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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sashashyam



I guess this is what one calls a bridging episode, which opens up several new tracks, but does not advance too far down any of them, leaving many options for the future. I liked the sense of uncertainty, the feeling that many things lay hidden behind the facade of the narrative, or else were only dimly visible in the shadows.


This update was quite important for the story.. because like you said, it opens up several tracks! I had to be very careful not to reveal more than what was necessary.. 😊

Originally posted by: sashashyam

There is the accident caused by Siddharth, who turns out to be Riya's potential devar. But who is the elder brother who fixes the case and gets Siddharth off? It is clearly not Karan, for Siddharth is afraid that he might get to know about it from Arjun. If there is yet another elder brother besides Karan, why is he not at the Mukherjees' with him and the rest of the family? Siddharth clearly spells future trouble, but to whom?


Hmm... below are some sentences from the update..

"Sid stood there speechless; he merely looked at his brother. What if Arjun spoke about his case in front of everybody?

Karan nodded his head at Sid to assure him that everything would be fine."

"It wasn't the arranged marriage that was bothering him, it was Karan that he didn't like. Their first meeting wasn't actually a pleasant one."

Through these sentences I gave an indirect hint that Karan was the guy who helped Sid. Here, Sid looked at his brother for assurance that he would take care of everything. Moreover, it wasn't just his brother.. his father and mother were also present there, not to forget Riya's family too.. He was afraid of them, not his brother.. Maybe I should have been more clear aunty.. sorry! 😊 But one thing is for sure.. you're not completely wrong. I cannot say anything as of now.. You have to wait for the story to unfold..😉

Originally posted by: sashashyam

Mr. Mukherjee's injury was obviously caused in an encounter with Sikandar, for Arjun says "
"Usse iss sab ki keemat chukani padegi sir.." he looked at Mr. Mukherjee's paralysed legs and Roshni's photograph, "zaroor chukani padegi.."This is another track that is only half visible as yet, but even so, this is progress, for there was nothing visible in Chapter 1, when I had noted your cryptic reference to it and sought clarifications in vain!

Riya and Arjun are still stumbling along in an emotional fog, the difference between them being that Riya knows her problem even if she will not acknowledge it, whereas Arjun does not at all understand what he feels, at least as of now. I do not see you making the fog lift any time soon, for then where would the conflict be?


Arjun and Riya are two extremely stubborn people.. and so lifting that emotional fog would definitely take a long time.. That's the whole plan.. *grinning* Take it slow.. but make it interesting..😉

Originally posted by: sashashyam


All in all, nice going, and I shall wait patiently for the various threads to be unspooled a bit more. before risking any predictions.

Shyamala Aunty


PS: Whatever the fulminations of Arjun and Rathod against the vegetable vendor for caving in and refusing to press charges, the fact is that he must be thanking all his ishta devata for having made Siddharth drive so rashly and hit him. It must have been a bonanza for him.

Thanks a lot for your wonderful comments aunty..! I'm glad you liked the update..! 😊

As for the vendor.. he was indeed a lucky guy! 😆 There is a saying, "Bhagvaan ke ghar mein der hain magar andher nahin.." God finally answered his prayers! 😉 Well, the vendor should be thanking Arjun and Rathore too.. if they wouldn't have insisted on pressing charges against Sid, Karan wouldn't have come all the way to 'help' him.. would he?

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow arjun understands riya so well
so riya doesnnt loves that karan ufff tension gone
want to see more ariya
loved family reunion
riya has such a cute lovely family
plzzz update sooonnn
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Posted: 12 years ago
OH i don't like karen either
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
My dear Rose,

Thanks for all the clarifications; they have answered all my questions but one.

If you are hinting at Karan having been the one who fixed the vegetable vendor, surely Arjun should have recognised him at once, since he had a verbal dust up with him in the hospital room? Why is there not the slightest sense of recognition on Arjun's part or not the least apprehension on Karan's part that Arjun might talk about his shenanigans to Riya and her family?

Despite this confusion, it was a very good chapter.

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by: ValleryRose


This update was quite important for the story.. because like you said, it opens up several tracks! I had to be very careful not to reveal more than what was necessary.. 😊


Hmm... below are some sentences from the update..

