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Posted: 12 years ago
continue sooon

plz sikander ki entry jaldi karo

ariya scene

samrjn scene

luv it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part loveit cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update :) loved it
loved chotu and shree's conversation in the SUV
poor shree was so mad seeing samar there
awww arjun was smiling :)
the case was very interesting
sia and shree's scene in the lab was lovely :)
wow arjun and riya are going to dance together on engagement
finally arjun realized his love for sia and even arjun too for riya
how cute aashi asked sia for a dad :)
love shree and aashi's bonding
can't wait to read more
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hayee!!! Mera favourite proposal scene is also I hate luv storys!!!
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Arjun: n sia bilkul opposite hai filmy style propose karoge toh bahut maregi wo… usse poetry pasand hai …

Shree: matlab bahut mehnat krni padegi mujhe… durga maa kya ladki bheji hai aapne mere liye baat baat pe mujhe hi aapke paas pahunchane ki preparations krti hai….

Arjun: humari baby doll k bare mein soch k muh kholo wrna tum smjhe ya samjhau….

Shree: sir filhal hume aapki wali liye preparation krni chahiye… chaliye wo tree house perfect location hai kisi ko shaq bhi nahi hoga….

Arjun: aur tum?

Shree: main main madam ko research n bahut saara homework karne k baad hi kuch kahunga…

Arjun: toh all the best 4 that kyunki tumhari wali kuch zyada hi perfectionist hai….

Arjun n shree decorate the tree house with roses n candles forming a heart when arjun shows him the ring he brought 4 riya….its a delicate ring with the letters A & R forming a heart which has a small diamond in it…

Arjun: shree usse pasand aayegi na?

Shree: abhi pata chal jayega…(clicks a pic of the ring n whatapp's it 2 sia n riya)….

Sia: cute hai shree

Riya: sia cute nahi awesome hai par hai kiske liye???

Shree: ree ofcourse for Alisha n rohan yaar dimag chalaya kar….

Arjun: phew bach gaye ki unki initials bhi same hai warna toh surprise ki band baj jati…

Shree: sir why fear jab shree aapke side hai…

Arjun: accha.. ab chal warna dono mein se koi ek toh yahan aa hi jayega hume dhundhte hue….

They leave the tree house n help the other's prepare the house for the next day….

Meanwhile in a shabby bar downtown…

Rana: arrey bhai aap chinta mat karo kal aapko aapki amanat mil jayegi aur mujhe meri…

Sikander: soch samjh k rana wo aag hai aag jal mat jaana tu…

Rana:bhai uss aag ne to bahut pehle hi hume jala ke rakh kar diya hai ab is rakh ka aur kya hasr hoga…

Sikander: jaa jeet k aana teri jeet hi meri jeet bhi hogi…

The next morning the whole house is bustling with guests though all only near & dear ones…

Sia: arrey sona jaldi kar na haldi bhi nahi ready hui ab tak… ree jaake ali ko laa… ammu pls handle aashi n agastya yaar… bhabhi aap aur mom upar jao wahan dulhan k side se koi nahi hai rohan ke paas…

Sia's mom: meri maa baith yahan(making her sit)…le coffee pee warna sabka dimag kha legi tu sabko apni duties yaad hai…(just as she is sipping the coffee rohan calls her)…

Rohan : sia di jaldi upar aao na pls…

Sia:(to her mom) uff rohan bhi na sagai hai uski aur behave kar raha hai 4 saal ke bacche jaisa…(to rohan) aayi…

Rohan: didi ye keh rahe hai haldi k baad sham tak I cant see ali? Sacchi?

Sia: ha but idhar aa uska tod hai mere paas (handing him a box full of mirrors of diffrentr shapes n sizes…)

Rohan: iska kya karu main?

Sia: school mein physics padhi thin a? ab ali ko dekhne k liye application kar lo…

All the guys start laughing seeing the condition of rohan…

Shree: rohan abhi se majnu shukr mana aaj kal ki rasme ek hi din mein hoti hai wrna pehle toh har rasm k beech mein 4-5 days ki gap hoti thi…

Rohan: bhai tab ki baat aur thi tab toh pata nahi main survive kaise karta…. (holding the box to him) isse kya karu samjh nahi aa raha…

Arjun: wo main aur sam batate hai kyun sam yaad hai na?

Sameer: saale yaad kaise nahi hoga sabse purani trick hai jo hum dono ki shaadi k time humne use ki thi…

All of them help rohan in setting the mirrors at different angles enabling them to view the rasams going on downstairs….

The haldi rasam is held which is followed by the all girls mehndi rasam for Alisha…everyone is singing n then its sia's turn to sing…

She brings in her guitar along with the traditional dholak n starts singing the song…
Ho ho o...
Heer Heer na akho adiyo
Main te Sahiba hoi
Ghodi leke aave le jaaye
Ghodi leke aave le jaaye
Ho mainu le jaaye Mirza koi
Le jaaye Mirza koi
Le jaaye Mirza koi...

