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Posted: 12 years ago
hey sorry for the late comment...!!!
just read the last three parts together...!!!
they were awsum...!!!
loved them...!!!
haaye shree and sia are too cute...!!! the way shree handled sia when she was upset was very sweet...!!! are wah everyone trying to set them up cool...!!!
ab to shree bhi realized ki he loves sia... hope ye onir dobara aake koi prob na kare...!!!
ariya scenes are lovely...!!!
loved how riya and sia were teasing each other...!!!
continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

nazar na lag jaye kisiki…

Shree's mom: ha swaru chal dono ko kaala teeka laga k aate hai kahin humari hi nazar na lag jaye…

They come out n apply kaala teeka to both of them shree is blushing while sia is just staring her mom…

Sia(after their mom's leave):ye kya tha? Nyways kal wo ring wo jiju ne ree k liye banwayi hai na?

Shree: sorry nahi bata sakta…

Sia: ek minute jiju ne muh kholne se mana kiya hai likh k batane se toh nahi…(thrusting her notepad n pencil in his hand n taking the plate from him) puri stry likho…

Shree scribbles everything fast n hands over to sia…

Sia: wah kya plan hai (seeing arjun lead riya outside)shayad jiju reek o leke wahin jaa rahe hai…chalo na shree hum bhi chalte hai…

Shree: sia chod na sab toh ab tujhe pata hai ab kyun jaana hai?

Sia: mujhe sab record karna hai aaj bhi roshni di ko kiye gaye proposal ka video hai mere paas… works good to EBM jiju….

Shree: EBM???

Sia: oho Emotional Blackmail shree chalo ab…

Shree :par tree house mein jaane ka ek hi door hai hum chipenge kaise?

Sia: why fear when I am here… tree house ke sides mein khade rehne ki kaafi jagah hai hum wahan chup ke sab dekh sakte hai…

In the tree house….

Riya: arjun mujhe blindfold kyun kiya hai whats the surprise pls kuch toh batao na…

Arjun: tum ladkiyaan uff… riya thoda sabr karo hum pahunch hi gaye hai…

Riya: hum ladkiyan kya? Tum ladke surprise nahi heart-attack dete ho isiliye puchna is bettr to prepare ourselves na…

Arjun: ok baba ladkiyaan best hum hi dhakkan hai…(leaving her) jao jo karna hai karo…

Riya: arjun sorry atleast ye blindfold toh hata do (sensing the things around her)…hmm roses… n lavender candles….(removing her blindfold)….ha yeh kya hai arjun?

Arjun(down on one knee): riya pls aankhen hai dekh lo na… main kehna chahta tha ki I know hum bilkul alag hai do alag dishaon mein sochte hai…tum hamesha mere kehna ka ulta karti ho…tum roshni se bilkul opposite ho.. phir bhi pata nahi kaise mujhe tumse pyaar ho gaya hai riya…

Riya(shocked n open mouthed): arjun?!?!

Arjun: riya ha bol do neeche baith ke mere pair dukh rahe hai…

Riya: tum akdu ho …. Hamesha mujhe gussa karte ho…

Arjun(cutting her in between): point pe aao mera character sketch baad mein dena…

Riya: dekha hamesha meri baat kat dete ho…(blushing) phir bhi mujhe pasand ho…

Arjun:sacchi?!?

Riya: mucchi….

Arjun takes out the ring n puts it on riya's finger…

Riya: shree ne jhooth bolo wo aapse mila hua tha ab khair nahi uski…

Arjun: usse baad mein dekh lena pehle ye lo ye letter roshni ne likhe hai uss ladki ke liye jisse main ya sia chunenge… yahan toh sabki pasand tum hi ho isiliye main bechara naa kaise bolta…

Riya(angry tone): accha toh sabki wajah se ,mujhe chuna hai …(trying to remove the ring) isi bhi mera hi haat mila tha fasne k liye…

Arjun: pagal ho gayi ho kya riya main toh bas mazak kar raha tha…(taking the ring back to its position)isse utrna k bare mein sochna bhi mat samjhi ya samjhau…letter padhke aa jaana bahar main wahin rukta hu…

Shree: sia ab hum mare arjun sir ne hume dekh liya na toh kaccha kha jayenge…

Sia: uffo shree chill mere saath chalo bas…(taking him to the back window)… yahan nahi dekh payenge….

