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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part loveit thanks for pm plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update :) loved it
chutney banni pakki 😆
aashi is so cute :)
awww aashi is so excited to spend her day with shree :)
finally chotu and kavya got married
and omg rathore and arjun reached mandit as well
rathore and arjun are not gonna spare anyone now
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update 😊
OMG they are caught 😆 But finally they are married 😊
Continue soon 😊
Thanks for the PM 😊
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Rathore-arjun: chotu- kavya?

Tanvi is startled ree is hiding behind chotu's mom n chotu has turned white with fear'

Chotu:sir wo..wo..y..ye sa..sab na aap..aapki ladli's..sia ki planning hai'

Rathore(angrily): sia sia bahar aao tum shree ke peeche chup nahi sakti bahar aao'

Tanvi: sameer shanty se baat kijiye dekhiye bacchon ko darra rahe hai aap'(aashi n agastya have hidden behind her due to sudden yelling of rathore)'

Rathore: tum bhi inke saath thi ? tanvi ye galat hai'

Riya(from her hiding): everything is fair in love & war bhai'.

Arjun: ree tum bhi?(yelling) bahar aao abhi'

Sonali-samar n Alisha-rohan quietly exit the place'(smart hai ji)

Chotu's mom: shaant ho jaiye ye sab meri n inki marzi se ho raha hai'

Kavya's nanimumma: ha hum toh taiyaar the ji bacchon ki khushi humare liye sab ji but iske appa anna nahi mane'

Kavya:sir isme chotu ki koi galti nahi hai maine hi inse zidd ki'shaadi karne ki'

Sia: bhai jiju dekho shaadi toh ho gayi hai na ab hum sab ko chod do hume daant ke aapko kya milega?

Rathore: sia ki bacchi bina humare ye shaadi krneki sochi kaise tum logon ne?

Everyone is shocked n their jaws r dropped'

Arjun: toh kya? Sam ne kya galat kaha? Hum ek family hai na toh fir bhaag toh bhaag ke hi sahi invitation toh banta tha'

Suddenly they get busy with commissioner sir's call'

The group start whispering now'

Riya: baby doll ye kya ho raha hai?

Sia: ree mujhe bhi kuch samjh nahi aa raha kadwe karele achanak mithai kaise ban gaye?

Shree: yaar inki is mithi-mithi harkatoon se kahin hume diabetes na ho jaye'

Tanvi: chup karo sab' zinda hai iski khushi manao'

Chotu:aila suraj aaj west se nikla hai shree KC ko mere bhaag k shaadi karne se koi problem nahi hai'

Shree: ha chotu' aur arjun sir mandir me? Ye toh double chamatkar hai'

Riya: chalo yahan se gayab ho jaate hai jaldi se kya pata dono kab baahar se tufan ban jaaye'

Sia: u r rite ree niklte hai yahan se chotu-kavya tum log pehle niklo bhabhi aap bacchon ko le jao aur main ree shree office jaate hai'

Tanvi: team lets make our moves'

Sia shree n ree: pakka rathore sir ki wifey hai'

They quietly make their moves while arjun n rathore are called by the commissioner '

In the ETF office'

Sia: rajbeer main kya karu tumhara? Tumhe kitni baar kaha hai ki lab mein carefully kaam kiya karo'

Rajbeer: sorry ma'am wo reports pe acid m sorry'

Sia: reports remake ho sakti hai look at your hand jal gaya hai dhyan kahan rehta hai tumhara aaj tum koi kaam mat karo ghar jao n jaate-jaate doc ke pass jaana'

Rajbeer(shocked):yes ma'am'

Rajbeer leaves & rathore n arjun enter both look very angry'

Sia(in her mind): sia tu toh gayi ye zarur kal ke bare mein hai'baby doll be prepared tujhe KC aaj kaccha chaba jayegi'

Rathore(angrily): sia sia come to the conference room right now'

Sia(in her mind): chalo marne' gussa dekhke toh lag raha hai iss waqt agar bhai ka body temp. liya jaaye toh thermometer hi fut jayega'

Shree n riya(hearing the commotion n coming out): lagta hai rathore sir bahut gussa hai' pata nahi sia ka kya hoga?

