FF collaboration: IPK.2.0-Doing it right, ch6-p136

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Polkadots78

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

You are off to a flying soaring start!!' Gote wala bikini!!!! That' the whackiest swim suit idea ever...but try as I might I am not able to imagine it..specially on Pam or Sim..and believe me I have a very active imagination 😃...but I am not going to give up...let me try again...*scrunches eyes and tries harder*

And do I read a mean Aman??? 😊

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norolim

@norolim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

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Brilliant Maxineji! I absolutely loved the starting! K's character has been etched wonderfully, and I can see exactly what you've written! I LOL'd at the part where K "ran around like a headless chicken" 😆

So, fashion show, eh?

Buaji made me grin the absolute most 😃 But poor her, Maxineji! You've made her very cunning, haina? If there is money, then why worry? 😆

Payalia is adorable, but we'll see what is to become of her 😃

And we have...ASR! His opening remark leaves me a little dubious. What is he going to be like? 😃

All in all, amazing start and I am definitely looking forward to see where this goes!

Avi

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Niki

@..Enchantress..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

I had always wanted Khushi to be a designer but the idea of designing swimsuits was just hilarious.
And that too gotewala bikinis to be particular...lol😆 I had never imagined that.
I can imagine Buaji's scandalized expression on knowing about Khushi's work🤣
I hv always loved ur writing style and seeing the writers involved in this ff I am sure this is gonna be treat reading it.
Starting was great👍🏼; I am waiting for more.

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: madmaxine
Yo..those who res'd-specially fellow authors-better unres...nahi toh...mummy swear...well...errmm...nothing really. Please un-res. 😳

Humne un-res kiya on page 2.

Can I get my gote-waala swimsuit now? 😆

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

RES. Boy am I late -_- Lol

Maxineji! I have to say, even though I had already read the chapter from before I still couldn't help but go back and read it again. And again!

It was seriously captivating!

The humor in Buaji and Khushi's conversation kept us going, the gotas on bikinis (of all things in the world) had our rapt attention, and Arnav's famous dialogue " Bhagwan jab deta hai, toh chappar phaad ke deta hai " had us craving for more!

Brilliant! -Pria

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

This fellow author will unres after 3:30 our time! I am sooo screwed! I have to write code out on the paper! Code! Who the fudge even does that? >.<

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

omg this is awesome... will be reading it now and then comment properly

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kshows_fangirl

@kshows_fangirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

I loved it. It was hilarious. Thoroughly enjoyed it! Thank u!

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zonera1

@zonera1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Wow!!A joint FF!!!

Lovely start!!

Do update soon!!

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justforuse

@justforuse

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

HAHAHAHAHAH GOTAS ON BIKINIS.

Bulls eye to describing aman's thoughts! That was really good!

I really need to stop reading things by you at work!

If only my boss knew what gotas are! I would have shared the story. ahahahha!

I loveddd it!!! It was so real...yet sarcastic! Good job maxine!

Arnav said that last line? Seriously? and did he give her a mock smile? I am dying to know where this is heading!!!

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