"Sid stood there speechless; he merely looked at his brother. What if Arjun spoke about his case in front of everybody?

Karan nodded his head at Sid to assure him that everything would be fine."

"It wasn't the arranged marriage that was bothering him, it was Karan that he didn't like. Their first meeting wasn't actually a pleasant one."

Through these sentences I gave an indirect hint that Karan was the guy who helped Sid. Here, Sid looked at his brother for assurance that he would take care of everything. Moreover, it wasn't just his brother.. his father and mother were also present there, not to forget Riya's family too.. He was afraid of them, not his brother.. Maybe I should have been more clear aunty.. sorry! 😊 But one thing is for sure.. you're not completely wrong. I cannot say anything as of now.. You have to wait for the story to unfold..😉


Arjun and Riya are two extremely stubborn people.. and so lifting that emotional fog would definitely take a long time.. That's the whole plan.. *grinning* Take it slow.. but make it interesting..😉

Thanks a lot for your wonderful comments aunty..! I'm glad you liked the update..! 😊

As for the vendor.. he was indeed a lucky guy! 😆 There is a saying, "Bhagvaan ke ghar mein der hain magar andher nahin.." God finally answered his prayers! 😉 Well, the vendor should be thanking Arjun and Rathore too.. if they wouldn't have insisted on pressing charges against Sid, Karan wouldn't have come all the way to 'help' him.. would he?

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sashashyam

My dear Rose,

Thanks for all the clarifications; they have answered all my questions but one.

If you are hinting at Karan having been the one who fixed the vegetable vendor, surely Arjun should have recognised him at once, since he had a verbal dust up with him in the hospital room? Why is there not the slightest sense of recognition on Arjun's part or not the least apprehension on Karan's part that Arjun might talk about his shenanigans to Riya and her family?

Despite this confusion, it was a very good chapter.

Shyamala Aunty


You're right aunty.. I should've been more clear about that.. those smirks weren't actually sufficient.. I guess! 😆 Will definitely keep this in mind.. 😊
Thank you so much!
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update..!!!!
lvd it..!!!
so riya is confused about karan..!!!
lvd bonding between arjun n riya's family..!!!
is riya's dad paralyzed due to sik??
ariya care fr each other bt dnt shw it..!!!😉
cant wait fr d nxt part..!!!
update soon..!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update.
Loved it
Thanx for pm dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
rose :


rash driving is something that i dont approve of, and the way siddharth nearly killed the vendor and smashed the ETF SUV, i was surprised as to why arjun and rathore didnt drag him to the ETF office to teach him a good lesson. loved the way you portrayed the vendor's dilemma, poverty is such a big issue for the poor people that they often prefer solving monetary problems than attaining justice for themselves. and karan ie riya's fiance is siddharth's brother ? then arjun is certain to have objections to riya getting married into such a " law-breaking" and "corrupt" family. loved the family dinner scenes , bdw, does Mr.Mukherji's paralysis has got anything to do with roshni's death ? update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update!! almost missed it 😭 becoz of all these shifting to fanfiction section thing 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
dont know how i happened to miss this...had been waiting for this all along yet i wonder how come i missed it😕
anyways it was an absolutely amazing update...😃...!
it was a big progress i must say😊...a lot of things came in front of us...n my doubts about riya's feelings are getting clearer with each passing update of yours😉😉...n yes arjun ko farak padta hai riya se😃😃...where u pointed out that he was delighted to hear that she's getting back i was more than thrilled😃😃!
n mujhe toh yeh karan banda shuru se hi kharab lag raha hai😛😛...god knows why riya agreed to marry him at the first place...but i'm sure our super cop shall handle the the needful😃
And the part which blew me totally was the fact that mr mukherjee's injury n roshni's murder is connected...its not just arjun who suffered after that incident but the entire mukherjee family😔
P.S what i loved the most was the fact that inspite of arju's tragic life he still had someone to call as his family...he isnt completely cut off from life...he cares for his families' happiness n a girl named ms. riya mukherjee effects him deep down😊
great job rose👏👏...this has been my personal favorite chapter of this ff till date...it loved it😃
update really soon...because now i dont think i'll be able to wait for long😛
Edited by ehmmbh_luvr - 12 years ago

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