FF collaboration: IPK.2.0-Doing it right, ch6-p136

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InvisibleSmile

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

OMG. I love this khushi - gotas on bikinis,wah ji wahhh!! Only someone like Khushi could come up with this idea. And Buaji being so coy ..along with Payal's explanation. All woven together wonderfully, I could imagine a scene like that. Maxine you have definitely set the standards high with this awesome beginning. I loved this Ch.

And the fact that you added Lavanya and Aman, made me love it even more. ASR's entry was fab & that dialouge like i said before so unlike him...but seems perfect here.

I can't wait to read the next part. I know it will be fabulous :D

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Ultimatewishes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Loved the concept ...And the Fact that 20 of IF's best writers , are in it together !

Wow so different ...Khushi , Gota's and Bikini's :) now that has to make me laugh

also thanks for putting up the update schedule!:)

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Manitaa

@Manitaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Gotas one bikinis! Now thats a first!

Ok so love the concept and absolutely loved this first installment.

You have some of the finest writers enlisted there for your upcoming parts and the first part was a wicked start. Look forward to more.

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haminasto

@haminasto

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Gote waali Goti!!!!!!!!!!
me wants KKG as my inner most stylist.
awesome!!!!!!!!

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Frigate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Loved the first chapter. Looking forward to more...

Can Khushi please wear a bikini and beat the living daylights out of Lav/Pam/Sim? Please?

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Loving it so far but lol at gota on a swimming suit

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Krishna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

What is this? In a totally mind-blowing, awesome way... Awesome! I can't wait to read more! This is going to be interesting!

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

hahaah gota wala swimsuits lol thats a new one

but great chapter and i like and see how we have the classic stage falling

im still amazed at how many writers are taking part 21 :O but i think its gonna be a great thing, definitely something unique and i know all of you guys will do a fab job with this x