ArHi FF -True Lies- Chapter 3 | Page 31 - Page 23

Originally posted by: arshiyakanishka

Avi u've a keen eye for detail...d way u described d crime scene was awesome.Also d way d relationship between Rushil n Khushi was written was subtle but effective.

Finally Khushi n Arnav meet each other.N d way d first meeting happened... to say d least was interesting.Arnav was intrigued by Khushi n started decoding her in his mind.N his conclusions were quite insightful.

Loved d long update...now looking forward to more of these beautiful updates.

Originally posted by: Aanchal15

Firstly, Avi...All the very best for your impending Exams!!! Your choice to pursue Psychology was so apt...I always felt you penned down emotions beautifully..as if you could read a person...flawlessly...

May all your dreams come true!!!

Yup, it was baffling to read about the place being so pristine despite a messy murder ...the murderer seemed shrewd ...

And, applause for intricate description of the scene of the crime...

I did wonder about the ethnicity when you mentioned green eyes of the victim...cuz, it is rare among Indians...Rushil-Khushi bond is endearing...

Asif ...exudes power and camaraderie..his demeanor towards Khushi spoke volumes...the protective instinct laced with liberal dosage of mischief...I already like him...

Arnav senses that Khushi is arcane ...his perspicacity was impressive ...I concur with him..it is going to be fun, indeed ...unravelling both ,...her traits and the case in hand...

Update next when you have less on your plate..shall wait..patiently..., and, thank you for the PM 😊

Originally posted by: kbtr

I. LOVED. IT. !!!!!!!!!!! FAN.TAS.TIC. !!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG! I think I'm becoming an addict of your work!

I love this FF and I love that Kushi is on an equal footing with Arnav (for once, yeah!!) I love Kushi's personality (what little we have seen of it) and her character.

I loved getting into Arnav's head and having an insight into what he was thinking. About Kushi! Fire and ice! WOW! Haha! I cannot wait for the sparring to begin! i would like to find out though why he is so jaded. At the beginning, it was kind of mentioned that his work had made him that way. Is there any thing else? He is just too cynical. And actually so is she. Maybe, it is the work they do that made them like that. But she's so much younger than he is (she maybe mature too, but still...) I hope they are able to find solace from each other. That would be so explosive!

My hats off to you and your sister. You have some great concepts and write very well. Thanks for the PM. and good luck in your exams. Of course, your studies come first, no q's about that!

Will wait for the next update after your exams. Good luck! Cheers to you and yours for the New Year!

Originally posted by: lakharnshi88

psychology...superb choice! i'm sure you are going to love it!

as for the update...well... i absolutely loved it!! the attention to detail, the un-worded challenges and cross-analyzing happening at the same time! I bet while Arnav was busy analyzing her, she MUST have done the same (to some extent!). Cant wait to read the next one!!
Interesting...VERY interesting!!

thanks for the PM