Riya opens the letter n starts reading it…

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Posted: 12 years ago

Agar yeh letter tumhare paas hai iska matlab hai mere arjun ne tumhe apna jeevansaathi banana ki taraf apna pehla kadam le liya hai…

Main nahi janti ki tum kaun ho ya kaise mile unse bas main itna chahti hu kit um unhe khush rakho…

Shree: sia uss letter mein kya hai ?

Sia: tension not mere paas uski copy hai jab di ne mujhe diary di thi maine chupke se letter ka Xerox nikal liya tha chalo hum bhi padhte hai saath mein…

Shree: tum nahi sudhar sakti sia…

Sia: sudharna kisse hai…

Main janti hu wo bolenge nahi par wo mujhe nahi bhul payenge par main chahti hu ki tum unhe meri yaadon se mujhse dur kar do itna ki bas wo mujhe yaad kare sirf acche waqt par aur khudhko har samay tumhare paas paaye…

Mujhe ye bhi pata hai ki unhone tumse apni dil ki baat toh keh di par us dil mein abhi bhi ek kona mera hai… main chahti hu ki wo kona chota pad jaye aur pure dil mein tum cha jao… tumhe lag rah hoga ki main kaisi wife hu apne husband ki zindagi mein kisi aur ko lana chahti hu par kya karu ye bhi main apne swarth k liye kar rahi hu kyunki unke aansu unka ghum aur akelapan main nahi dekh sakti… I hope tum aur arjun hamesha khush rahe…

P.S: sia ki pitai karna usne is letter ka Xerox bana rakha hoga aur iss waqt wo aas-paas hi iss letter ko padh rahi hogi aur tum dono ke izhaar-e-mohabbat ka video bana liya hoga Emotional blackmail karne k liye…

Sia: shree bhaago aaj mare jayenge warna ree ke haath se…

Shree: aisa kya hua jo tum bhaag rahi ho….

Sia(thrusting the letter in shree's hand): post script padho n jaldi bhaago warna zinda nahi bachenge hum dono…

Riya: wo toh bhagne se bhi nahi bachoge….

Sia:re..ree t..tu…ya.yahan??bhaago shree….

Riya: rukh ja sia aaj toh tu nahi bachegi …. Phone de apna…

Sia: shree catch n bhaago…

Shree catches sia's phone n stares at it then starts running but riya is fast enough to catch him…

Riya: aha mera best friend sia ka saath de raha hai yehi bacha tha…

Shree: areey nahi ree ruk na…

Sia(whispering in shree's ears): jaane do who video delete karegi karne do ek copy tumhare tab mein send kar di hai maine…

Shree: what the … sia mera tab?

Riya: kya tab?

Shree: kuch nahi isne mere tab ka password crack kar diya…

Riya: toh big deal aise chilla rahe ho jaise duniya khatam hone wali hai…(handing sia's cell back to her) le madam phir koi aisi harkat krne ki sochi na to…

Sia: to tu jiju ko bata degi aur kya….

Riya: nahi main tujhe….(picking up the garden hose) aise nehla dungi…

Sia:ruk ree ab meri baari…

Sia aims at riya but she hides behind shree n shree is drenched in water now…

Shree: tum dono toh…ruko abhi dikhata hu…

Seeing the commotion sameer n arjun n samar n sona come out…

Sam-jun (together): ye kya ho raha hai…

Sia n riya run n hide behind the duo n shree aims at them…

Arjun: shree ruko tum…

In this water fight everyone is drenched except Alisha-rohan, kavya-chotu n tanvi…

Sia: maza aa gaya ab change kar lete hai warna sardi ho jayegi…

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice.
Continue soon.
Give some ariya romance.
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update...
haaye finally arjun proposed...
aur sia aur shree bhi too much hai... emotional blackmail😆
the letter part was lovely...
hose pipe scene was awsum... kya bheegaya h sbko...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

sholi everyone pehle toh itna late update n then itna chotu sa update kiya hai sholi exams khatam hone k baad pakka lambe wala update dungi... 😊🤗








Riya:ruk siya wo dekh kairi chal na todte hai...

