there is smethng abt today one after the other i am cmng across stories tht r making me really pissed at ASR ...

BUT ur prologue has given me hope hehe so in this one it will be hard to make Khushi fall in love muwahahah lo tht makes me happy

dnt worry abt pmng its proly coz u r a newbie...i will follow it with or without the PM 😆