Heer Heer na aakho adiyo
Main te Sahiba hoi
Ghodi leke aave le jaaye
Ghodi leke aave le jaaye

Ohde je hi main te oh mere varga
Hans da ai sajra savere varga
Ankha bandh kar laa te thande hanere varga (x2)

Ohde je hi main te oh Mirza mere varga
Ohde je hi main te oh Mirza mere varga

Ho Heer Heer na akho adiyo
Main te Sahiba hoi
Ghodi leke aave le jaaye
Ghodi leke aave le jaaye
Ho mainu le jaaye Mirza koi
Le jaaye Mirza koi
Le jaaye Mirza koi...

Naal naal tur na te vith rakhna
Hadh rakh lena vich dil rakhna
Chhanve chhanve paave, assi teri parchhave, tur naa (x2)

Ohde je hi main te oh mere varga haaye
Ohde je hi main te oh mere varga

Ho Heer Heer na akho adiyo
Main te Sahiba hoi
Ghodi leke aave le jaaye haaye
Le jaaye Mirza koi
Le jaaye Mirza koi
Le jaaye Mirza koi...

Heer Heer na akho adiyo
Main te Sahiba hoi
Ghodi leke aave le jaaye
Ghodi leke aaye le jaaye
Oh ho...

Shree is busy staring sia open mouthed while arjun is just staring riya who is swaying on the song with aashi…

Sia has closed her eyes so that she doesn't cry or turn weak bcoz she knows aashi loves this song…

After sia everyone requests riya to sing and sia to play the guitar for her after much thought she chooses the song…

Kehna hi kya yeh nain ek anjaan se jo mile
Chalne lage mohabbat ke jaise yeh silsile
Armaan naye aise dil mein khile,
Jinko kabhi main naa jaanoon
Voh humse, hum unse kabhi naa mile,
Kaise mile dil naa jaanoon
Ab kya kare, kya naam le,
Kaise unhe main pukaaroon

Kehna hi kya yeh nain ek anjaan se jo mile
Chalne lage mohabbat ke jaise yeh silsile
Armaan naye aise dil mein khile,
Jinko kabhi main naa jaanoon
Voh humse, hum unse kabhi naa mile,
Kaise mile dil naa jaanoon
Ab kya kare, kya naam le,
Kaise unhe main pukaaroon

Pehli hi nazar mein kuch hum,
Kuch tum ho jaate hai yun gum
Nainon se barse rim jhim,
Rim jhim humpe pyaar ka saavan

Sharm thodi thodi humko aaye to nazarein jhuk jaayen
Sitam thoda thoda humpe shok hawa bhi kar jaaye

Aisi chali, aanchal ude, dil mein ek toofaan uthe
Hum to lut gaye khade hi khade

Kehna hi kya yeh nain ek anjaan se jo mile
Chalne lage mohabbat ke jaise yeh silsile
Armaan naye aise dil mein khile,
Jinko kabhi main naa jaanoon
Voh humse, hum unse kabhi naa mile,
Kaise mile dil naa jaanoon
Ab kya kare, kya naam le,
Kaise unhe main pukaaroon

In honthon ne maanga sargam,
Sargam tu aur tera hi pyaar hai
Aankhen dhoonde hai jisko har dam,
Har dam tu aur tera hi pyaar hai
Mehfil mein bhi tanha hai dil aise, dil aise
Tujhko kho naa de, darrta hai yeh aise, yeh aise
Aaj mili aisi khushi, jhoom uthi duniya yeh meri
Tumko paaya to paayi zindagi
Kehna hi kya yeh nain ek anjaan se jo mile
Chalne lage mohabbat ke jaise yeh silsile
Armaan naye aise dil mein khile,
Jinko kabhi main naa jaanoon
Voh humse, hum unse kabhi naa mile,
Kaise mile dil naa jaanoon
Ab kya kare, kya naam le,
Kaise unhe main pukaaroon
Kehna hi kya yeh nain ek anjaan se jo mile
Chalne lage mohabbat ke jaise yeh silsile
Kehna hi kya

All the while her eyes search for arjun who hides behind the curtain n sees her searching for him…

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update.. Good choice of song yar.. Continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update :) loved it
loved arjun and shree's conversation
awww arjun even bought a ring for riya
seems like sikander and rana are planning something big
love the songs riya and sia were singing
awww arjun was hiding behind curtain and was watching her :)
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWWW... Gr8 selection of songs!! and they decorated the tree-house!!! WOW!!! Love romantic Arjun!!