Siya:ok ruk main pedd pe chadti hu...

Shree n sam-jun together:koi zaruurat nahi hai'

Riya: kaise nahi hai humne kairi khani hai siya tu chadh toh'

Tanvi: sia tune salwar kameez pehni hai isme kaise chadhegi? Dupatta sambhalegi ya pedh pe balance?

Sia: bhabhi dupatta kaun sambhalta hai lo (she removes her dupatta n throws it towards tanvi but it lands on shree) sorry shree bhabhi ye high heels bhi pakdo'(after removing her heels sia climbs the tree n starts asking for directions to the kairi they want)

Riya: sia aaram se bas thoda aur aage ' bas ab rite mein haath stretch kar ha almost there' ab tod le'.

Sia: le catch ree.( She purposely aims the kairi at arjun'who catches it)

Arjun: baby doll bahut hua neeche aao abhi'

Just then shree n sia's mom's n aashi enter the garden'

Aashi: mumma mujhe bhi kairi (pointing to a half ripe kairi) wo wo wali chahiye'

Sia: ok baccha deti hu' (she balances herself carefully as that kairi is on the edge of a fairly shaking branch.. she grabs the kairi n her foot slips n she is about to fall')

Sia closes her eyes but feels that she has fallen in the arms of some one for a second she feels its onir same cologne similar voice n grip' she slowly pries open one eye'.

Sia(on seeing the person ): tum tum yahan kya kar rahe ho'

Edited by princessaneeka - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
cute one...
Stopped at right point..
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Posted: 12 years ago
sweet
stop at suspence 😭
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update :) loved it
awww girls wanted to eat kairi
and sia was climbing the tree
omg sia was falling and that onir guy caught her
can't wait to read more
please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Avigyan: wah kya zamana hai ek toh jaan bachao upar se rude baatien bhi suno' huh

Sia: jaan bachane ka thank you aur gussa wo kyun hai u already know mere muh se sunne ka special shauk hai toh bata do'.

Avigyan: uske liye sorry letter bheja tha 1000 times sorry bol chukka hu aur kitni baar bolna padega'

Sia: sorry se main kya karu' tumne promise kiya tha na ki mere bina shaadi nahi karogi ab karli shaadi tod di promise huh katti'

Everyone is surprised to see this kiddish side of sia except shree who can't stop admiring sia'

Sia: ab niche utaroge ya mujhe utha k weight lifting ki practice krne ka irada hai kya'

Avigyan: tum khudh utro tabse na utarne ka naam hi nahi le rahi ho pls utar jao warna mere haath tut jayenge'

Sia: how mean ' katti

Avigyan( putting her on the ground): accha baba sorry 'waise tum pedh pe chadna nahi bhuli aur na hi ped se girna'

Sia: ha nahi bhuli toh? (she realizes what she has said) avi maar khaoge mujhse ab tum'

Avigyan: tubelight tubelight sia abhi hai no.1 tubelight'.

Sia: avi k bacche ruko abhi batati hu'(throwing the kairi to aashi) baccha wash krke khana'(running behind avi) ab dekhti hu kaun bachata hai tumhe'

Sia n avigyan run around for a long time n den finally avigyan hides behind sia's mom'

Avigyan: cup cake nahi hai toh kya hua badi maa toh hai'

Sia( gritting her teeth n clenching her fists):avi don't take his name is ghar mein toh bilkul nahi'

Avigyan: ok ok sia chill yaar main toh bas mazak kar raha tha'

Sia: iss ghar mein uska naam ya wo allowed nahi hai'(with that she turns to go inside' leaving everyone stunned)

Avigyan: badi maa ye kya tha?

