FF: Destiny (Ch. 7 Updated on Pg. 36!)

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..pink..

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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#161

First thing first...Thank u so much for sooo long update.🤗
Awesome it is👏👏👏 You write so well. It seems as if m reading a mystery novel. The case is so very interesting. I am eager to know wats in that CD. 😲
And though Ariya scenes are small but I like them.😊
Plz update soon. 😃

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Awesome parts...

Ariya moments were interesting...though not much but the case definitely made up

for it..

its becoming more interesting and adds the mystery element too...

So the friends have a hand in all this...waiting for it to unfold...the reason and how?

post soon!

Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#163

The case is very interesting..
So Samar, Rita and Aniketh all are involved in it? That means Arjun was right about Riya's prejudice...
I am eagerly waiting to know whats in that DVD

Well about Ariya, I am really excited to know more about them

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ehmmbh_luvr

@ehmmbh_luvr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

heya sorry for the late comment but was off for a vacation...read all the latest parts n they were superb😃😃
i love the ariya nok jhok😃...but i want arjun to know thta riya's getting married...want to see his reaction😛😛...i know they care for each other but the big fat ego that they hold doesnt let them be casual or show thatt care😕😕...n i dont know why i feel that riya probably liked arjun back then when she came to know he's in love roshni...a tiny crush maybe...dont know probably i'm thinking to much😛
update soon plz...its going great👏👏

Edited by ehmmbh_luvr - 12 years ago

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Awesome update! Loved it! I can't wait to read more! what's in the DVD? Thanks for the update!

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Hey...lovely parts 5A, B and C.

I completely approve of the way you are first letting Riya sink her feet in ETF, it makes complete sense:)

Waiting eagerly for the next part...the tension between Arjun and Riya is just waiting to find a vent...glad that he is thinking about her bahviour.

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-Rajvi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Read both parts and like always they were superb...

The case was very interesting...Small bits of Arjun and Riya nok jhok was very good...waiting to know more about Arjun's and Riya's past...

Thanks for the PM..
Post soon!

Edited by rajvi20 - 12 years ago