Aww... Shree and Arjun helping each other!!!
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After alisha's hand is covered with mehndi everyone starts pulling the others to which sia starts running around the hall with aashi n tanvi chasing her…

Sia: aashi no bhabhi no maine koi mehni wehndi nahi lagani hai bas…

Riya: pakdo –pakdo bhabhi aaj toh isko chodna nahi hai…

Suddenly sia is held by ammu and dragged to the kitchen…

Sia: ammu bacha liya thanks yaar…

Kavya: sia problem ho gayi hai amma-appa ne mere liye ek ladka pasnd kiya hai aur tu toh janti hai na mujhe koi aur hi pasand hai….ab main kya karu?

Sia: tu kuch mat kar is wale ko bhi main pichle 34 ladko ki tarah bhaga dungi…

Kavya: pakka na? but amma-appa love marriage ke liye manenge?

Sia: nahi mane toh bhaag k shaadi kar lena main hu na bhagane k liye…

Kavya: teri toh ruk tu ab toh tere haath main hi khrab karungi…

And again the chase starts…

Mehndi person: to sia inki haath mein kaunsa letter likhna hai?

Sia: ree uske haath mein toh A likh do arjun jiju ka A (showing her tounge)

Riya(getting up leaving her mehndi mid-way): ruk tu tere haath mein toh aaj main bhi shree ka S likh k hi rahungi…alisha bhabhi maa pakdiye toh isse aaj nahi chodungi tujhe ruk tu…

Arjun shree sameer chotu n rohan r watching all this madness n giggling…

Chotu(to shree): aaj toh riya n sia dono gaye yaar ye samjhe ya samjhau dono ko kha jayenge…

Shree: nahi chotu inhone insaano ko khana chod diya hai….

Chotu: matlab?

Sameer: matlab chotu tumhare arjun sir ko pyaar ho gaya hai….aur shree ko bhi…

Arjun :kuch bhi kya sam? Aisa kuch nahi hai…

Shree: ha sir waise bhi itna bada panga kaun lega?arjun sir se aapse?n most of all sia se wo waise hi mujhe maarne ki planning karti rehti hai….

Samar(entering n surprising everyone): toh ab toh sia ko main date pe le jau toh tumhe koi problem nahi honi chahiye….

Shree: samar tum yahan kaise? N sia ko le jaana hai le jao but tumhari jaan ki koi guarantee nahi rahegi…(in his mind) isi toh bas meri sia se chipakne ka chance chahiye pata nahi isse kyun bulaya hai sia ne shree chahe jo ho jaye isse sia k saath akele mat chodna pata nahi kya karega….

Just as he finishes talking to himself sia calls everyone for lunch…

Sia: rohan jaldi aao ali ko bhuk lagi hai n sabke haathon mein mehndi hai toh pls sab thodi help kar dijiye… bhai bhabhi ko khana aap khila do I'll take care of aashi n agastya…jiju aap nhi rehndo I'll help riya.. chotu tum kavya ko n samar pls handle sona…maa aap log khana khake rest kariye tab tak hum sambhalte hai…

Shree: sia main kya karu?

Sia: tum aashi ko handle karo main agastya ko karti hu… sambhal k madam ki mehndi khrab hui toh abhi pura ghar sir pe utha legi…

Aashi : nahi mumma mujhe aapke haath se khana hai…

Agastya: nahi bua main…

Sia: ok-ok dono aa jao ek bite aashi baby ki aur ek bite mere superhero ki theek hai na? shree tum mom's ki help kar do in dono ko main handle karti hu…

Riya is waiting for sia to come n help her when

Arjun comes…

Arjun: pata nahi sia ko kitna time lagega let me help u.. aa karo…

Riya: arjun mujhe palak nahi pasand main nahi kahungi…

Arjun: ree baccho ki tarah zidd mat karo … ok fine palak mat khao atleast paneer toh khao….

Riya: accha ok-ok dijiye…

Sameer n tanvi , Alisha rohan,chotu kavya n samar sona r lost in each other…

Sia: chalo now jao nanimumma n kakimaa k saath jaake rest karo ab job hi hai sham ko hai… (sending them away) uff chalo ab baaki ki arrangements check karti hu…(takin out her notepad with the checklist)…decorations-check, ring-check,lighting-check….

Shree: (removing the notepad n handing her a plate) pehle khana toh kha lo specimen…

Sia: abhi nahi shree kaam hai baad mein…

Shree: ok theek hai jab tak tum nahi kha leti main bhi nahi khaunga…

Sia: bacchon jaise baat mat karo shree …aashi bhi aise baat nahi karti…

Shree:I knw karna chahiye… ab drama baad mein kar lena pehle khana kha lete hai…aa karo…

Sia: shree u r impossible… lao khila hi do…

Shree n sia's mom r watching them from the window…

Sia's mom: anu inki Jodi kitni pyaari lagti hai… nazar na lag jaye kisiki…

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Posted: 12 years ago
great update :) loved it
love the way everyone was chasing sia
and sia was teasing riya with arjun's name
poor shree was so irritated by samar 😆
loved shree and sia's conversation
thanks for the pm
continue soon

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