Sia's mom: ye trailer tha madam k gusse ka puri film dekhni hai toh batao?

Avigyan: badi maa mere liye trailer hi kaafi tha'ab aap mujhe sab se milaoge ya nahi'

Sia's mom : chal na toh mere peeche chup ke milega kya?

Sia's mom introduces him to everyone'

Sia's mom: tere wifey kahan hai?

Avigyan: wifey' Wo aayegi na sham ko usse apne kisi friend se milna tha isiliye abhi main hi aa gaya'

Now the girls leave to help Alisha get dressed n the guys start talking to each other'

Samjun: chalo ab baaki sab bhi apna muh kholo hum kitna bolenge...

Samar: mujhe toh yahan sia k alwa koi topic nahi dikhega n mere sia ka naam lena tak kisi ko pasand nahi hai'(hitting his shoulder playfully to shree) hai na?

Shree: aisa kuch nahi hai'(in his mind : samar k bacche ruk ja tu is party ko khatam hone de fir tujhe batata hu main' subah sonali se badi pyaar ki baatien ho rahi thi ab firse aa gaya meri sia pe')

Avigyan:sia k bare mein toh jitna bol lo kaam hi hai aaj pehli baar usse itne gusse mein dekha.. mujhe toh lag raha tha ki wo mujhe kaccha kha jayegi'

Chotu(giving a concerned look ): mujhe bhi aisa hi laga tha'

Samjun: ye toh madam k gusse ka trailer tha bas' (looking towards avigyan) don't worry wo tumhe nahi khayegi kyunki aajkal usne insaano ko khana band kar diya hai' hai na shree?

Shree: ha sir'(to avigyan) aur fir shuru bhi kiya toh pehla no. mera hi hoga'

Rohan enter the group'

Rohan: aap log kya ladkiyon ki tarah gossiping mein lage ho chalo na andar thodi der mein rasme shuru ho jayengi'aur ha sia di ka order hai ki sabko jaldi se change karna hai'

All the boys together: lo aa gaya madam ka hukum chalo lets go'

Meanwhile in the girl's room'

Alisha: sia di pakka theek lag rahi hu na?

Sia: haa na meri maa'

Riya: hil mat Alisha warna baal khrab ho jayenge'

Tanvi: ruk ruk bas last nail bacha hai pair mat hila toh'

Sonali n kavya: dupatta ready hai pin up krne ko'

After 10 mins they are done..

Alisha is looking stunning in a maroon off white n golden shrara '

Sonali: kaha than a suit krega.. after all design kiski hai'

Sia: ha ha madam maan gaye aapko dhany ho aap chalo jao ab sab log change kr lo tab tak main aashi n agastya ko ready karti hu'

To give a special touch to the occasion they have created pairs which will carry off the same saree'

Sia n riya are wearing a plain white net saree with golden lace bordering' kavya n sonali are wearing aquamarine saree with pink borders' n mom's r wearing floral printed saree' n tanvi is wearing a red saree with lots of work on it'

Aashi n agastya's dresses r replica of Alisha n rohan's dresses'.

All of them get ready except sia'.

Riya: sia jaldi kar na yaar'

Sia: ha bas do min. de ree mujhse ye pallu nahi sambhala jaa raha help kar na'

Riya: accha ruk (she calls tanvi to help her setting the saree for sia) ho gaya ekdum perfect bas apne baal aise hi ek side pe leke rakhna'

Tanvi: ab chale'.

Downstairs the boys r waiting for them with songs going on the background'suddenly there is silence n the spotlight focuses on Alisha who is coming down with tanvi n shree n sia's mom' the song playing at this time is'

Mere khyalon ki mallika

Mere khyalon ki mallika

(Alisha descends down with tanvi n rohan n sameer cant take their eyes off them)

Charoon taraf teri chaaiyan re

Tham le aake baayian

(sonali n kavya come down n chotu is staring kavya while samar is stealing glances of sonali)

Charoon taraf teri chaaiyan re

chaaiyan re

aayi phoolon ke ras mein naha ke

laayi bheeni se khushbu chura ke

teri aankhon mein hai halka sa nasha..