Shree(in his mind): sia sia kyun karti ho aise kaam tum ki chah ke bhi hum tumhe nahi bacha sakte hai' sudhar jao sia.. pata nahi ye dono aaj meri sia ka kya haal karenge?!?

Rathore: dammit sia tumhari wajah se sikander savdhaan ho gaya hai usse trace karna mushkil ho gaya hai' tumne uske right hand ko utha ke usse humari pahuch ke bare mein agah kar diya hai'pata nahi who chuha kahan chip ke baitha hoga ab' zarurat kya thi aisi bewakufi karne ki' dammit hume iss case ko hold pe rakhna padega tumhari wajah se'

Sia(in teary voice): sorry sir'

Arjun:rathore shaant ho jao filhaal humari priority thi sabki safety sikander ko toh hum kabhi bhi pakad lenge' sia tum jao'

Sia leaves the room tearfully & by mistake walks towards the interrogation room where rana is kept'

Rathore:jun stop supporting her tumhe pata hai na usne musibaat kam nahi ki hai balki badha li hai ab sikander sirf aashi hi nahi sia ki bhi jaan ke liye khtra ban gaya hai'

Arjun: sam shaant ho jao baby doll ki chinta mujhe bhi hai hum sab hai na wo fir humse kisiko dur nahi kar payega tum shaant ho jao agar sia ko iski bhank bhi lag gayi toh pata nahi wo pagal kya karegi'tumhe shaant aur supportive hona padega afterall humare chief toh tum hi ho na'

Rathore:jun tum sahi ho ye waqt jasbaati se zyada practical hooke sochne ka hai' chalo al se hi kuch ugalwane ki koshish karte hai'

Arjun: hmm chalo'

Meanwhile sia reaches in front of rana she is sobbing'

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Awesome update loveit thanks for pm and plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sia kahan ja rahi hai Rana k paas!!
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Meanwhile sia reaches in front of rana she is sobbing'

Rana attracts her attention by tapping on the glass pane'

Rana(shouting): kya hua sunshine? Samjh gayi humari takat ko? Dekhna bahut jald main bahar aa jaunga aur tumhe le jaunga'

Sia(enters the room flaring up): how dare you apne aap ko samjhte kya ho tum? (slapping him hard) mujhse meri life se meri family se dur hi rehna'

Rana pulls her hand n holds her close'

Rana(in sia's ear): sunshine tum gusse mein na aur bhi khoobsurat lagti' bilkul jungli billi'white colour haa suits u still' bas jo suit nahi karta wo hai ye khali khail gala mere naam ka board laga hi lo ispe kyunki mujhse bacch ke kahin nahi jaa sakti tum' chaho ya na chaho'

Sia(disgustingly): chodo mujhe leave me right now!!!

Rana(romantically): chodne ke liye thodi na tumhara haath pakda tha' chodna hi hota toh uss buddhe ko kyun maarta?

Sia(hitting him with her elbow): mere papa ka naam izzat se lo actually unka naam lena bhi mat apni nihayati gandi zubaan se' aur jahan tak tumhari yahan se bahar jaane ki baat raha onir I promise you jab tak meri saanse chal rahi hai tumhe main azad nahi hone dungi'

Rana(smiling wickedly): jaan yehi toh tumhari galti hai main azad ho jaunga but tum meri qaid mein rahogi' dekhna mere bhai khudh ye haath mere haath mein denge'.

Sia leaves the room disgusted with rana's words'

Suddenly her anger is disturbedby the shrill ringing of her fone'

Sia(on the fone): ha bhabhi bolo'.

Tanvi(in pain): sia wo ' wo aashi agastya'

Sia: what about them bhabhi aap kahan ho main pahuch rahi hu abhi hilna mat aap main aa rahi hu'

She runs on top speed to rathore's office'

Sia(panting): bhai'wo..wo bhabhi aashi..agastya'

Rathore(concerned,hands her water): shaant ho ja paani pi'

Sia(not accepting the glass): chalo bhai bas bhabhi n aashi agastya in trouble chalo bas'

Rathore: chalo... shree tanu ka cell trace karo riya medicines ready rakho n team lets move fast'

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Posted: 12 years ago
Tanvi ko kya hua???😕

Rana.. U disgusting creature... I will KILL you!😡
Edited by Arjunkibehen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh... Ashi agastya in trouble ufff...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice thanks and plz cont soon

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