ARHI FF: MASTERCLASS THREAD 7- NEWCHAPTER 69 PG126

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Posted: 12 years ago

#731

Nice update! Love that the family is giving them privacy and also loved Payal and Akash's planning

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S003

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Posted: 12 years ago

#732

Hello Naina,

First of all, every chapter cannot be intense... because if it is not only is it exhausting to read but also to write.

Think about it like a meal you don't serve one heavy course after another the people on the table will not only be stuffed they will start to get sick (why are all my analigies about food?)

Also if this is light I don't know what your heavy will do to me... I love how you captured everyone one on the table... love love love your attention to random details for eg how Mamaji noticed Arnav smiling... best part ever...

Oh so NANI knows about Aman and Anjali... how very interesting... can't wait to se how this unfolds...

Desperately waiting on the next chapter...

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awroneema

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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#733

bingo...all luv birds got wat they wished!!...but wat abt nk!! kaunsi kabab mai haddi hoga bechara..

1. delhi ka kabab arnav-khushu
2. lackhnow ki kabab akash-payal or
3.austrelian kabab aman -anjali...

poor nk...even he shud get a partner ...!