(sia n riya come down n shree n arjun r staring)

tera roop meri nazron mein basa'

(shree cannot believe what he is seeing so he closes his eyes for a bit)

Mere khyalon ki mallika

Mere khyalon ki mallika

Charoon taraf teri chaaiyan re

Tham le aake baayian

Charoon taraf teri chaaiyan re

The guys come out of their trance when agastya n aashi pull their sherwani'

Aashi n agastya (chirpingly): hum kaise lag rahe hai?

Chotu: acche'

Shree: supertop'

Samar: bahut pyare'

Avigyan: ekdum cute'

Rohan(to agastya): meri Xerox copy'

Rathore: bahut sweet lag rahe hai mere dono shaitan'

Aashi: arjun uncle?

Arjun: sabse cute'

Aashi: ree maasi se bhi zyada'

Arjun: haan baba'ree maasi se bhi zyada pyaari lag rahi princess'

Aashi: yes'finally aapne meri tareef ki thank you main bet jeet gayi ab toh ree maasi n mumma ko mujhe ps3 dilana padega'. (Giving arjun a peck) love you arjun uncle'.

Rohan n alisha (entering the centre stage'): thanks a lot ki aap sab hume bless krne yahan aaye but ye party kuch feekhi nahi lag rahi?

Sia: toh laga do apne style se tadka'.

Rolisha: toh lets start with the mix n match dance round 'hmm chaliye dekhte hai ki iss round ki 1st performance kaun dega'

Sia: itne easily nahi '

Alisha: got u di hum naam nahi batayenge aap guess krogi'

Sia: exactly'

Rohan: hmm inke bare mein kya kehna sabko samjhane mein hai ye no.1 but gusse se inke behtar hai dur hi rehna'. Guess who?

Sanvi: arjun aur kaun sabse zyada gussa toh usse hi aata hai na'

Alisha: ok ok ab inki partner' aankhen hai hirani jaisi muskan jaise khilta hua phool bachpan mein padha krte the inn jaisi pariyoon ki kahaniyaan in school'.

Choree: ye toh humari ree hi ho sakti hai' chal ja ree all the best'

Ariya take their position' n now all the lites are dimmed n a spotlite is focused on our beautiful couple who seem lost in each other's eyes'

The song starts to play'

Hey yeah'

Nahi malum hasrat hai

Ya tu meri mohhabat hai

Hmmm

Nahi malum hasrat hai

Ya tu meri mohhabat hai

Main itna jaanta hu bas

Main tujhko mangta hu bas

Main itna manta hu bas

Ki mujhkooo teri zarurat hai

Ha mujhkooo teri zarurat hai

Ki mujhkoo teri zarurat hai ha mujhko teri zarurat hai'

Yeh shaurat aur ye daulat khudayi de nahi sakte'

Ho meri tanhayee se mujhko rehai de nahi sakte'

Zamane ka hai tujh pe haq tere sapno pe haq mera siva mere kisko ye dikhai de nahi sakte '

Nahi malum ye haq hai haq hai

Hakekat ya humakat hai'

Main itna janta hu bas main tujhko maangta hu bas main itna manta hu bas ki mujhkoo teri zarurat hai ha mujhko teri zarurat hai'.

ki mujhkoo teri zarurat hai ha mujhko teri zarurat hai'.

The song ends with ariya posing romantically with arjuns arms wrapped around riya as if protecting n hiding her from the world'

Sanvi n shria: jun re eek dusre ko chod skte ho song khtam ho gaya aur dance krne ka maan hai toh hum song replay kar dete hai'.

Arjun(smirking): its ok sam mujhe kuch jalne ki smell yahan tak aa rahi hai'.

Sam: saale ruk batata hu tujhe'

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