MohiNi SS : I wanna be with u { Last chpt Pg. 56 }

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pranita1202

@pranita1202

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

nice one

specially dhak dhak 😆

waiting 4 their covo

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Ria

@chand1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: surprising
nice upd😉...title is good😳

Thanks😊

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Ria

@chand1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: coolfizzy
My oh My...
1st of al...i luved ur DP...hayyee!! beautiful it z n d signature too...missing d old days again!!! Thnk u tons yaar! I noe! I love my DP...found in DKDM creation's corner#1😃 nd even the sigs...❤️

Coming 2 d update...
Oh My Mahadev!!!
actually while reading my heart ws going on dhak dhak dhak dhak!!! Really? :p
i cn actually imagine both of dem their... Awww...😃
hayee!!!
Beautiful...

Plz yaar...try 2 make sum longer updates... I'm really lazy to type long updts re😆
Vaise agar chote chote updates kr rahe ho toh fir jaldi jaldi update karo! to compensate... ;) Ya, next to next week onwards I'll update twice a week. But not now due to my exams😊
Plz plz plz try 2 update soon...
Waiting 4 ur nxt update PM :)

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Regards,
Soumya :)

Thnk u bunches nd bunches nd bunches Soumya!🤗❤️

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Tahitien-moon

@Tahitien-moon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Lovely dear and tfs for pm

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Neha

@howler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

SOOO SORRY for commenting late,

I visited my hometown for several days,

so wasn't that active in IF..😳..

Okay now coming to your update...

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Superb..What more can I say...

[quote]Anant took a few steps forward and waitned for the right time for him to enter the stage. Right now, Anant was standing next to Aarti. She slowly looked and him and soon enough not realizing what she was doing, she kept staring at him. She was lost in him! Suddenly, realizing whom she was looking at, Aarti tried diverting her mind on other things. But she cudn't. Her heart wentDHAK - DHAK. DHAK- DHAK.[/quote]

Loved this part the most...

Can't wait to read more...

Please do update soon, and please do keep me PMed...

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Bewakoof

@Bewakoof

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

so nice update yaar!!! 😳

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

this part was a cutie pie
but one thing i want to ask is anant is like a shy one???????
n arti didn't said sry to him...kya arti acha khasa baat karne ka chance gawa diya...
in hope to hv glimpse of him she kept on stairing at him...ha just imagine what must be the background music in that scene
''deewana h dekho thoda yaar wo
sambhalo sambhalo na pyar ho''
but kinna chotu part tha...n by the way ur title was too gud ha...
update soon (a long one)
luv u :-)

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Ria

@chand1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Angel13
nice update

thnx😊

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Ria

@chand1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr
hey Ria !nice update!totally rocking👍🏼wait for the conversation between Anant and Aarti. Anyways update soon. May Mahadev and Ma Durga bless you.😊

Thnk u SO much rimi🤗😃